I very much liked your story line with Hermione and Draco and I liked the similarities to Romeo and Juliet but what I thought was quite odd was the characters in general. They were quite OOC, maybe you intended them to be such and if you did then it was wonderful. But if not I don't think Ron would ever do something so drastic to Hermione as beating her. And Hermione is too much of a strong independent women to kill herself over someone she loves. But that's just my opinion. Taking those things aside, I must say it was well written and a good, interesting story line. Well done, you have quite the talent :)

a bit too short this chapter

this chapter is too short sorry

wow it cool how you do your story from different points of view

now were getting somewhere haha so far so good

ooooh i think i have an idea of what ron and hermione were doing hahaha so far so good

I KNEW RON WAS IMPERIUSED! Lucius Malfoy sucks! I wish, before killing himself, he would have taken him DOWN! (Slams fists onto table and fire blazes in eyes). I'll look for more, maybe happier, stories from you.

I like the details of the story! And Harry is as he would be in the books! But Ron is a little OOC. Could he be imperiused? Also, I like how you described the relationship between Draco and his father.

Wow!! It was amazing!! It did make me cry!!

I think so far this is the best story I had read on mugglenet

Carrie