Reviews For Fool Me Once...
Reviewer: 7 11 all the way
Date: 06/02/05 16:06
Chapter: Into Pieces

first to review! good job with this chapter as always!with sirus and his leg agh! i liked how u explained mariam! good job! i love this story!

Reviewer: potterized176
Date: 06/02/05 14:51
Chapter: The Healer Returns

Wow! I absolutely love this story! Keep up the amazing work and update soon! I really wanna know what happens next.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Be on the lookout out for new chapters

Reviewer: 7 11 all the way
Date: 05/28/05 21:22
Chapter: Can't Change the Past

i loved it! it has a great plot! loved the writing very detailed! but i just wanted correct a cuple of things sry im a freak at catching them! Peter, said Lupin, cut off his own finger to make it seem as if Sirius had blown him to bits, and murdered the other muggles. Believe me **Lily, I thought so too, but I was wrong, we all were. *** isnt suppose to be miriam Miriam was now trembling visibly from head to toe, her chest heaving in short, ragged breaths. Her eyes seemed glazed over, as though she were in shock and not really able to see anything, wide and unblinking. ***He head moved slowly from side to side, relaying the clear but silent message: No. ***i think its suppose to be she i just wanted to let you no!

Author's Response: Oh Wow!! Thanks so much for the tip, you can be sure I fixed it ASAP. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Joang07
Date: 05/27/05 20:44
Chapter: Can't Change the Past

I liked it a lot!

Author's Response: I'm so glad! Many thanks for the first review!

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