needs more sex
this was just a beautiful story. I loved the..um...flashback-type- things..they were very ineteresting and just the link needed to describe this...relationship.And the ending! Oh i love a happy ending.
I'm not sure if my last review was deleted if not sorry i posted it to the wrong story. I really enjoyed this story, I was urging him to say something to her. Nice work.
Wow! I did not expect that. At first I thought Hermione was into being dominated and then I was thrown for a loop. Nice work, I really enjoyed it.
That was astounding.
OOOHHHH I wish this didn't end...Loved it.
A beautiful story, but I'm sure you have already heard that. Your story has so much emotion in it. I'm new to Hermione and Snape (just writing my first fic about them, but I enjoy reading about them very much). I liked the bit especially when he doesn't want to see her leave at dawn. I'm glad I've read it, although I don't read much R-rated fics.
That was a beautiful story, and it really related to things I've seen before...You must've known that kind of pain to write that...
Normally I don't like angsty things too much, but I thought that this was well-written. Subtle and intruiging are always good. I like the ending a lot.
Great story. Loved it !
this is really good! i like how you started out describing the situation and not with a dialogue. you've really hooked me- i wanna know what happened in the war that was so horrible! you are a very good writer so keep it up!
I really liked this - The piece was so well written..-:0) Usually I'm really not into the whole Hermione/Snape thing but I really like the way the story unfolds the reasons why....
nice job... it's good so far.. :)
it was realy sweet!! good job!!
OMG! What happened to Hermione?? I never thought I'd say this, but poor Snape! You are a very gifted writer!! 10/10!!
I've read "A shell dirty and broken" ages ago and I might read it again. But from what I remember this is different and I am soo glad this turned out alright. :) It is such a good fic and I love it loads. I like how he changed things. And I really don't angst i've decided.