Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 07/29/05 18:51
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Okay, I would have made it over her sooner but I was trying to re-read HBP a little slower this time seeing as how I speed read it all in one day. K, I'm here at the recommendation of none other than Craftyslytherin (my sis of course). Your doing a great job on your story and I can't wait to read more. Those wretched Dursley's, I never liked them anyway but you did a great job in helping me loathe them. I'm so glad the Order member came in to wisk him away, and yay for Moody slammin' Vernon against the wall. I'm off to r&r your next chap. 10/10 =)

Author's Response: Thanks!! I never like the Durslry's much either, so I would be more than happy to help you loathe them My main objective, was to find a way to get the Order to come to the Dursley's without Harry writing them that he was not ok. Thatís when I thought about him forgetting to write. With Sirius on his mind constantly, he could easily forget to write. Moody slamming Vernon into the wall...well I couldn't let that walrus getting away with what he did to Harry. Anyway, Thanks for the review, and don't for get to give my thanks to Crafty!! See you in the next chap!!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 07/28/05 22:21
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

YAY! It worked! Sorry. I know, I'm weird. I just don't like to see the rating of one of my fave stories get knocked down. Cheers!

Author's Response: I got four and a half stars...thank you so much Crafty!!! Your not weird, your just very nice!!! And thanks so much for saying that my fic is one of your favorites. It really meant a lot to me! I know that yours and mrsgeorgeweasley's fics are by far everyone's favorites. I know there mine!!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 07/28/05 22:19
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

SOMEBODY dragged your rating down! We can't have that! Let's see if I can get your half a star back!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Your the Best!!!

Reviewer: This Is Not Here
Date: 07/23/05 14:40
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Excellent! please update as soon as possible! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, chapter 4 should be up soon! And by the way, I like your penname. It's funny!!

Reviewer: loonyluna63
Date: 07/14/05 8:35
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

WOW! i love when the twins get hit with the spoons. Very nice. but i haven't seen any harry/ginny and hermione/ron romance. Maybe that will start in chapter 4. Anyways i give these three chapters a 100/10. Can't wait for chapter 4!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!! About H/G. I really want to start them off as friends, and have them learn a little more about each other for a little while. R/Hr on the other hand, I'm going to try get them together as soon as possible. The next chapter should come out after the mods return. All I will say is, H/G talks alone in chapter 4. Anyway, thanks for the review. hope to see you in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Dragen
Date: 07/13/05 5:14
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Nice story... can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Good idea in turning Harry's family into amarals (Sorry about my spelling) So when is the next chapter going to be up? I might have already read it, but when is the Romance Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny... I just can't remember. And at the moment I can't go back and read the first two chapter again, as I'm reading other fics at the moment. 12 out of 10 :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments!!!! Chapter 4 should be up when the mods return!! Anyway, thanks for the review, and don't worry about your spelling. Everyone has a problem every now and then!!!!!

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 07/04/05 11:03
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

When on earth are you updating the next chapter, please asap.

Author's Response: Sorry it's taking me so long to update. I can hardly find enough time to complete chapter 4 because I have to practice every minute of every day on my guitar. Me and my band have three preformances in a row. However, I will just have to make time to finish my next chapter for all of you who like to read it. My next chapter will be done asap!! Thanks for the review Grindlewald!!

Reviewer: Sydelle Rein
Date: 07/03/05 0:06
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Great chapter! The only thing that really bugged me was that Dumbledore said Harry's not living with the Dursley's anymore...that just seems to clash with what he said at the end of the fifth book...Other than that brilliant!

Author's Response: I actually thought about that before i actually wrote it, and I needed to get Harry away from the Dursley's. Dumbledore had to make a defficult decsion on where to put Harry. With Voldemort and His DE looking for him, there is not to many places he could go. Harry is staying at Grimmauld Place because it's the only place(besides Hogwarts) that is safe enough for him. I hope I cleared that up for you. . .

Reviewer: Sydelle Rein
Date: 07/02/05 23:46
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Great start! Can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: You will definitely see more soon!! Just to let you all know, I haven't abandon this fic. I'm just really busy with my band that I hardly have time to even review. But I will start posting as quick as I can.

Reviewer: Mad eye
Date: 06/26/05 22:48
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

That was Really cool i want your brain soo i can Write good like that

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Mad eye. I don't think I write that good, but thanks for the compliment!!!

Reviewer: mookiemoooo
Date: 06/13/05 16:22
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

OMGOMGOMG VERYYYYYYYYYY GOOD STORY! im off to look for more stories you've written!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I probably won't be writing another story until I complete this one. But who knows, I might write a one-shot story while my chapters for this story are in queue. . .

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 06/06/05 14:54
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

As far as my fic goes i can't promise you anything, sorry! I love the way you're portraying Remus as well, sweet and sensitive and caring, you're doing really well!

Author's Response: A fic as good as yours is worth the wait. Anyway's, I wanted to make Remus a little more caring and sensitive in my story because not only has Harry lost his Godfather, but Remus lost another one of his best friends to Voldemort and his Death Eaters. If you have noticed so far, i have hardly mentioned Sirius and the pain Harry feels. Harry is trying to hide his pain from the Order and his friends until Hermione accidentally says something she doesn't mean and Harry is forced to show the pain in his heart. This will happen in chapter 4. Hope you like it.

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 06/06/05 14:29
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Another great chapter, this must be the annual Mrs Weasley week because this is the second fic i've read today where Mrs Weasley was by far the scene stealer. The spoons thing was great by the way. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, you're doing so well!

Author's Response: Thanks. I actually got the spoon idea from one of my childhood memories. Anyway, I'm glad you like my fic so much. I also LOVED chapter 21 for your fic. I hope Ellie doesn't get captured or anything like that. . .

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/05/05 18:11
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Wow! You had a little of everything in this chapter! You managed to make it dark, while at the same time throwing in some humor!! I absolutely LOVED Mrs. Weasley getting after the twins with spoons, so creative!!! I hope I'll be reading your next chapter soon!! (BTW, I updated today so hopefully chapter 12 will be up tonight or tomorrow!)

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. Mrs Weasley getting after the twins and Ron, was my favorite part too. Anyways, I hope to be reading chapter 12 soon. I'm so excited to continue your fic and see what happens!!

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 06/05/05 6:55
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Great fanfic, no doubt its gonna be one of the best. Really impressive, keep it up.10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. I hope I see you in the next chapter. . .

Reviewer: Hollie Weasley
Date: 06/04/05 22:45
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Yay another wonderful chapter! I can not wait for more! This is a wonderful story. It's very interesting. Full of mystery. I love stories like these!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing again. Just wait until I get the next chapters subbmitted.

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 06/03/05 8:36
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Very well done. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope to see chapter11 for the Prophecy's child soon. Chapter10 was very good.

Reviewer: grindelwald
Date: 05/31/05 9:11
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Bloody Brilliant

Author's Response: Wow!! thanks. You are so kind.

Reviewer: Hollie Weasley
Date: 05/29/05 23:40
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Another great chapter! Well done! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. Chapter 3 should be up soon.

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/29/05 22:30
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Look at me! I'm submitting another review so you have an even 10! And why you may ask? BECAUSE I CAN!!!!! Glad to hear Dobby will be in upcoming chapters and just so you know I will be submitting chapter 10 tomorrow. YAYYYY!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for giving me an even ten. I'm so glad I get to read your next chapter soon. I love your story, it's the best. Your freind, Potter123.

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