Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/24/06 12:53
Chapter: Mind Over Matter
oh good lord that was absolutely fantastic!!!. the tears are still running down my face! I could not think of a better and more beautiful way to end a story then with that. I cant get over some of the writers on here! I dont know how you guys can think of such fantastic ways to connect different plots from the story. It is absolutely brilliant! Every time I read a story like this, i feel like... oh this cant get any better... And then it does! it astounds me! Absolutely wonderful and i cant wait to read the sequel!!!! Thank you for sharing your tallent with us!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/24/06 12:10
Chapter: The Fourth Altercation- Phoenix Song
now that was well written! I was crying the whole time but it was perfect. every part of it. for the "thank you... Dad." part to Ron punching Harry. Perfect!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/24/06 11:26
Chapter: The Space Between Black and White
... hmmm.. i dont know about that one. thats a bit far reaching... hmmm. it does make sence.... but still...
Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 10/22/06 15:33
Chapter: The Weasel and The Ferret
bad for ron but good on harry and ginny
Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 10/22/06 15:18
Chapter: Memories in the Making
aww i hope she says yes
Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 10/22/06 12:10
Chapter: Detention with Draco
oooooo.... a good twist would be if they became friends, i could see it working in this story
Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 10/22/06 11:40
Chapter: Albus' Secret
is there any mention of dumbledore having a wife called cassandra 'cause i read that he had a wife called cassandra before
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/21/06 11:39
Chapter: Conceptions of Reality
that was absolutely beautiful... but i dont like it. I dont like it at all... especially the ending witht eh "True love is to die for the person" and how Harry "knew what he had to do." I dont like were that could lead him...
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/21/06 11:21
Chapter: Cheer Up Chess
that was fun!!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/21/06 10:49
Chapter: The Second Altercation- The Grey Knight, and Nothing More
wow... im not used to all the death... sigh. Very good battle seen though. Who is the Grey Kight?
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/19/06 12:22
Chapter: Training the Troops
that was serious. wow.
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/19/06 12:08
Chapter: A Pensive Truth, Relieved
*tear* Im starting to not like the whole "charachter death" warning at the beginning of the story.... after this... i dont like what that could imply...
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/19/06 11:49
Chapter: The Secret Library
whoa! I had a feeling that was what was going to happen. Coll nonetheless! I just cant get over the detail in this story!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/19/06 1:09
Chapter: Padfoot Returns
wow... now that was something!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/19/06 0:32
Chapter: Return to Love's Hollow
i figured they had to be more then just a cat and a bee... I loved the part about him catching up to her... The ceremony was Beautiful!!!!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/18/06 0:40
Chapter: The Weasel and The Ferret
i just cant say anything anymore...! its just too good!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/18/06 0:26
Chapter: Memories in the Making
ok now that was cool! A+ for him! woo hoo!
