Reviews For Ordinary People
Reviewer: Metropolitan
Date: 09/02/07 20:35
Chapter: 1

Indescribably fantastic. Indescribable.

Reviewer: The Slytherin Queen
Date: 02/21/07 16:27
Chapter: 1

aww!

I LOVE Harry/Luna fics! And this is probably one of my faveorites!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/17/06 14:23
Chapter: 1

Your warnings were perfect!! Ugh and Malfoy! The little ferret he is the cause of Harry and Luna's happiness! Hahahahahahaha. One problem when Ron was eating you said he put an entire chicken in his mouth;

"Ron tried to reason as he stuffed another chicken into his mouth. "

Just thought you might want to rephrase that.

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/13/06 20:05
Chapter: 1

I'm back! i realize everyone fails to notcie Luna ha silve reyes, not blue!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stormy_lovegood
Date: 06/13/06 20:04
Chapter: 1

Good story, my Lunary shipper. I ship them too.

But Luna does not have blue eyes, but rather silvery-gray ones. Just a mistake- had to point it out. Otherwise, it was good.

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 02/09/06 20:56
Chapter: 1

cute! yes..cute indeed. yay!

Reviewer: loony lovegoody
Date: 12/23/05 0:41
Chapter: 1

i absolutely LOVE this story! it's so cute! you captured the voice and persona of luna so well. i'm a huge harry/luna shipper. great story.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/01/05 20:37
Chapter: 1

That was really really good. I personally think Harry and Luna should have had a nice little snog at the end of OotP, safter the you heard them thingie and I loved it. The only thing was you called Luna a blonde and Ginny "the red-head" so much it almost became awkward, and there were a few parts when Luna and Harry were talking and I felt that they should have used contractions because without it the speech was sort of forced. It was still absolutely wonderful- beautiful!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 10/12/05 22:20
Chapter: 1

that was really really cute!!!

Reviewer: immortal_evil
Date: 10/07/05 21:58
Chapter: 1

You have converted me to Harry/Luna-ism. *makes a shrine* 10.

Reviewer: Karma
Date: 08/24/05 0:40
Chapter: 1

Brilliant! It's such a lovely story. And so sweet. Even though Rowling has made it clear that there is a H/G ship, I would love to see her write a H/L ship, after reading this! Good job.

Reviewer: hogwarts
Date: 07/13/05 20:23
Chapter: 1

That is so sweet & very tuching 10/10

Reviewer: ConstantVigilance
Date: 06/27/05 17:04
Chapter: 1

So sweet! Although I am more of a Ron/Luna shipper for fan fics, I really did enjoy this one. Great job. 10/10!

Reviewer: DracosPunkGirl
Date: 06/25/05 18:00
Chapter: 1

That was touching.*Hand over heart, humming.* LaLaLa. It was awesome beyond reason! I really liked it. I give you a 10!

Reviewer: HarryplusLuna
Date: 06/20/05 17:28
Chapter: 1

*tears in her eyes* It's...so...BEAUTIFUL!!!

Reviewer: hogwarts
Date: 05/25/05 4:55
Chapter: 1

That was a very sweet Story !!!!!!

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