Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 09/04/05 14:00
Chapter: Ch 21: DARK AND LIGHT

Once more, fantastic!

Author's Response: Oh thank you for not forgetting about me when the submissions were down. Almost there...Ch 22 submitted.

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 09/04/05 0:06
Chapter: Ch 20: MALFOY'S CHRISTMAS PRESENT

I am not a big fan of Fudge, but that made me tear up some. Awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. :)

Author's Response: I'll miss him. No more illogical, political rants to write...sigh* Almost finished. Thanks for your reviews.

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 09/03/05 23:54
Chapter: Ch 19: FAMILY TIES

You depicted Fudge's character perfectly. Awwww, a baby! How sweet! I truly enjoyed this chapter, as always. I can't wait to read the next one. :)

Author's Response: Yup, I love writing Fudge...he's such a character. That's why I had him reinstated as Minister...just so I could play with him.

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 08/31/05 17:27
Chapter: Ch 19: FAMILY TIES

Yey once again... great chapter... loved the evil malfoy with the black eyes, is it some sort of demon? ummm

Author's Response: Hmmmmmmm.....let's just think about that for a while. Until the next chapter is validated, at least. (already submitted...shouldn't be long)

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/30/05 15:37
Chapter: Ch 19: FAMILY TIES

First reviewer! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Hermione's gonna have a baby, that is wonderful!! And it's a girl!!! BONUS!! A 10, keep up the good work!!! Update soon

Author's Response: I'm impressed...the chapter just got posted! You must have seen it as it came up LOL! Ch 20 already submitted...

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/29/05 21:49
Chapter: Ch 18: A CALL TO ARMS

The Phoenix has risen, and MalfoySr. is gonna get his fat poohole kicked by the Foursme!! Jesscia ROCKS!!! 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10....

Author's Response: Ch 19 has just been posted! Wheee! Hopefully will be validated soon. Thanks for taking the time for a review. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 08/22/05 13:39
Chapter: Ch 18: A CALL TO ARMS

Wow!! I have been waiting for soo long but it I do not regret it... Excellent chapter, and I must agree that the last sentence was great

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay...but it looks like submissions are still closed. As soon as I can I'll post Ch 19. Your continued support is gratly appreciated!

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 08/21/05 23:56
Chapter: Ch 18: A CALL TO ARMS

Whoa. New chapter! HeronGrange,hehehe. Ten-thousand soldiers for the Dark Army, WOW that can't be good. It's so sad that the Lovegoods and Diggorys are dead, but at the end when " The entire room stood and shouted, The Phoenix rises! " that was just awesome. All in all brillant chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work. :)

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! This chapter has been in queue for about two weeks. Now there is a 'hold' on new postings. As soon as the site lets me post, I will! I think only 5 more chapters...and, they are really fast paced. Thank you for hanging in there with me!

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 08/03/05 16:21
Chapter: Ch 17: IN SICKNESS AND IN HEALTH

Yey again!! I loved da wedding keep the good work

Author's Response: So glad you did! Sorry to others, but I have been a Ron/Hermione shipper from the first day. Wait until you read about their first argument in the next chapter! LOL! Thanks for your review! It is easier now to leave one, isn't it? Thanks to the mighty Vincent for solving the log-out problem...Yea!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 08/03/05 6:58
Chapter: Ch 17: IN SICKNESS AND IN HEALTH

aw!! i looooooooved the part about ron wearing the chudley cannon robes and "making out...what?"!!! nice touch. all in all a great chapter--and i was impressed, it was a perfect amount of fluff.....great job on this!!

Author's Response: I guess on the outside I am a 'fluff' person, but a closet 'angst' person trying like mad to come out! Later on, I tapped some deeper emotions. Hope I let the monster out of the closet. Not much fluff, but still some humor coming up. I really appreciate your hanging in with me!

Reviewer: butterflygirl
Date: 08/02/05 21:55
Chapter: Ch 1: THE UGLY, UGLY DUCKLING

hey I think this story is awsome and that you really have a gift with writting. I thought it was so cool that you made a character that was part farie and with a farie patronous. I didn't like the idea of Ginny dieing but I guess it had to happen for Jessica and Harry to hook up. Well keep writing and I'll keep reading ;)

Author's Response: Well, yeah, if Ginny were still around there would be a problem...but she died bravely many years ago. Harry had to be alone. The story ends at 24 chapters...I would be delighted if you continued to read until then!

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 0:13
Chapter: Ch 1: THE UGLY, UGLY DUCKLING

lol. don't worry im sure i'll enjoy it either way.

Author's Response: ; . ) How do you do a BIG smile? Thank you!

