Another truly great chapter! I'm so glad you finally got it up! Your details are very good and I'm glad you threw Dobby in there as well :) I'm anxious to read your next chapter and hope I'll be seeing it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. I guess you can say that Dobby has a very important part of my plot. During the next three chapters, he will be teaching Harry something, along with helping him out with a little surprise for Voldemort. Chapter three should be up sometime this week if it's good enough. I hope chapter 10 for your story will be up soon also.
I get to be first WooHoo! Another very good chapter, i only have one little word of advice if i may? Don't use the word mad in the sense of angry, we British don't really use the word mad unless we mean crazy. Other than that it was great, i liked Fred and George making Harry a partner, that was a very nice touch. Can't wait for your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I will make sure not to use the word mad unless Ron is making fun about Hermione and her studies. Also, Fred, George and Ron will be in a lot of trouble during the next chapter or two, for something that includes the Dursleys. I really appreciate your review and hope to see you in chapter 3.
Great story! I'm adding it to my favorites. I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Chapter 2 should be up in a couple of days...hope to see your review in the next chapter. . .
That was really good! I'm adding you to my favourties list so that i can keep an eye on it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank-you. Chapter 2 should be up soon. I really like your fic too, Harry Potter and the Girl Who Lived, cant wait for chapter 21. . .
Ooooh! I love it! You're a great writer! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, you are very kind. I'm glad that you and a few others enjoy my fic. also, Chapter 2 should be up within a few days.
This is brilliant! - keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. Chapter 2 is now in queue. There is also going to be a small game for you reveiwers to play in the next chapter. Hope you like it.
Good so far....I'll make sure to look for future chapters;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story so far.
im anxious to see where this is going... good start..
Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 2 should be up soon.
That was a nice way to begin sixth year, sort of tying in the happenings of the year before. I liked the dream sequence also, although I sort of think it's all in Harry's head, that his parents and Cedric wouldn't have told him that if they'd come back from the dead =). I noticed a few awkward spots, mostly from comma errors. In some places, like ...into the darkness leaving Harry alone by himself a comma between darkness and leaving would stop it from feeling run-on. The other problem with this sentence was the repetition of "alone by himself." That happened in the part where Harry took a shower too--you mentioned the words "hot water" three times in a row. These were a few grammatical/flow things I picked out, but I like where you're going with this, and hope to see lots more from this fic! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you about the compliments. I must have missed the comma errors and the parts where I typed the same thing three time in a row. Sorry about that.
