Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/09/06 9:34
Chapter: Albus' Secret

I like Al!!!!!!! Hee hee!!!!! (I think it would be cool if Dumbledore was Harry's great-grandfather or something like that!!!)

Author's Response: it WOULD be cool, but we know it's not going to happen- in either JKs world OR mine. *sigh*

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/09/06 9:27
Chapter: The Second Meeting

Holy Crap!!!! Why is he crying??????? I feel horrible for Harry!!!!!! He feels awful that he made all of thoise people go through that!

Author's Response: It's coming up-- that answer is in the nex chapter.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 15:03
Chapter: Draco's Detour

That was......... interesting. :)

Author's Response: lol-- and lots come from that encounter!

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:57
Chapter: Ron's Realization

Only Harry can call her Hermy, right??

Author's Response: RIGHT!!! :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:53
Chapter: The First Altercation- A Good, Old-Fashioned Muggle Duel

Holy Crap!!! What was that????

Author's Response: that would be what I call a massive fistfight, 6 years in the making. Talk about tension...

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:44
Chapter: Hermione's Birthday

That was SO SWEET!!! I loved it!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you did! Everyone ignores her bday, so I HAD to put it in!

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:36
Chapter: Crossing Boundaries

That was really good!!!! I think Snape is turning into an old softie here!!!! Mr. Teddy Bear!!! That's what I'll call him from now on!!!

Author's Response: hahhaha- not quite teddy, but definately softer. :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:28
Chapter: The First Term Begins

Uh oh!!!!!!!1 That was interesting!!! (I don't want u to think badly of me, 'cause what I said about the whole conceited thing. I'm just writing what I think. K?)

Author's Response: That's what reviews are for-- I dont ever get mad unless someone is just being Stupid. And then I tell them they are. :-) Because I'm just snarky like that.

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/08/06 14:18
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

About the conceited thing. People will think he looks conceited, 'cause he is on a CHOCOLATE CARD!!!! Do u get the picture???

Author's Response: I gotcha. :-)

Reviewer: H05TYL
Date: 09/07/06 22:51
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Harry on a chocolate frog card - haha, amazing - tho somewhat suprising no-ones thought of it until now!

Author's Response: noone as in no other authors??? meh-- i'm sure someone else did, we'll just have to look harder. :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/07/06 16:05
Chapter: The First Meeting

Is the other thing sex????? Please tell me that it isn't!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol--- it's not. :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/07/06 15:57
Chapter: The Welcoming Feast and Mentor Assignments

OMG!!! Dumbledore is like an older version of the Marauders!!!

Author's Response: just a bit, yup. :-)

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/07/06 15:49
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Do u want Harry to look even more conceited!!!!?????? Other than that, GREAT CHAPTER!!!

Author's Response: Conceited about what? He hates the thought of a card, but it ends up remedied.

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 09/06/06 20:12
Chapter: Padfoot Returns

its my nickname for you because you are now how i will read insted of jk rowling hmmm maby ill write fan fiction about your story

Author's Response: You're such a charmer!!!
And if you seriously want to write a sequel (to the sequel of the sequel of the sequel) let me know, and I'll open up the sandbox. You're the first one to 'bid', so it's up to you, but if someone tries to fight you for it.... meh- I'm dreaming! *shakes head* Like that would ever happen!
I'll also send you the one chapter (and the sorting hat song) that I DID write for it. Let me know if you're really interested, and we'll start negotiations---- LET THE BATTLE FOR THE RIGHTS BEGIN!!!!!

Reviewer: shortcj630
Date: 09/03/06 16:20
Chapter: Return to Love's Hollow

I LOVED it. By far my favorite chapter.

Author's Response: One of mine, too! :-)

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 08/27/06 20:08
Chapter: Mind Over Matter

ohhhh i loved it and cant wait to read the nekt story

Author's Response: :-) thanks!

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 08/27/06 11:24
Chapter: A Resolution

oh my god that was so good jk i repeat you should write professionaly I'll be the first to get your books if you do

Author's Response: lol! I'm in the process of writing a book right now- i'll be sure to post a note when it spublished!

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 08/27/06 11:04
Chapter: The Fourth Altercation- Phoenix Song

oh blast it all im crying you can realy write i cried when series died and in the sixth book i terd up but didnt cry out right now this its butifull jk you need to become a profesinal and you need to wright romanc and fantasy and you need to wright alot of stuff because YOU ARE SERISLY BRILINT WITH WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol-- my book is actually somewhat 'realistic fiction', but i think after i finish it i might try a fantasy book. :-) thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 08/27/06 10:36
Chapter: The Third Altercation- The Shot Heard 'Round the World

ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhha hhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahh ahhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhh

Author's Response: EEEEEEEEHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bookworm123
Date: 08/27/06 10:20
Chapter: The Space Between Black and White

oh i didnt expect that it just keeps geting better and better
i think it would be intresting if harry knew about the girls list and said somthing like moving the grey knight somwher because hes somthing i dont know what your creative you think of somthing

Author's Response: lol-- sorry, the story's already written, so there wont be any 'boy's list!'

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