omg...best fanfic ever!!!!! when r u updating?????
Author's Response: Hopefully every few days for the next few weeks! Thanks for the review!
::Sigh:: havign the same problems as you, except my chapters 7-12 are good to go, but *mimicks Mod* I do not have the right spacing between my paragraphs.* Sorry for ragging on you, and thanks for tkaing the time to write such an honest, lengthy reply! I'll be sure to do the same to you, If you'de check out my baby, Malicious Intentions....;-) Completely voluntary, of course. It's not like you have a broiken like like our dear Sirius to stop you... oh wait...it didn't stop him. Now you have no excuse!! ~Steph* PS- Bring it on! ::straps on head gear::
One word: Wow!!! I was a little worried when I saw you this ad saw you added in an original character into the original storyline but everything you do kind of fits and works. I like it ALOT!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Believe me, I was a little worried too. But I'm hoping the AU warning will give me at least a little freedom in this area. I am trying to keep it as true to the tale as possible, so I don' t think it will get *too* out there. Thank you for the review, and I hope you enjoy the rest!
how awesome!! too bad dumbledore wouldn't let him grow up with her! that would've kicked ass! can't wait for chapter 6!! 10!
Author's Response: Yes, but then he wouldn't be the angsty, soulful Harry that we've grown to know and love (hehe). Trust me, I can't wait either. I've got this horrible image in my mind of all of the chapters I've got written up, standing in this HUGE line, crossing their arms, checking their watches, and tapping their feet in impatience! I do hope you all think it's worth the wait. Many thanks for the review!
OMG!! She's his godmother! I think JKR said Harry wasn't ging to have a godmother, but WHO CARES! MIRIAM IS HIS GODMOTHER! For some reason I'm so excited! Aww! When she hugged his in a 'maternal' way i was like ::Aww!:: It's like having another Mum! Kudos! ~10*
LOL okay! This is just the angle in need for my SBFC edition. It will have nothing to do with this, of course (as you'll see) but it has inspired me ;) The thing I was desperatly trying to remember..again was when you (Chapter 1) wrote Mr. Weasley puffing and running towards Harry and talking at the same time, she doesdn't describe what they're doing in () she writes what they say- puffed mr Weasley- they continues what they say. =) hope you don't hate me for it! ~10*
OK figured it out =) it was ' by OWL post' in the first chapter. OWL refers to Ordinary Wizarding Level, not 'owl' as in the bird... anything original to the magical world thanks to JKR is capitalized, think about it.. animals, spells, odd objects. It shoud be Dementors and Owl Post. Sorry, i just had to nit pick, It's just so 8unfair sometime how thye pick up the mallest little things sometimes! ~10 sorry there wasn't mush to rave about this chapter ... this story is on my favourtie for a while now!
Okay.. now I'm kinda thinking its between 5th year and 6th year.. but Sirius would bedead by then! That was just the Pre-HBP warning you put on it =S uh.. oh yeah. I'm really sorry (something lukewarm coming up) but the tags you put in < p > you don't need to, and when u do it causes weird spacing that DOES make it more suspensful having to scroll down for that little tad of a second, but it's also a little annoying =( sorry. Also some stuff is spelt wrong, and there's something about the first chapter I can't quite remember...argh later. As for the rest of the writing, I'm glad you updated, coz soon there will be another chapter for me to read! To chapter 3! ~10*
This story is really intruging! I know exactly what a nice long review does for the self-esteem, so here goes: I'm not sure exactly when this is set, I'm guessing (just from reading the Hearing and when Harry said Oliver had just retired from Quidditch Captain at Hogwarts) that this is an alternate ending to Harry's Wizengamot Hearing? (sorry, not a fabulous speller =-/ ) Either way, seeing Sirius alive is any girls dream, so well done! On to the next Chapter!! ~10
Update soon, plzthnx! I love this story so very much, what with the going back in time and jumping forward. You haven't made it too hard to follow, so I thank you for that. Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: So sorry for the delayed response! I'm so excited that you're enjoying the story, and so very relieved people are able to follow it okay. I appreciate the feedback, so let me know if things get too complicated. I've just sent chp. 6 in for review, and chp. 7 is all ready to be sent off right after, so check back for updates!
I couldn't wait for their meeting and now... yes!! So intense, just how I would imagine a woman that Sirius loved to react and vice versa.
I love this story! It seems so promising; your writing style and the plot have me so very intrigued.
Still awesome! Everything in this story is getting so crazy, it's so cool lol. That was one heck of a dream Miriam had there.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my attempt at a bit of symbolism, hehe. Consider the dream a little hint into the future...or the past, perhaps?
What a wonderful opening chapter. Very well written and so descriptive. It did what a first chapter should do; I'm hooked.
Author's Response: I couldn't ask for a better response. Thank you!
Ha ha! I love Miriam. She's so down-to-earth. And HA! to Sirius! Bwaa ha ha haaa....a wager? Ooh, I've used this one in a story myself, and have seen it used before....Love it!
Author's Response: Hey, who can resist a good bet, right? I'm so glad you enjoy the story! Yes, I figured Sirius is already pretty fabulous enough...two fabulous people would just be overkill (not to say Miriam doesn't have her strengths, of course.)! Keep checking back for new postings, and thanks!
I really liked this chapter. But I'm still a little confused about how Sirius got all those injuries. I'll definitely be reading this over again. (Ah, the fast reader says 'tis a blessing and a curse in one.)
Ah, yes, and I sent the review too soon. I must comment, again, on how much I like how you introduced Miriam. And I really liked the reactions she and Sirius had when they saw each other---There's Sirius, going, "Yay! My girl's back here with me!" and Miriam's thinking, "Um... NO!"
I love it! I'm surprised this isn't getting more reviews! Can't wait to read the next chapter....
I really like this. You introduced your character in a unique way. Most of the time authors don't have the skill to ease their characters into the story. A girl pops up and suddenly starts gushing about how she was best friends with Harry's parents and then she sees the Marauders (well, what's left of them, not including the traitor and the dead one) and it's almost sickening to read it, because that isn't what would happen in real life. I'm intrigued. And will keep reading!
great great great! loved it! sirus beting mariam!and mariam telling him no! thats an ego deflater to mr.black! love it! exellcent job!*10*
Author's Response: You guys make me want to write and write and write nonstop! Thank you so much, keep an eye out for upcoming chpaters int he very near future!