This is good. I loved the last paragraph, it was fantastic! The first few seemed to have long sentences that were too long to rhyme, but still, you're pretty good at making things rhyme! I've read your sorting hat songs and theyre excellent. I'm not into Hermione/Draco, but it's an interesting way of looking at it. It's good to see Hermione doesn't seem to be returning the feeling, because that is totally not possible, so I don't really get stories like that. Any way, well done!
Author's Response: *L* I don't go for that ship either, but a challenge is a challenge ^_^ Glad to hear it's convincing despite my lack of conviction :)
Hi, it's me again (that was me, Moonbright, down there.) I feel okay in submitting another review because I'm practically a different person--I didn't even know who you were, I just liked your poem. I still like it. No constructive criticism at this time, amazingly enough! Have a nice day! *D*
Author's Response: CA *L* Thanks! Not in the mood to nitpick? *grin* know exactly how you feel ... it gets tiring after nitpicking a chapter ^_^ Same to you. ^_^
Oh, poor Malfoy. It was really sweet in a bitter, sorrowful sort of way. He likes her, but he can't act on it because he's..him. And he hates himself for that. Great Job!
Author's Response: Wow thanks... and here I thought I can't write romance ... maybe I ought to give this genre another try. ^_^
Wow. That was convincing. I actually read this about a month ago and when I finally registered I still remembered it so now I'm reviewing it. So basically I really like it.
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so ... I didn't think anyone noticed this poem since it got the least amount of reviews and reads compared to the others. Always glad to hear that someone likes it. ^_^
Thankyou so much for reviewing my story, i figured since you were nice enough i would check yours out and review because u don't seem to have any reviews as of yet! I would condier using it, but I'm already a big fan of Hilary Duff and some of her songs are really fitting for my story (check them out in Chapter 4) but i have another idea, if you could please email me and i'll state my request there! ;) using all that technical stuff now =-D
Author's Response: *L* I don't mind ... maybe because I write for myself ^_^ ... never really cared if people does not like it (although its nice to know people read). I like it better if my fic has massive 'read' counts. My epic fic have plenty of reads but little review -- the sorting song one got 5 reviews but just a few reads ... I'm a lot happier with my epic one ^_^ ... Chapter 4? What about 2?