Reviews For Healing Harry
Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/17/07 19:58
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

Goodness, sorry I took so long to read. RL issues; what can you do?

Oh, what a beautiful ending! To start off with, I will say that it definitely lived up to the rest of the story. It was so amazing. With the weather prediction in the beginning, along with the wonderful descriptions of everyone, I felt like I was actually there. The very ending conversation between Harry and Ginny was brilliant. I was really moved. And my favorite quote:

“Because he knows better than to let the two of you know where he plans to honeymoon with Ginny.” Hermione stated as she joined them at the table. “He’s witnessed too many of your wedding night pranks to let that slip.”

Harry laughed again as George scowled at Hermione good-naturedly.

“I still can’t believe Ron fell for it though,” Fred beamed at the memory.

“Me either,” Hermione moaned.

Do I smell a plot bunny? This would be a hilarious one-shot!

Well, a brilliant job. I'll trot over and read the alternate ending, so RL has kept me from reading it. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: :D I'm so glad you enjoyed my ending. Thank you for all of the kind reviews! HA! I hadn't thought of a spin-off, but now that you've mentioned it... maybe someday...

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/17/07 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

I have enjoyed this story! Thanks for sharing this great story with us!


Author's Response: Yay Cyns! I'm so glad you liked it! I was a little worried that people would be mad at my ending (rather jo-esque no?) but people seem satisfied so I'm happy!

Reviewer: specialgirlvihas
Date: 09/17/07 10:26
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

this was an excellent story!! i re-read the story a second time frm start to end cos it was sooooo good!! Congrats. Hope to c more stories frm u!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: The Seeker
Date: 09/16/07 18:39
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

Thanks for giving us the ending I wanted to see in DH. You combined the primary themes that had run through the series and were symbolized by Ron, Hermione, and Ginny. That's the way Harry should have vanquished Voldemort!

Great symbolism paralleling the chess game and Ron's brilliant analysis to their first year exploits and this final battle. Wonderful story, even if the telling took a while.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you stuck with me, and saw more of the story than just a fluffy romance. I wish all my readers were so through.

Reviewer: lovesblind01
Date: 09/16/07 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

All I can say is ,'Wow.'
You are an excellent writer.
I think you could have given J.K. Rowling a good run for her money. You are a fabulous writer. I'm only 14 but I know a good story when I see it and this, this is one of the best I have read on here.
Love the story!

Author's Response: *blush* why thank you!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/16/07 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

That was an amazing story!! I simply am in love with this story most of all... it was such an amazing journey!

Author's Response: Well thank you!

Reviewer: leigh194
Date: 09/16/07 11:19
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

hi, just finished your fan fic and i loved it, never thought that harry would do that as a job as i always imagined him becoming an auror, but i liked your idea just as much, am sad to see this story end.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: deej
Date: 09/15/07 22:31
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

An absolutely great story. Aside from a few grammatical misstakes, very well written.

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: deej
Date: 09/15/07 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

An absolutely great story. Aside from a few grammatical misstakes, very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 09/15/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

Aww, Amanda, you made me cry! I'm so happy with the way this stroy turned out! And that you took my suggestion about Ginny's bouquet :D And Harry designing broomsticks was a marvelous idea dearest!

Author's Response: You've been there with me since the beginning love! Thank you for all the support and cheering me on! And did you notice the name of the broomsticks?

Reviewer: asdfg
Date: 09/15/07 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

good story and great ending are you gonna keep on writing stories or is this gonna be it????

Author's Response: Thank you, and no, I'm not done. I have several one-shots up, and another WIP. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/15/07 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 18: The Beginning

"...the brilliant pedals glow with the..." Roses are bicycles to have pedals? (LOL)

Thanks a lot for sharing your story with us.

