Reviews For Fool Me Once...
Reviewer: Lupins moon
Date: 10/13/07 20:16
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Its really good and sad it made me cry soo much and thats rare me crying so kuddos.

Reviewer: endavenue
Date: 10/13/07 2:50
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Oh my lord Ive been waiting so long and Kept checking back for an update ... and Finally!

THANK YOU THANK YOU for getting back to this, great chapter can't wait to see whats next ... Please don't wait so long this time though... Please.

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 09/23/07 6:35
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Just moments ago I happened to stumble across your reply to my review some months ago… after reading it, I’ll say: first of all apology accepted, even though we don’t want u to apologize for an delay because since I have written a couple stories myself, I can absolutely understand how busy life can be.

I, however, would like to say sorry if I tried to hurry you in any way. It’s just that I’m so *sobs* stuck up at this story, I cant help myself!

I have searched for months to find an absolutely mind-blowing Sirius-OC fiction, and I think it’ll take at least a million years to get this one out of mind now that I finally have my hands on it!

What I suggest is that maybe u update ur author page with an approximate date.

Your response also made my throat constrict, oh u poor…
I don’t noe if my suggestions will help u much but I’d do it anyway.

Crickette I think, you should let Miriam moan a bit more and then get Sirius out of the pensieve. I sometimes see myself picturing Sirius looking at Miriam with a mixture of accusation and apology… because it is his fault as much as it is hers. But since I have no idea where you have hidden the child *glares mockingly* I cannot be specific in plot bunnies… I however would love to have Miriam tell her story face to face to Sirius and him not getting to know through the pensieve. This time u could really give Miriam a break down and then show us how really mind-blowing Sirius can be. *winks*

Your story since the start was unique and very well written, as much as I want it to continue forever, you could give it an end in maybe six or seven more chapters with a simple loving couple ending. I assure you, with the way you write and combined with ur talent for descriptions and characterization, Fool Me Once is probable one of the best fic on MNFF!

We all love you! Keep up ur brilliant work!

I hope if my suggestions did not help at least my words encouraged you.

Awaiting anxiously.


P.S: Fool Me Once is nominated in the OC romance category for QSQ! I hope u win! Cheers for Crickette

Reviewer: SiriusBlack1113
Date: 09/14/07 0:35
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

This was the most amazing, best, the most well written fanfitction I have ever read. I am speechless. Your writing is perfect and the storyline is AMAZING. I have no other words for it. Please Please Please update soon. Now I have some condolance for the fact that JK Rowling killde off all my favorite characters. You are an amazing writer. Thank you.

Reviewer: Final Fantasy VM
Date: 08/21/07 16:27
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

WOW this story is absolutely INCREDIBLE :O the accuracy, characterization, and plot are all equally amazing... a job well beyond well done *applauds with vigor* :D
I'm looking forward to your next update!!! :)

Reviewer: Final Fantasy VM
Date: 08/21/07 16:26
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

OMG this story is absolutely AMAZING :O the accuracy, characterization, and plot are all equally wonderful... a job well beyond well done *applauds* :D
I really am looking forward to your next update :)

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 07/17/07 22:05
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

oh my god. i loved this story when i read it like a year ago, and i waited and waited for an update. i just reread the whole thing in like a day, and i am still loving it. update please! great story.

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 07/16/07 17:42
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Oh, dear. =( updated! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm not quite sure I can see Miriam getting drunk to deal with her grief, but you wrote it pretty well. Now I'm just anxious to see where the story goes!

Reviewer: Green Eyes
Date: 07/11/07 22:46
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

it took so long to update that i had to read the WHOLE story over again, so that i remembered what happened. BUT, it was worth it! You are an extremely talented writer and I hope that you continue! I don't mean to pressure you, but please try to update the next chapter soon (...or atleast more quickly than last time). You rock! Your story is fantastic! Thanks for your time!

Reviewer: kakashi88
Date: 07/06/07 23:07
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Next chapter please! :)

Reviewer: Snarkie
Date: 07/01/07 19:08
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

I'm so happy you finally updated this story... I've been waiting forever :) I liked this chapter very much, but poor Miriam :( Keep writing because I can't wait to see how this story turns out!

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/01/07 11:32
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

You should have seen the surprise on my face when I got an e-mail saying your story had been updated. Surprise turned to utter glee and I read it immediately. So we're still in memories. I can't say I'm completely shocked at Miriam's actions. We'll see what happens in the next chapter. I'm hoping you'll update sooner this time because that was a painfully long time to wait for your next chapter. Please, please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: DarkHarryPotterGirl
Date: 06/29/07 17:15
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Hey, it's been a very long time since your last chapter but im excited to know that it is not over.

A small chapter, this was, but a good one. Don't stop writting! You are really good.

Reviewer: solemnlyswear_x
Date: 06/29/07 14:29
Chapter: Firewhiskey Blues...

Poor, poor Miriam. =( And now she has to find out what's happened to Sirius.

Great chapter - can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: solemnlyswear_x
Date: 06/27/07 14:40
Chapter: Say Goodbye

Oh wow. Did you really have to end on such a cliffhanger? =P

Hah, but really, this story is amazing. Miriam feels like such a real character, and I can't help but wish she had been in the actual books. She and Sirius make quite the couple.

I love that you've included the memories from Hogwarts and after, because it shows so much of Miriam's character and her back story. My favorite scene had to be when they're in the Shrieking Shack, but this very last chapter had me close to tears, which is always a sign of good writing. =)

I'm thrilled beyond words that you're updating, and I know there are so many other readers who will be too.

Awesome, wonderful, amazing job!

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 06/14/07 7:02
Chapter: Say Goodbye

Crickette, trust me i read the reviews of angry, anxious and loyal reviewers and i kinda feel that u must atleast answer to any of us...
u cant possibly be stopping at this stage. annoying a sirius fan can turn into a big rebel...
its one of the best fic i read though... i first night i read it... lets say you kept me awake the whole night wondering about barking dogs, leather coats and astronomy… no charms classes. Hehe

plz ... do something abt this...

Author's Response: Alright. You've got me. Please accept my sincerest apologies. Here's the thing: I knew where I wanted this story to go. I've got it all planned out, almost every detail in my head. But this one chapter caught me. I had my destination in mind and was completely displeased with how I had planned to get there. Should Miriam go busy herself at the hospital or what? So instead I buried myself into my studies at college and tried to ignore the pang of guilt I felt each time I received a review. I've heard your annoyance, your plea's, the questions, the anger, the frustration, and the feelings of betrayal, and did my best to ignore it all. I'm so sorry. Can I possibly make it up to you all? Maybe by updating? Which I have. With a new chapter. After all this time I'd love to hear what you all think. And again: I'm sorry.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 04/28/07 6:36
Chapter: Winter Heat

I wonder what's miriam's secret...THey are so cute...

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 04/27/07 22:42
Chapter: Healing Powers

OHHHHHHH.....this almost made me cry. It was so so so sweet, and beautiful! Amazingly amazing job!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 04/27/07 22:23
Chapter: The Midnight Menagerie

This is really great, you know...

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 04/27/07 21:47
Chapter: Can't...or won't?

Ohh... hehe...loved the ending...

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