Reviews For Never Been Kissed
Reviewer: pUpPyLoVe123
Date: 11/29/05 18:12
Chapter: one-shot

10,10,10,10,10!!!!1OMG i luv this story!!!!i must admit,i`m a sucker 4 a good romance an fluff!AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEE

Reviewer: PigWithHair
Date: 11/09/05 23:00
Chapter: one-shot

While I enjoyed the kissing bit, I think it was really out of character for Hermione to go up to Ron's dorm room. I don't think she'd ever do that. Also, I don't think she do that with Harry right there in the room. I liked that you included a lot of kissing for them. Would she bite his neak, though? That seemed out of character to me, too. Bet Ron would've liked it, though.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/20/05 16:13
Chapter: one-shot

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hermione777
Date: 10/06/05 14:56
Chapter: one-shot

i kinda agree with hermionerocks..abt the dont like it part. i dunno what ooc stands 4? but my issue was that its kinda out of character--like hermione wouldnt do something like that.

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 09/30/05 8:04
Chapter: one-shot

A true romance fic!!!! it's great. And I agree with everyone else who said you should write more.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirl916
Date: 07/13/05 11:58
Chapter: one-shot

Awesome! You should write another. I don't think it was really OOC ,though. Just slightly. Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 03/11/05 19:03
Chapter: one-shot

Sorry, didn't really like it. Too OOC for me. But you said you wanted more reviews so I figured I should...But if you write more stories in the future I might read them :)

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 03/11/05 19:03
Chapter: one-shot

Sorry, didn't really like it. Too OOC for me. But you said you wanted more reviews so I figured I should...But if you write more stories in the future I might read them :)

Reviewer: Hmeschooler
Date: 03/06/05 21:46
Chapter: one-shot

Whee! So sweet, cute, funny, and romantic! I love it! I give it a 5, which is good coming from me.

Reviewer: LilmissBrit
Date: 03/04/05 11:52
Chapter: one-shot

It's very good! It's fluffier than my usual, but it's funny enough to get away with it and pull it off. A really fantastic first story! Keep it up (PS: The Savant lives in by a quite lake in the fen of a far off planet called Hjdeug. Sssh!)

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 02/09/05 7:58
Chapter: one-shot

Aww, wow, that was beautiful! Loved the Romeo and Juliet reference. P.S: Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: dolface546
Date: 02/04/05 12:38
Chapter: one-shot

wow!!! awesome story!

Reviewer: DarkMarkGirl
Date: 01/29/05 20:03
Chapter: one-shot

10 10 10!!! Maybe it's just me, but I don't think that "sweat" or "cute" are accurate to discribe this fic. I would agree with RebeccaO. Steamy,hot, or sexy would be better words. A little OoC for both, but you can just chalk it all up to hormones. LoL. Good work.

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/22/05 12:29
Chapter: one-shot

lololol. that was so sweet! i dont really think it was so OOC, and im a person who HATES that and spots it frequently. I think it would be funny to write one more chapter, just to see what harry's reaction was in the morning LOL! wow, that would be funny. very fluffy, and those are the best! this one is def. going on my favorites. Nice, Fluffy, sparkly ten!

Reviewer: alk05
Date: 01/22/05 12:07
Chapter: one-shot

aww, where to start i loved it! it was so cute, i liked how all the punch was spiked..it made me laugh! it is so cute!

Reviewer: The Savant
Date: 01/08/05 11:39
Chapter: one-shot

I heard you needed more reviews. So here you go. Nice story, but very OOC. Then again, what story isn't, right? The idea that they hook up after a spiked-punch party in which neither really attended was really novel- I applaud you for that.

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 12/29/04 12:13
Chapter: one-shot

Mmmmm, very steamy! Good Job. I liked it a lot.

Reviewer: whispercat12
Date: 12/28/04 0:59
Chapter: one-shot

IT was awesome and definitely out of character of Hermione but hey that what Fan Fictions our like. Nothing like this would ever happen but something similar might or maybe something even better will happen. Anyway I love one shots, no cliffhangers.

Reviewer: dreamsr4ever
Date: 12/25/04 10:18
Chapter: one-shot

sorry, i don't like it . just isn't my cup of tea. possitively no offense to u.

Reviewer: mione87
Date: 12/22/04 14:18
Chapter: one-shot

I absolutely love it-what a first kiss!!! I would have rewieved earlier, but I had no account! It was GREAT!

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