Reviewer: Dio_the_lonely
Date: 08/28/05 21:59
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

>:( It has been about a week Potter I am disappoted with you. :p

Author's Response: I'm so sorry!! I accidently deleted chapter 6, so now I've got to start over. This time I will work as fast as I can to finish it.

Reviewer: Gin Ovia
Date: 08/24/05 15:51
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

Your story started out a little slow but it's really getting good. I love how Ginny and Harry have some alone time and how they've been teasing and playing. It's so cute. I have an idea about the one who's back but I think I'm wrong. I can't wait to read more!! I wonder what the centaurs are gonna teach Harry? That'll be interesting. I also wanna find out what is in those books. They must be important. Also, I hope we see some more "fluff" between Harry and Ginny (and maybe Ron and Hermione?). It's just too cute! good job!

Author's Response: I agree, my story did start out a bit slow. I'm really glad you think it's getting good though. I'm planning on make it a bit more interesting. The centaur training...let's just say it will help Harry out with unlocking some-thing other than a power to defeat Voldie. The books are by far the most important part of Harry getting power. Not to worry though, Harry should read the right 'book' soon enough. Anyway, thanks for the fantastic review!! The next chapter will have a small bit of Ron noticing Hermione. Hope you read it!!

Reviewer: Dio_the_lonely
Date: 08/17/05 14:25
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Wow, this is really good story. I hope you update soon. Dio gives you a 10.

Author's Response: Not to worry, Dio, i'm almost finish with chapter six, so it shouldn't be long now. And thanks for the ten!!

Reviewer: bombardaboi
Date: 08/16/05 19:50
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Wow this was an Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: bombardaboi
Date: 08/16/05 17:57
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

this is a really kewl story you should make it a movie

Author's Response: A movie. hmmm...that's an idea.

Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 08/08/05 18:00
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

Hmmmm...what evil besides voldy is back.....not sure on that one. As far as why Ginny's fav. color is green I would say it has to do with Harry's eye's. I really like all the stuff with Harry and Ginny around the lake. I'm still so curious about those books now though. It should be interesting with him having occlumency lessons AND lessons from the centaurs (which by the way was a very interesting idea). Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more. =)

Author's Response: Ginny will tell Harry why her favorite color is green, in the next chapter. The books will be a big help to Harry, in the war against Voldemort and some other wizard. As for the evil besides Voldemort, I know some of the reviewers are on the right track!! I'm glad that no one thought about centaur lessons, or even Dobby teaching Harry how to Apparate, yet!! Anyway, thanks for the review lovegood!!

Reviewer: Head Hufflepuff
Date: 08/08/05 1:53
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

That is the most original thing in the world. Yes i figured out both but i dont want to give it away so ill keep quiet (voldemorts back at hogwarts isnt he.) i guess im not good at keeping quiet huh. this is so on my favorites list. HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE.

Author's Response: The next chapter is on it's way!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Biggstone78
Date: 08/07/05 2:22
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

I have no clue who is back!!! And I think that Harry's Favorite Color is Really RED because of Ginny's Hair!!! Harry's eyes are Green therfore Ginny loves Green. And I love this story I can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Ginny wiill tell Harry why her favorite color is green in chapter 6, so hang tight!!

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 08/06/05 19:30
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

I don't know who's back but I think Ginny's favorite color is green because it's the color of harry's eyes. Am I right?? I loved this chapter so please update soon!! I can't wait for more!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for another review!!

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 08/06/05 19:30
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

I don't know who's back but I think Ginny's favorite color is green because it's the color of harry's eyes. Am I right?? I loved this chapter so please update soon!! I can't wait for more!! :)

Author's Response: You will find out why Ginny's favorite color is green in cchapter 6!! I hope you read the next chapter when it comes out!!

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 08/06/05 18:27
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

I've got a few ideas on the voice front, i'm not really sure how acurate any of them are so i'm not going to embarress myself by mentioning them. As for why Ginny's favourite colour is green, my best guess would be that green is the colour of a certain hero's eyes. Am i right? That was a great chapter, it was thoroughly enjoyable, i can't wait to see the next one!

Author's Response: Ginny's favorite color. I guess you will have to wait till chapter six to come out to see if you were right. Thanks for the great review MGW!!

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 08/06/05 0:59
Chapter: Voices from the forest.

YES! THis is the fastest I've seen you get a chapter up! I'm so proud of you! And now I get to be the first to review! I think I know why Ginny's fave color is green :) I also think I know who is back, but I won't say here just in case you don't want people to put guesses into their reviews. I thought I saw a hint somewhere on the forums :) If it's who I think it is, then yes, this is a very original plot, not to mention Harry's coming lessons from the centaurs. Super super job! *standing ovation*

Author's Response: This was my fastest chapter up, all thanks to a super-Beta!! I thought you might have seen that hint in the forums, and I'm very glad that no one thought of this plot yet. My main goal was to get the centaurs to teach Harry how to unlocked his hidden power, and I guess I did it pretty good!! Thanks for the review, and standing ovation Crafty!!

