Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/29/05 19:13
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

Another truly great chapter! I'm so glad you finally got it up! Your details are very good and I'm glad you threw Dobby in there as well :) I'm anxious to read your next chapter and hope I'll be seeing it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. I guess you can say that Dobby has a very important part of my plot. During the next three chapters, he will be teaching Harry something, along with helping him out with a little surprise for Voldemort. Chapter three should be up sometime this week if it's good enough. I hope chapter 10 for your story will be up soon also.

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 05/29/05 17:22
Chapter: Back at Grimmauld Place

I get to be first WooHoo! Another very good chapter, i only have one little word of advice if i may? Don't use the word mad in the sense of angry, we British don't really use the word mad unless we mean crazy. Other than that it was great, i liked Fred and George making Harry a partner, that was a very nice touch. Can't wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I will make sure not to use the word mad unless Ron is making fun about Hermione and her studies. Also, Fred, George and Ron will be in a lot of trouble during the next chapter or two, for something that includes the Dursleys. I really appreciate your review and hope to see you in chapter 3.

Reviewer: Hollie Weasley
Date: 05/29/05 13:02
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Great story! I'm adding it to my favorites. I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Chapter 2 should be up in a couple of days...hope to see your review in the next chapter. . .

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 05/29/05 6:21
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

That was really good! I'm adding you to my favourties list so that i can keep an eye on it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank-you. Chapter 2 should be up soon. I really like your fic too, Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived, cant wait for chapter 21. . .

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 05/23/05 22:09
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Ooooh! I love it! You're a great writer! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, you are very kind. I'm glad that you and a few others enjoy my fic. also, Chapter 2 should be up within a few days.

Reviewer: Crumbled
Date: 05/15/05 7:34
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

This is brilliant! - keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. Chapter 2 is now in queue. There is also going to be a small game for you reveiwers to play in the next chapter. Hope you like it.

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/13/05 23:56
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

Good so far....I'll make sure to look for future chapters;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story so far.

Reviewer: IzzylovesSnape
Date: 05/11/05 5:33
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

im anxious to see where this is going... good start..

Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 2 should be up soon.

Reviewer: mala
Date: 05/10/05 20:58
Chapter: Unexpected Visit

That was a nice way to begin sixth year, sort of tying in the happenings of the year before. I liked the dream sequence also, although I sort of think it's all in Harry's head, that his parents and Cedric wouldn't have told him that if they'd come back from the dead =). I noticed a few awkward spots, mostly from comma errors. In some places, like ...into the darkness leaving Harry alone by himself a comma between darkness and leaving would stop it from feeling run-on. The other problem with this sentence was the repetition of "alone by himself." That happened in the part where Harry took a shower too--you mentioned the words "hot water" three times in a row. These were a few grammatical/flow things I picked out, but I like where you're going with this, and hope to see lots more from this fic! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you about the compliments. I must have missed the comma errors and the parts where I typed the same thing three time in a row. Sorry about that.

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