its so beautiful!:)
*smirks* I have already read the other one, so it means that I just have to search for something else. But sometimes, happy endings are good. A lot of angst doesn't always allow people to have hope in the world- and hope is important if we want to keep going!
UHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!! Perfect!!! Made me gasp more than once!!!! LOVE IT!!
oooo soo cute!
I enjoy how it ended happily. (:
I could feel the emotion in what you described as 'pure angst', and I felt so bad for Severus! But the ending made a smile break out on my face. VERY well written, I enjoyed the literacy: quality over quanity. (: congrats! can't wait to read more!
Good job... I was pleased with what little I saw. You could tell the characters were well evolved in and of themselves, and it seemed very realistic.
That being said, I would like to see more depth sometime soon. I'll be looking into you!
Good, great, awesome. Although, the plot is dead at the beginning. But the plot is a LOT better twards the end! I put my quill down to you!
awww, this is so cute!
that's so sweet! I love how there isn't really any smut or anything (I was all but shocked to find how racy these things get)
*goes to see what else you've written*
Angsty? ANGSTY? This. is. not. angsty! It's like, flangst! *fluff/angst*
Though i do like it!!!
Oh!! I LOVED that!
I really liked this- it's hard to find good Hermione/Snape fics. I think you should continue with this a little bit.
*smile* I liked it a lot!
^_^ I liked this. It's cute.
I've just read your story and it was totally beautiful I loved it. I was wondering if I could translate it into hungarian so others could read it. May I?
Very sweet and painful.
very well writen
This was touching, ina word. I love how everything's in pronouns, so it seems a lot less personal to the reader.
I really, really love that he finally comes out and says what both of them are thinking, and she acknowledges it. And I love this: "...and he realizes with a start that, for all their past encounters, this can’t be called anything but the first time they’ve been together."
very nice...i reead this one a long time ago as well...this is the 3rd time i've read it, i think...and its very poetic and well done!!! loved it...(and the use of the words ;))
Ooohhh, this is very interesting. It was suspense-filled when you think about it, and I enjoyed this greatly.