Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 08/26/06 11:29
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

Wow. Sick, but strangley awesome.

Author's Response: I love this review - I use it as a tagline on this fic whenever I send it anywhere.

Reviewer: St Jimmy the Sheep
Date: 07/30/06 19:20
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

Wow...that was shocking. The whole time I was reading I figured it was Ron and Hermione, but... yeah. Great job!

Reviewer: twistedtinkerbell
Date: 07/28/06 12:09
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 07/25/06 1:04
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

I can't believe you portrayed Harry Potter as a rapist, while still in school at that. Impressive.

Author's Response: Hmm, well it's something that's played on my mind for a while. Not specifically the rapist thing, but I just can't understand how a person could still be 'normal' after going through everything Harry has by this point. Either that, or part of me hates him. ;oP

Reviewer: xostupidcupidox
Date: 07/07/06 18:52
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

Well, I'm shocked, I have to say that, but it was brilliant!
excerpt:
...leaving Ginny in sobs behind him.

The air rushed past him for mere seconds before he hit the ground. The Glamour immediately ceased, and the ages old scars appeared alongside the fresh cuts on his hands; the wind caressed his hair away from his forehead, exposing the first one of all.

I had to reread that to realize who it was, and that shocked me so much, I almost fainted(just kidding), but I loved very much! ^^

Author's Response: I'm glad you were shocked, it was meant to be a surprise so I guess that means I'm doing my job properly!

Reviewer: Camron Tawney
Date: 07/04/06 23:34
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow that was intense and amazing at first its so hard to tell who it was beautiful story

~Cam Tawney~

Author's Response: Thank you - intense is good.

Reviewer: bangbangsugar
Date: 06/26/06 23:29
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow. this actually brought tears to my eyes. great fucking job.

Reviewer: bangbangsugar
Date: 06/26/06 23:28
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow. this actually brought tears to my eyes. great fucking job.

Author's Response: The first person who read this cried, at work no less, when he read it. He also looked at me funny, but I think that's because he likes Harry. ;o)

Reviewer: jammin man
Date: 06/23/06 16:23
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

omg so damn good!!

Author's Response: Aah, I like this kind of review - short and to the point. Thanks!

Reviewer: xxMalfoy__Mistrissxx
Date: 06/18/06 20:04
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

ummm...wow ok since the first sentence, i thought it was hermione! it seemed to make so much sense!!! lmao i knew it was harry... but like when it said Ginny @ the end i was like WHOA :O !!! lmao...but seriouslt, Harry, A rapper? i unno.......thats pretty harsh he didnt even consider her feelings for a second.....but i guess it was an alrite story :)..

Author's Response: *nods* i know it was a little harsh of me to portray Harry like this, but people can do the strangest things because of what they think is love.

Reviewer: Black Pearl
Date: 05/22/06 22:41
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

Not very Harry... but I like the detail and the story was decent even though there was rape... well done. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, it's not supposed to be very Harry as we know him. I find the fact that he's so well-balanced quite disturbing to be honest.

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 05/22/06 16:35
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

omg...i was so sure it was ron and hermione...i didn't even think about harry and ginny...good job disguising it...wow...that's actually really scary...AHHHHHHHHHH!

Author's Response: Thank you - I like to try and keep people guessing so I'm glad it worked!

Reviewer: Aithne the Watchful
Date: 05/03/06 17:21
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

I absolutely loved this one. keeps you guessing, and personally, the evil seducers are the best in my opinion. I hope to see more like this if you have that in mind.

Author's Response: I do have more like this written, but just don't seem to find the time to upload. I will though!

Reviewer: iamwhoiam
Date: 04/24/06 17:27
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

I think I'm stunned. I don't know how else to put it. That was very good, but immensely sad. I liked how you didn't tell who the characters were until the very end.

Author's Response: Thank you. :o)

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 04/21/06 21:54
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow, finally! i really wantd to find a story taht wasn't all hap[py, and this definetly falls into that category. THANX! XD

Author's Response: You're welcome! I don't write happy very well, I've never been able to keep a story light and fluffy.

Reviewer: JaxX
Date: 06/04/05 23:12
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

wow, that was...wow. i was a little freaked at the end but..wow!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to know that my writing has that effect. ;o)

Reviewer: Eagle_of_Sin
Date: 05/16/05 19:30
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

That was.......vivid i guess you could say. It almost had nothing to do with "Harry Potter" though except the Head Boy part. But don't you agree that dark and intense writing is so much more easier to write about than happy pappy stuff? To me it is, but that doesn't mean that I like killing, torture, hate, and pain (etc.)--i'm totally against it. Know what I mean?--very good all-in-all. :D

Author's Response: Thank you...and I hate happy pappy! :oD

Reviewer: Quoth
Date: 05/11/05 6:42
Chapter: Can You Take It All Away?

Wow, this is an excellent piece of writing. So dark and powerful. I especially enjoyed the ending; shocking and yet subtle.

Author's Response: Thank you! My first attempt at a songfic, and it's probably the only thing I've ever written that didn't make me tear my hair out. :o)

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