As much as I love the angst of death in fanfics, there is a lump in my throat that wants to explode. Guess how long it's been there. Since I started reading the third word! I love Ron! You're gonna make me cry, and I'm going for a 'No crying for a week' goal thing. I have to stop writing this or I will cry.
Wow. Very nicely written!
thats it? no more? no sex scenes or passionate love scenes? come on, u left us w. ron dead and hermione and ginny finally both knowing eachothers feelings! tease u r, mate, tease
whoa! i love this story! however, you should've made this into a chapter story, it would've been even more perfect
brilliantly written! I loved it.
Fantastic! That was so cleverly written! I really couldn't tell who was speaking at first - I thought it was Percy but then it all clicked! Very very very good writing skills here.
Indeed lovely. Well constructed. Makes you care about the characters.
hmmm... it was definately written well. but i think the plot was just the teensyist underdeveloped. also, ginny/hermione doesn't seem right to me. ginny/luna makes more sense. good work, tho.
I understood perfectly what was happening in the story and may I just say that it was very...predictable, if you will. I myself try to avoid those 'we confess our love and everything is Emo' plots, but sometimes, it just happens. Still, it's better than the average bear's. 4
its interesting...a bit confusing but it cool
Its different and a little wierd but in a good way...I like it though...-Tonx