Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/18/06 0:08
Chapter: The Most Dangerous Mission
wooooooooooo!!!! oh ya!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 23:49
Chapter: A Plan of Action
what an AMAZING plot seed! Wow! And the whole thing with Harry and the defence part! whew.... talk about some AWESOME writting... sone of the best i have ever read! oh PLEASE keep it up!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 23:30
Chapter: The Third Meeting
whoa now that was serious.... i dont know abotut his one. It is starting to get into territory that is very sensitive... hmmm
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 23:13
Chapter: Detention with Draco
wow... although i am going to say that Draco was a bit too much OOC for me. It was a great plotline and idea... but it stretched a bit here and there... And im not sure if i like the Phoenix name yet.. (I need to learn the correct pronunciation!)
Author's Response: Hehehe-- it is pronounced "san-jew-een", although some might argue for "san-gew-een". I learned about it in my Psych class- is was the one body make up in ancient greek society that was considered useful.... and it also means blood, so JKR used it for the name of her Vampire in HBP. You have no idea how much that shocked me, b/c I had come up with the name MONTHS before HBP came out!!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 22:08
Chapter: Albus' Secret
wow! that was absolutely the most amazing chcapter i have ever read. I can not believe the amout of thought that you put into this story, as well as the amout of research and imagination that it took to think of a plot so utterly fantastic! This is now THE GREATEST fic i have read! i can understand why people would put you in the top ten! Because you definitely deserve to be there. Look... i am saying all these things and i still have 24 chapters to go! Very soon im not going to be able to leave any more reviews because i dont think words are going to be able to successfully satisfy how i feel about this.
AAH!!! AMAZING!!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 21:40
Chapter: The Second Meeting
... wow
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 21:30
Chapter: Draco's Detour
brilliant... and i keeps getting better... how can it keep getting better??
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 21:07
Chapter: Ron's Realization
wow this is absolutely fantastic! It is getting to be one of the best stories i have read on MNFF. I dont recomend many, but i might just have to start recomending this one!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 20:57
Chapter: The First Altercation- A Good, Old-Fashioned Muggle Duel
whew! that was serious. I am quite supprise dthat Harry didnt use any of his wandless magic though... wether or not he was out of control. I cant wait to see what Dumbledore has to say.
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 20:35
Chapter: Hermione's Birthday
that was awesome! Had me crying at one point there! (And that is quite a feat!)
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 18:58
Chapter: Crossing Boundaries
oh man that was awsome!!! Absolutely fantastic. I LOVE where the plot for this is going! Snape is FANTASTIC!!! There is almost a part of me that wished something like this happend or will happen in book 7 when it comes out. There is just something wonderful about Snape and Harry finially figuring out their differences and gaining a respect for eachother. And the whole part with Ginny hugging Snape almost had me cheering!! That was Great! Well done! Cant wait to read on and see what Snape does next!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 16:10
Chapter: The First Meeting
!! more plot! wow this is a good story!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 15:43
Chapter: The Welcoming Feast and Mentor Assignments
awesome! It just keeps getting better!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/17/06 14:14
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
well i am really looking forward to this story... i cant wait to see how everthing is going to trun out. 35 chapters! woo hoo! i cant see good times ahead!
Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 10/12/06 0:46
Chapter: Mind Over Matter
You end it with wool socks. Classic and unique. I am off to read the next installment ;)
Author's Response: hahha- I'm glad someone picked that up. Thanks!
Reviewer: LoveSongEuphoria
Date: 09/30/06 22:48
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
Oh my god!!! that chocolate frog part was friggin hilarious...im laffin a i write this...good idea...look for Harry Potter and the Terms of Endearment by LoveSongEuphoria, that is, if the first chapter is ever approved...its my first story, and i need as many readers as possible so, keep your eyes peeled!
Author's Response: I definately will, and Im glad you liked my 'choco-frog-card'. I can't wait for your story!
Reviewer: ardentharlequin
Date: 09/18/06 18:01
Chapter: Grey is the Knight
oh my, such fluff.
i'm surprised johnny depp isn't on the list.
Author's Response: OMG he isn't>>>> Well- believe me, he IS, I just probably didn't mention him by name. I think I put a link of my real list on my live journal on the chapter. CHeck it out if you want!
Reviewer: ardentharlequin
Date: 09/18/06 17:22
Chapter: Tales of a Confession
i just loved how you gave ron what he deserved.
GREAT FIC.. sorry i haven't commented. i was just too into it to stop.
Author's Response: No problem! It's a good reason, and I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: loonypadfoot
Date: 09/17/06 13:11
Chapter: Mind Over Matter
awww...
that was sad.
i wanted to sry.
then realized it was just a story; with not real characters.
Author's Response: Hey, I cry in stories all the time. It give me an excuse to vent. :-) So bust out the kleenex!
Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 09/12/06 15:10
Chapter: Mind Over Matter
That was a GREAT story!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!!! And P.S.- check your email!!!! :-)
