Wow! I’m shocked! All the way through I longed to hate it, but simply couldn’t. great idea for a story. That idea would never in four billion years be written in any J.K Rowling book, but nevertheless, entertainment value, top marks!!! I don’t understand how you managed to keep a plot so unrealistic as that believable. The lust making under the tree was divine! The connotations used (with the extreme weather) was exceptionally dexterous. Powerful, intense and to the point. Enjoyed it very much. (I’m a very harsh reviewer) 6 & a half, out of ten…. (That’s exceedingly good-in my best mr Kipling voice-) p.s, just out of pure curiosity, are you female? age? Nationality?

I love it and cant wait to read more please update soon also i love the twist

Great story! Update! :) I usually actually like SS/HG (for some strange, demented reason) , but this one blew me away!!!

Definately a change from R/Hr or H/Hr! Interesting, very interesting.

This was a very sweet story.

Excellent! I usually really dislike HG/SS stories but this one was really well done! Once again Excellent job! I look forward to reading more from you!

Amazing! wonderfully delicious! Update soon!

I loved it. As soon as i read that Snape and Hermione had a daughter i thought 'this is the end to the marriage' but im glad Severus had the sense to keep his wouth shut. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :D