Reviews For Highly Improbable
Reviewer: Kait
Date: 09/02/05 14:08
Chapter: Help Me, Rhonda!

Oh, poor Clancy! And poor Severus as well! And... oh, so sad! Especially that karioke; it brought a tear to my eye....! :D Great update.

Reviewer: Little Loony
Date: 09/02/05 4:44
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

Is that it is that the End? Nice bit of mixing. I enjoyed it, as always. I'm going to Miss Clancy. I could cry even though Snape is a Git. I fear we may never seen those knobbly knees in a kilt again. 10/10.

Reviewer: Triona
Date: 08/30/05 10:19
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

I love how you incorparated things from HBP. You are so making it all work. I love this story. You rock. Update soon please!!!

Reviewer: Sarahosmile
Date: 08/28/05 14:58
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

This was a really good story. I read the whole thing with a slight smile on my face, occasionally laughing out loud. I think that stories that make you laugh inside are much more powerful than all-out humor stories. So, what I'm rather clumsily saying is that I love your story and can't wait to see what happens in the end.

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 08/28/05 9:49
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

The chapter was sooo sad! Your Snape is so in canon and I feel like reading JK's Snape! 10/10 Update soon!

Reviewer: LunaLovegoodDoubleCast
Date: 08/27/05 13:15
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

You Updated! Yaaay! I love this chapeter, but why does clancy have to forget?... So sad... at least we know that they get back to gether evntually... upadte soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Kait
Date: 08/26/05 9:43
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

*sob*! Cedric dead and Clancy leaving! You are too cruel! :D Love Severus' final thoughts - very poignant! Also like the way you've mixed in things from HBP. Great update!

Reviewer: ernestine
Date: 08/25/05 22:03
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

Whenever I see an update, it makes my day. Things just keep building...I loved it when you brought in the Malfoys. I can't wait to see what happens with this potion Snape's been brewing....

Reviewer: SparrowsGirl01
Date: 08/25/05 17:54
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

Oh, lord, please tell me that Snape won't leave her foorever? Please, that would be too horrible, and I wouldn't like the story anymore! Please, have something go desperately wrong wtih the Forgetfulness Potion. I don't want them to split! :( waaaaaah!

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 08/25/05 13:16
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

OMG! that was so sad! What made you do that to the story?At first i didn't get it when he put his blood in the potion but i think i do now.It was a little hard to read what people were saying because you didn't seperate them into more paragraphs. Other than that, it was very good.i give you 9999.

Author's Response: There needs to be some form of conflict introduced during their separation, or the next chapters would be very dull reading. There was a formatting glitch during the validation, but it's been corrected. Thanks for letting me know. :-)

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 08/25/05 12:47
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

Another chapter well done! It still amazes me how you write Snape so perfectly in character. I'll be watching for the next chapter. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Poggi
Date: 08/25/05 12:04
Chapter: The Hour of Parting

OMG... it's just too sad for me. It's some kind of pain to wait for the next chapters.. I want to know so much, what's happening next.. I'm actually more interested in this one, than The 7th..

Reviewer: mugglemaddy12
Date: 08/25/05 9:36
Chapter: Prologue: Witch In Exile

wait-- how has your story been updated today? the submissions are closed! how come u get special treatment? lol, jk. good story, btw.

Reviewer: remusgirl
Date: 08/25/05 9:32
Chapter: Prologue: Witch In Exile

who did ur story get up if other authers cant get there up?

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 22:51
Chapter: A Kiss to Build a Dream On

I hereby eat my words: I swore I would never enjoy a time-traveler fic. I was wrong. Now if that pineapple doing the conga would just show up again!

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 22:20
Chapter: The Bumpy Road to Love

Finally! The dancing pineapples I've heard so much about!!! "Hardly a day goes by that one isn't called upon to make a pineapple tap dance." I just savoured that line! Now I truly understand what "lol" means! But abbreviating just won't do: I'm truly Laughing Out Loud!

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 22:19
Chapter: The Bumpy Road to Love

Finally! The dancing pineapples I've heard so much about!!! Now I truly understand what "lol" means! But abbreviating just won't do: I'm truly Laughing Out Loud!

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 22:06
Chapter: How to Handle a Woman

"The Boy Who Must Be Famous For Something"--I am never going to have the sympathy for Harry that I used to. I just had to say it....

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 21:50
Chapter: Be Careful, It's My Heart

Just finished Valentine's Day. You're making me see how this attraction could actually happen, and I find myself charmed by the greasy bastard in spite of myself!

Reviewer: lunafish
Date: 08/21/05 21:03
Chapter: A Note of Disappointment

Just got through the first meeting with Mr. NOT Wonderful! Very funny and true to character. I'm sitting here smiling. Poor girl. But lucky girl, too! How many of us would love to be in her place?! I know I would. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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