Reviewer: Scarlet Night
Date: 11/22/07 19:39
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

Who takes their sister to a dance?! Harry's gone mental and Ron's just being stupid. It's good so far.

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/11/06 0:24
Chapter: Valentines Day

awww that was cute!

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/11/06 0:24
Chapter: Valentines Day

awww that was cute!

Reviewer: ron_and_mione
Date: 06/03/06 10:45
Chapter: Valentines Day

ah its so sweet and lovely. Keep up the good work

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/28/06 12:42
Chapter: Valentines Day

This is so sweet!!!!! Keep writing!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/28/06 12:41
Chapter: The Yule Ball

Awww...so much fluff!

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/28/06 12:40
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

I like it! I know how hard it is to make it longer, but keep trying!! Great fic!

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 12/23/05 22:00
Chapter: Valentines Day

...Indeed...

Reviewer: Sudha53
Date: 08/16/05 14:47
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

I think this story was sweet, but maybe could have been elaborated upon to kind of hold the audience in their seats, and teasing them with a little more that they could wait for, meaning that maybe creating a slight problem in the midst of the plot may have been a little better so that the reader would kind of wonder what would happen next to get them together, instead of just having the facts. but for your first attempt, you did a good job.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff
Date: 08/03/05 14:58
Chapter: Valentines Day

I really liked this. It was very sweet and to the point. I liked the fact that when they first got together they just admitted to liking each other - that felt more true to their characters. Not overdone at all. Great job.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff
Date: 08/03/05 14:58
Chapter: Valentines Day

I really liked this. It was very sweet and to the point. I liked the fact that when they first got together they just admitted to liking each other - that felt more true to their characters. Not overdone at all. Great job.

Reviewer: Ravensgryff
Date: 08/03/05 14:48
Chapter: Valentines Day

I really liked this. It was very sweet and to the point. I liked the fact that when they first got together they just admitted to liking each other - that felt more true to their characters. Not overdone at all. Great job.

Reviewer: Hermionebubblez
Date: 03/04/05 7:07
Chapter: Valentines Day

how could you do this 2 me?!?!?! That was a cliff ending!!! *sobbing gently* Any ways a epliloge or some thing would of made it beter. but its good the way you wrote ity. but i have a question. did you write it like that so we could make up our own ending?

Author's Response: i guess you could make up your ending...idk. im working on another [romance, r/hr] story its called 'the journal' i havent posted it yet, but will try to soon! i have a humor called 'the secret files on ronald weasley' glad you liked it

Reviewer: Hermionebubblez
Date: 03/04/05 7:00
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

I like this story its really interesting. Its really a good story.

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 01/26/05 22:35
Chapter: The Yule Ball

That is so freaking sappy, I love it! Aww...that was really good, I swear Shrek was coming out with the really really! lol. I loved it, great job...I always had trouble with writing dance moves! lol. Great job! Peace Out!!

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 01/26/05 22:29
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

Okay...my turn! He he he. The first chapter is really good, some GoF stuff in their, very cool. But Ron taking his sister, totally reminds me of my older brothers, they told me if I don't find a date I would have to take them...ha ha ha, I found one! lol. Not bad, I really like the dresses, very cool and pretty. Peace Out!!

Reviewer: Sorceress
Date: 01/26/05 20:11
Chapter: Valentines Day

This is very good fic for your first ever! This is terrific! You should have read my first fic (it's not on this site, it was on the old MNI), it was terrible...

Reviewer: HarryisourKing
Date: 01/10/05 11:12
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

Keep it up! And read mine when it finally comes in. I think it's rather good for my first.

Reviewer: Daniela
Date: 11/27/04 18:18
Chapter: The Yule Ball

I thought this was excellent. I especially liked the twist of switching dates - I thought that would happen! Good work, and post soon!!!!!!!!!!! :D Review mine when and if it ever comes out!!

Reviewer: Daniela
Date: 11/27/04 18:16
Chapter: The Approaching Ball

I like this story a lot! Keep up the good work! :D I like the whole R/H and H/G thing - can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on another story, I don't know when it will be out! I think its going to be a humor fic. Anyway thank you again! Happy Holidays!

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