Every time I read this story it takes my breath away. You took a very heavy subject and made it an absolutely beautiful moment...this is definately one of my favorite H/Hr fics!
that was really sweet! i am sure any decent harry potter fan has been questioning whether harry will enjoy kill Voldemort or will he be utter repulsed with himself? I give you double thumbs up on this one: one for stating your thoughts clearly and making it a h/hr!
that was soooo good! and the feelings you described were so heartfelt, i almost cried!! keep it up :D
Wow...that was...very good...wow...like awesome...
Damn that was a good story!! Haven't read a great one like this in awhile!! Keep up the good work!!
-=-Libby
Woah...I am...wow. That was...wow. I could feel the emotions coming out of the screen as I read them. I could feel how Harry was feeling when Hermione made him think about all of the Weasley's and his friend's dead. Wow, I can't think of another word to desribe this...because there is no word to describe it. I'll have to invent one that comprehends with how good this is.
Much ♥,
J-Mo
AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Exclamation Point Bandit
Your writing is amazing!!! I really LOVE the one your writing "Avenged Sevenfold" Please keep writing!! I give it a 10/10!
You never cease to amaze me, another spectacular story. I really wish that I had talent such as yours, I can't describe for beans and your character development is just awesome. Thanks again for another great story.
Breath-taking! This was absolutly amazing! 10/10 for the best H/Hr one shot I've ever read. Barbara
you are a brilliant writer. i aspire to be like you. excuse me while i make you the *1st* favorite author on my list. all of your stories are great. i feel cheesy- you go, girl. or guy..? i doubt it.
oh and i just have to say... dont listen to "Ginnyrocks" cuz im sorry, but "too much agony"??? i say: go home ginnyrocks. continue writing like u do cuz u rock
U are now one of my favourite authors. You write so well it's unbelievable! I am going to read all your stories. You rock
OH. MY. GOOD. LORD. GOD. This... this is brilliance. True brilliance. Wow. I have read and re-read this about 100 times, and it still touches me. I cried. It's Amazing (note the "A") how you can capture that- and what Hermione did- brilliant. Total shock. Beautiful.
Okay, I didn't mean to be such a put downer. (is that evan a word?) anyway it was very wonderful! but you do see why I'm giving you a nine, right? and I would just to make you know that what you said about Ginny, Hagrid, Mrs. Weasley, Mr. Weasley, Ron and Hermione being dead just gives me the CHILES!!!!!!! (Oh and just because I'm not a H/Hr dose not mean I do not ADORE Hermione.) It was still very good. just next Fanfic don't put to much Agony in it. just some advice.
I would of given you a ten, but it was filled with to much agony. I really liked it though. if you haven't made it so agony-ish I would for sure have given you a ten. I love the kind of Romance words you put in it. I used to be a H/Hr shipper but is Now a H/G. but I love the stuff you put in. one of the reason I'm no longer a H/Hr is because theres to much Agony! Anyway I almost adored the way Hermione helped Harry!
Hi!! I first read this story on Portkey and I fell in love with it. I mean, this really was a GREAT story!! You got the emotions down so well and.......everything. I think you are a fantastic writer, and that's why I read this again on here, even though, like I said before, that I had already read this on Portkey. Anyway, again, great story!! I hope you'll produce more!! Have a great day!! HBP, one day away!! Caity
Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! The way you portrayed the emotion changes so rapidly was amazing, and I think that you made them a really convincing couple. That was so sweet of a story. 9/10