Author's Response: hmmm... silly word document... *shrug* Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: anji70
Date: 09/15/07 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

Unbelievably GREAT!!! I can not wait to read more from you. I hope this does not end here. I will be reading New Year, New Hope as soon as I get out of work. I have been running late to work for the past three days trying to finish this one. Thank you for the most entertaing reading I have had since Deathly Hallows. Thank you again

Author's Response: :) thank you so much for the compliment. Don't get fired on my account! Sadly, there is only one more chapter of Healing Harry. It's in queue now. But I have pleanty of one-shots, and another WIP to keep you busy for a while yet. Thank you for the read and review!

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 09/11/07 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

It means birth! and speaking of birth, only 16 more days until we get to celebrate out birthday! I can't wait to get DH on CD! SQUEE!

Author's Response: heee, you're so silly!

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 09/08/07 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

What can I say? It is because of Harry that we are friends! You are wrapping up the story very nicely, and I loved the chess game. I have one more word to add to the spell that would be ours: nativitas

Author's Response: LOL, okay darlin' I have no clue what "nativitas" is, and according to my Latin to English translator, no such word exists! *hug* You know, it was because of this story that we met? I remember seeing your reviews, and thinking, "hey, I like that screenname." Then I clicked on it to read your profile, and you were advertising for a beta, and history happened! It's it crazy that my little story could bring two people together forever?

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 09/06/07 18:54
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Dancing with Princesses

I absolutely loved the Star Wars bit! Especially the part were Dumbledore's wand becomes a light saber. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Lol, yes, one of my sillier moments

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/05/07 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

Wow, that was definitely worth the wait!

A small nitpick, and then I will move on to the greatness:
The pick up game included Luna, Neville, Dean, Seamus, Hannah Abbott, Ernie McMillan, Katie Bell, Colin and Dennis Creevey, and Terry Boot.
From what I recall, Ernie's surname is spelled 'MacMillan.' However I may be wrong, so don't hold me to it. :D

Ron's shining moment! That was a great analogy; I never would have thought to look at it like that. It made perfect sense, and the fact that it came from Ron made it all the better.

Details were very nice. I particularly like the little tidbit about Ginny holding Harry's hand and rubbing it with her thumb. For some reason, that line hit me in particular. I guess it's because it really shows their relationship. Or something like that.

That end battle was great. It seemed a little short, but I suppose you were a little more focused on what was happening with Harry and Voldemort, and not the battle going on around them. That was a good war strategy on the Order's part.

The entire thing was great! I can't wait for the next chapter to be validated, and I'll go check out 'New Year, New Hope' tomorrow (I have to get to sleep). Awesome job, and update your Tonks story soon. Please? lol Have fun in real life (everyone needs good wishes!)! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely long review! You are right, I just looked it up on the Lexicon, it should be Macmillan. I shall change that. I've already had to fix 9 3/4 (I accidentally wrote 9 1/3)! Thanks for the heads up. Yes, I know that the end battle was short, and not at detailed. But I was more focused on what was going on with Harry and Voldemort, that's what's most important. I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and hope you'll enjoy the last. It's in queue so keep your eyes open. And yes, Tonks is going to get a little lovin' too!

Reviewer: Melindaleo
Date: 09/05/07 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

Woo Hoo! Thanks for an extra chapter. DH was sorely missing an aftermath, so I'm glad you decided to give us one. I loved the chess analogy (although I don't play, either). I thought it was very nice symbolism. I enjoyed the Quidditch, too, and while I adore Ginny, I still don't believe there's any way she'd even tie Harry for the Snitch ;)

Author's Response: heee... I'm so glad you liked it. I don't know if my last chapter is going to be much better... but there are some of my own imagined details in there for post-voldemort, so there you go. chapter 18 is in queue waiting to be validated. As for Ginny and Harry getting the snitch... Well, Harry might be "a little off his game" for the sake of it. There's no doubt, Harry would and could catch it, if he wanted to...

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/05/07 18:37
Chapter: Chapter 17- Wizard’s Chess

Interesting battle. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: it's in the queue

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/05/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 16 The Many Ways of Love

That's a very interesting spell.

Running to the next!

Author's Response: Good!

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