How come you have three of the same story posted up on the syt? (ps. keep up the good work) A
I don't usually submit reviews but I really think this is a special occaision. I really love your story; it really keeps me on the edge of my seat and hanging out for more. Right now I am really worried about Miriam and her baby!!! You've been doing a great job writing this story; it's probably the best romance fanfic I've ever read! Plus, you always update reguarly, which is better than some of the other writers! So anyway, I just thought I'd leave a review to tell you what a great job you're doing, and hope you keep up the great work cause I can't wait for the next chapter! Your story is probably my favourite on the whole of MuggleNet Fanfiction :)
Wow, until this moment I didn't really think about what Sirius and Hagrid did that night the Potters died, so it was great that you wrote about it in detail. Although I think in Prisoner of Azkaban Hagrid mentioned that Sirius actually put up a fight to take Harry with him, but since this story is about Miriam and Sirius, it works. For me it was suspenseful to read who was walking up the stairs of the house because I thought it would be Hagrid first, then Sirius. Good job, hope you had a good Thanksgiving and update soon!!
oh man, i was listening to evanescence's 'my immortal' while reading this chapter as well...not a good combination, now i'm feeling sad so that means you've done a good job. 10/10. can't wait for your next chapter.
Right now I'm beyond words... just wow... I cried while I was reading this chapter; it's dripping with really powerful emotions. Kudos to you, Crickette, I envy your writing ability in every way :) the rating scale doesn't go high enough to properly rate this chapter because i'd give it at least a 20 out of 10 ;)
aaaw so sad! u really r a good writer. u seem to give me the right feelings and thoughts and eveything! keep it up!
That was wonderful!!!!! It was bloody briliant. It's like I'm on teh sideline, watching it. It it great. Please, I can't wait till your next chapter!
that was soooooo...........GREAT!! u are just brillant. u have talent, seriously!! i'm not even kidding!! I Hate sad chapters. i never thought i could possible like a sad chapter like this. But i had so much fun reading it. I mean, it was sad but u cant help loving. Crickette......i salute u!!! oh and u know what will please me even more.....if u put up the next chapter soon *wink.wink*. But,hey, no pressure :)
awesome. so so awesome. and so believable too. oooooooooo icant wait til sirius finds out that miriam was PREGNANT!!! GAH o my the drama the drama. hahah (: what a pleasure to read. i hope your next chapter isn't far in wriitng. this chap was such a cliff!
I really have to say this chapter's great.. you are building up the character Mirriam and fit her perfectly to JK's story.. and Sirius's life... so great... and adorable!
I really love the way the story sticks so plausibly to canon, and how realistic and mature the characters are. I absolutely cannot wait until the next chapter comes up!
That was wonderful. The joy of having a baby, but then the sadness of death. How could she go through all of that. How could she watch taht again, wait, she was watching it, right? It was bloody briliant!
that was an amsing chapter!!! How do u do that? i mean, u make me feel like i am in the story!!! I think u would make a great prfessional writer!!!! :) i hope u are planning to put the next chapter up soon**grin**oh and great job....again:)
Author's Response: You really know how to make a person feel good, don't you? In fact, I think I'll go post that next chapter right now...;-)
I knew it!!!!!!!!! I love how she didn't realize what was going on, just goes to show even the most celebrated healer in Europe has to be in denial sometimes. But the poor thing! Finding out she's going to have a baby and then having her best friend die! Ooooooh, I so can't wait for the next chapter, but I'm kind of dreading it. Mariam is gonna be mad that Sirius looked through her thoughts, and Sirius is gonna be mad that Mariam never told him about the baby, and then Sirius is gonna go and get himself killed, and...sorry, I'm rambling again. I did do a jig, btw. And I forgot this in the last review, I joined this site to review this story as well. I really don't want it to end...*grabs tissues* ~Becky~
Author's Response: Breathe! Breathe! :::laughs::: I'm glad the chapter was jig-worthy, I just love your excitement! Thank you for taking the time to join this site and review! I don't want it to end either...aw, now you've done it. Can I have one of the tissues? Thanks!
cool chapter. wonder whats gonna happen next. i liked the burps and such coming from Harry!
Oh My Gosh!!! Here I was, checking my emails before class, I click on this link in my favorites section and there's an update!! YEEESS!! I literally pumped my fist in the air! I really enjoyed everything in the chapter, like Lily and Miriam's conversation, Harry's role in the chapter (burping, etc I thought was a nice touch), and also the part where Miriam witnessed the Potters House. I won't be able to focus on anything else today I don't think, and I need to know what happens next. Update SOON!!
WHY HAVENT U UPDATED YET??????????.....i-i mean update soon...please:D
Author's Response: Happy to oblige! Chp. 16 in the queue!
Are u sure u are not Jo? Great Job:)
Author's Response: SHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Just kidding. I wish. But thanks!!
thanks for updating. i like this chapter but its not my best. i luv ur story and i have to compliment it in every review. sooooo this is a great fantastic and brill story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I do hope the next chapter will not disappoint