Reviewer: scar_head
Date: 08/05/05 21:59
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

Loved it! Wow, Hermione is sure violent, I'd hate to meet her in a dark ally...

Author's Response: Thanks!! Hermione can be really violent sometime's.

Reviewer: Walkingundead
Date: 08/05/05 16:16
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

Pretty Good. Update soon!

Author's Response: I Just submitted chapter 5, so it should be up soon!!

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 07/30/05 21:56
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

I loved it!! Please update soon!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!! I just finished chapter 5 today. I t should be up soon.

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 07/30/05 7:59
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

YAY!!!! It's up!!! I'm so happy for you :) THis was, of course, a brilliant chapter. Harry was very brave to try and protect everyone from the 'Death Eaters'. And it was funny that Moody found the whole Stunning experience amusing. CONSTANT VIGILANCE! Can't wait for your next chapter, Potter123!

Author's Response: I could never have gotten this chapter up if it wasn't for you and Robin!! And thanks so much for telling lovegood about my fic. Don't worry, chapter 5 is almost done done. Thanks for the great review Crafty!!

Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 07/30/05 7:15
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

LOL, I loved Harry going all stealthy and stunning everyone. Mad-Eye's response was just perfect "that's what I'm talking about, constant vigliance" lol. Oh, and H/G coming out of the bathroom looking all crumpled even though they hadn't done anything and getting "The Look". Hey, I thought Harry was wanting to talk to Dobby after breakfast. That must be where you said you couldn't fit it into this chapter. Great job, I'll be watching out for more chapters! 10/10 =)

Author's Response: The Moody response was my favorite thing to write in this chapter. I imagine he really would say that. Yes, Harry's conversation with Dobby was going to be in this chapter, but I didn't have enough room to fit it. Not to worry though, It will be added in chapter 5. Thanks for another awesome review!!

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 07/30/05 3:38
Chapter: Leaving Grimmauld Place

That was great! I loved the way firmly believes that Harry and Ginny are getting up to no good. It's just proof that they can all see the obvious. Harry stunning Mad-Eye was brilliant, as was Moody's pride about the whole thing. Hermione and Ron bickering as ever, it was only a matter of time before Hermione hurt Harry when she was aiming for Ron. The chapter was wonderful, i really enjoyed it. Don't leave it so long to update this time or i may be forced to hurt and i'd hate to have to do that, lol! :-) *10*

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review!! I epically like the part with Harry/Ginny & Lupin/Tonks. Your right, It's proof that they can all see the obvious. I loved writing the part when Harry stunned Moody and Hermione hurt Harry while aiming for Ron. If faster updates is what you want, then I will be glad to work my fingers to the bone!! Thanks for reviewing Natpat!! And by the way, I hope to read more on the HP and the Unspeakable Power soon!!

Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 07/29/05 19:53
Chapter: Conversation with Voldemort

Okay, the robed figure hmmmm......let's see....well, the obvious choice would be Voldemort, but I don't think you would have it that obvious hmmmm......or would you, just to throw us off...ooooo your good. I'm so curious about what Harry sent Dobby after for him, do we get to find out in the next chapter cause I don't know how long I can wait? Yeah, and I was wondering why Tonks thought Harry's b-day was just in a couple days than had a look of pity when he corrected her and said it was a couple of weeks. At first I thought that maybe he was losing time similar to Ginny in Chamber of Secrets when Voldy was in his concious, but then everyone else was confirming that his b-day was in a couple weeks. Is that something that will be explained also? Alas, I thought I had a theory there. Ah well, your doing a great job and I am waiting on pins and needles here. Update soon please! Step up for your 10 and go write more. =)

Author's Response: Wow, your good!! You will find out what Dobby was sent to get, in the 5 chatper. I had no room to fit it in chapter 4. Chapter 5 will also explain why Tonks thought Harry's birthday was in a couple of days. Thanks for another great review lovegood!! Chapter 4 is now up!!

Reviewer: lovegood
Date: 07/29/05 19:09
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

ahhhh, gonna leave us off confused now are ya! That's okay, I like cliff hangers. I meant to tell you on my review of the 1st chap that I felt so bad for Harry after he had that dream. Okay, this one was good I imagine it would be hard for him to be back at Grimmauld place and you did a good job with that. I'm glad Harry was let into the meeting, I mean he's going to be dealing with alot now and he has just as much right to be there. Oooo, the idea of Voldemort sending part of himself into Harry is a horrid thought and a very great idea. Skipping off to the next chapter. Grab the 10 trailing behind and I'll see ya there! =)

Author's Response: I actually felt bad for after the dream too!! I wanted Harry to have a rough time in chapter 2, sorry, bit I needed to make him feel as though he was being suffocated when everyone was in the kitchen. Yes, Harry has every right to be there. It's as much his fight as it is every other Order member's. Voldemort sending a part of himself into Harry was an original idea. I wanted to do something no one thought of yet. I hope no one thought of it be-fore me!! Anyway, Thanks for another great review lovegood!! See you in the next chap!!

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