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 23:57
Chapter: Ch 17: IN SICKNESS AND IN HEALTH

awww that was so sweet, from start to finish. I especially liked the part of Ron wearing the Chudley canon robes to his wedding. It was such an excellent chapter. Keep up the great work. oh yeah quick question, if you dont mind,: you said that this story was only 24 chapters long, are you planning on writing another fic after?well anyways great chapter. keep up the awesome job! :)

Author's Response: Erm...uhmm...I actually had 4 chapters of a sequel written, but HBP kind of messed up most of it. I'm trying to rewrite, but it's difficult. So much has changed now... Just pretend you haven't read HBP so you can enjoy the rest of this...I hope!

Reviewer: SapphireAster
Date: 07/30/05 4:00
Chapter: Ch 16: PARTY TIME

I love it, far!! Please let me know when you put up more chapters!! I just have one question...Are you going to explain what happened to Ginny anymore??

Author's Response: Next Ch in queue already...should be up soon. Sorry, poor Ginny is gone, but not forgotten. She is mentioned in the next Ch., but no more after that. In my head, I imagined Ginny, Neville and Tonks all died bravely,fighting Deatheaters.Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 07/29/05 18:27
Chapter: Ch 16: PARTY TIME

thanks Stephanie for the fast work to get these chapters up and running and especially thanks Wiccan for the wonderful story. This was truly an awesome chapter. Poor Jessica, having to go through all that. I can't imagine how horrible it must have been, and yet she remained entirely loyal. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I have a feeling that Draco is going to play an important role especially since i doubt very much that he is still loyal in the eyes of his father. wow, only 24 chapters long? that means only 8 chapters left? i dont think i can wait to see how it all unfolds, it's getting really good. Keep up the great work. :)

Author's Response: Well, I have been accused of rushing the story...I could have stretched it out a quite bit more, but I like a fast pace. The end (last 3-4 Ch) especially is...well, rather rapid. And keep watching Draco...Muahahahah!

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 07/29/05 18:06
Chapter: Ch. 15: TEN THOUSAND DEMONS

wow. Excellent chapter! I truly loved the concept of the ten thousand demons. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work. :)

Author's Response: "Ten thousand demons" just settled in my mind as a good chapter title...then there had to be some way to stop them. So the Faeries seemed a good bet. There will be more on this later...thanks to good ole Hermione! Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/29/05 7:18
Chapter: Ch 16: PARTY TIME

YEAH im the first to review!! WOW these updates are fast! awesome chapter.....brilliant!! everyone is perfectly in character (once again...) and it was FANTASTIC. keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Like I said before, the story is complete (24 chapters) and I post as soon as the previous chapter is validated. You can thank the wonderful Stephanie, who Mods this story, for her tireless and rapid work!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/28/05 10:50
Chapter: Ch. 15: TEN THOUSAND DEMONS

YEAH im the first to review!! .....lets see here. WONDERFUL JOB!!! everyone is perfectly in character, and i LOVE the malfoy scenes...his course of action was very in character...oh, and crabbe and goyles names are VERY creative!! hmmm i wonder whether snape is good or bad in this story?? he said he can throw off the order protection, so....mmm.....i dont know, ill just have to wait to find out. wont have to wait long tho! once again, GREAT job on your quick updates!! theyre awesome!!!! basically, everything in this was FANTASTIC. keep up the great work!!! *highest # you can think of/10*

Author's Response: I actually looked up the names on different web sites....Vance means 'dweller of fens'...meaning they came from a swamp. I thought that was appropriate! I wish Hermione's research was true, but it is entirely a figment of my imagination. Would be nice though! Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/28/05 10:13
Chapter: Ch 14: DINNER AND A DATE

GREAT chapter, especially the part with harry and jessica!!!! i want to write more, but i REALLY want to read the next chapter, so...ill try to write more next time!! WONDERFUL job!!!!

Author's Response: well...I really had to tone this down a bit to post here...snicker

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/28/05 10:03
Chapter: Ch 13: SUBTLE, AND NOT SO

wow!! i check for updates and theres three!! YES, i would love a susu/dobby wedding!! ...his finest clothes....*laughs* perfect characterization on snape...how he almost admired malfoy and how condescending he was.....well, like the former, i would leave a longer review if i didnt have two more chapters to read! (YAY!!) i continue to be SO amazed at how quick these updates are....GREAT job!!!! off to read more.

Author's Response: Oh, I did love writing Snape in this chapter...I get to vent all my spite and pretend it is from him....LOL Really, Jessica has to learn a lot...and fast. She has been leading to sheltered a life.

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