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Name: Triona (Signed) · Date: 09/03/05 10:03 · For: Help Me, Rhonda!
I loved it. Thank you for posting a new one so soon. You rock!!! I just wanted to kick Snape the whole time which probably means he was true to character, lol. He can be so frustrating.

Name: miss padfoot (Signed) · Date: 09/03/05 3:51 · For: Help Me, Rhonda!
Awww....Poor Clancy! She must feel so horrible! Will Severus come and explain it to her? The letters that she had written were funny, especially the postscripts! Update soon! 10/10 :)

Name: lunafish (Signed) · Date: 09/03/05 1:48 · For: Help Me, Rhonda!
"With a look of revulsion and hatred, he regarded his own reflection in the one-way mirror."--Ah, I like your version of the tower scene so much better than...well, the alternative. Because I know with your story it will all turn out well in the end. I'm so glad you've updated! You do a great job showing the confusion and despair Clancy feels right now. And Severus...that mirror was almost as cruel on DD's part as the altered potion was on Snape's. The characters do stay true to form, though, don't they? Clancy is just as blunt and funny as ever, even in her current state of mind and Snape as self-absorbed. But I feel bad for them both.

Name: Kait (Signed) · Date: 09/02/05 14:08 · For: Help Me, Rhonda!
Oh, poor Clancy! And poor Severus as well! And... oh, so sad! Especially that karioke; it brought a tear to my eye....! :D Great update.

Name: Little Loony (Signed) · Date: 09/02/05 4:44 · For: The Hour of Parting
Is that it is that the End? Nice bit of mixing. I enjoyed it, as always. I'm going to Miss Clancy. I could cry even though Snape is a Git. I fear we may never seen those knobbly knees in a kilt again. 10/10.

Name: Triona (Signed) · Date: 08/30/05 10:19 · For: The Hour of Parting
I love how you incorparated things from HBP. You are so making it all work. I love this story. You rock. Update soon please!!!

Name: Sarahosmile (Signed) · Date: 08/28/05 14:58 · For: The Hour of Parting
This was a really good story. I read the whole thing with a slight smile on my face, occasionally laughing out loud. I think that stories that make you laugh inside are much more powerful than all-out humor stories. So, what I'm rather clumsily saying is that I love your story and can't wait to see what happens in the end.

Name: miss padfoot (Signed) · Date: 08/28/05 9:49 · For: The Hour of Parting
The chapter was sooo sad! Your Snape is so in canon and I feel like reading JK's Snape! 10/10 Update soon!

Name: LunaLovegoodDoubleCast (Signed) · Date: 08/27/05 13:15 · For: The Hour of Parting
You Updated! Yaaay! I love this chapeter, but why does clancy have to forget?... So sad... at least we know that they get back to gether evntually... upadte soon!!!!!

Name: Kait (Signed) · Date: 08/26/05 9:43 · For: The Hour of Parting
*sob*! Cedric dead and Clancy leaving! You are too cruel! :D Love Severus' final thoughts - very poignant! Also like the way you've mixed in things from HBP. Great update!

Name: ernestine (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 22:03 · For: The Hour of Parting
Whenever I see an update, it makes my day. Things just keep building...I loved it when you brought in the Malfoys. I can't wait to see what happens with this potion Snape's been brewing....

Name: SparrowsGirl01 (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 17:54 · For: The Hour of Parting
Oh, lord, please tell me that Snape won't leave her foorever? Please, that would be too horrible, and I wouldn't like the story anymore! Please, have something go desperately wrong wtih the Forgetfulness Potion. I don't want them to split! :( waaaaaah!

Name: sadako (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 13:16 · For: The Hour of Parting
OMG! that was so sad! What made you do that to the story?At first i didn't get it when he put his blood in the potion but i think i do now.It was a little hard to read what people were saying because you didn't seperate them into more paragraphs. Other than that, it was very good.i give you 9999.

Author's Response: There needs to be some form of conflict introduced during their separation, or the next chapters would be very dull reading. There was a formatting glitch during the validation, but it's been corrected. Thanks for letting me know. :-)

Name: Jenn_Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 12:47 · For: The Hour of Parting
Another chapter well done! It still amazes me how you write Snape so perfectly in character. I'll be watching for the next chapter. Thanks so much!

Name: Poggi (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 12:04 · For: The Hour of Parting
OMG... it's just too sad for me. It's some kind of pain to wait for the next chapters.. I want to know so much, what's happening next.. I'm actually more interested in this one, than The 7th..

Name: mugglemaddy12 (Anonymous) · Date: 08/25/05 9:36 · For: Prologue: Witch In Exile
wait-- how has your story been updated today? the submissions are closed! how come u get special treatment? lol, jk. good story, btw.

Name: remusgirl (Signed) · Date: 08/25/05 9:32 · For: Prologue: Witch In Exile
who did ur story get up if other authers cant get there up?

Name: lunafish (Signed) · Date: 08/21/05 22:51 · For: A Kiss to Build a Dream On
I hereby eat my words: I swore I would never enjoy a time-traveler fic. I was wrong. Now if that pineapple doing the conga would just show up again!

Name: lunafish (Signed) · Date: 08/21/05 22:20 · For: The Bumpy Road to Love
Finally! The dancing pineapples I've heard so much about!!! "Hardly a day goes by that one isn't called upon to make a pineapple tap dance." I just savoured that line! Now I truly understand what "lol" means! But abbreviating just won't do: I'm truly Laughing Out Loud!

Name: lunafish (Signed) · Date: 08/21/05 22:19 · For: The Bumpy Road to Love
Finally! The dancing pineapples I've heard so much about!!! Now I truly understand what "lol" means! But abbreviating just won't do: I'm truly Laughing Out Loud!

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