Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 18:28
Chapter: Ch 18: A CALL TO ARMS

Just because JKR started killing people off like she was ceazy, does every author have to do the same thing? Just asking.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 17:53
Chapter: Ch 16: PARTY TIME

Even if it was Lucius polyjuiced as Draco, why would this woman take anything from him? He has attacked her twice. Doesn't make sense.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 17:42

Just a point and I should have noted this earlier in my reviews. Although this is a good storyline, having Draco Malfoy as part of the ministry is nonsense. No offense.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 17:33
Chapter: Ch 14: DINNER AND A DATE

The beginning of a lovely relationship. Not too much. Not too little. Nice touch and hermione is on the case. If there is some ancient magic going on with Jessica's patronus, Hermione will find it.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 17:06
Chapter: Ch 12: STARK REALITY

So in this storyline Tonks is dead and Ginny is dead, Fred is alive. What else do we have in store. Are the Weasleys ok? There hasn't been any mention of Arthur and Molly. Well I guess this isn't really a Harry/ Weasleys story though. Is it. I'll read on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 16:49
Chapter: Ch. 11: PRACTICAL EXAM

I like this girl and at some point I know she is going to knock Draco Lalfoy silly. YAY. Good story.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 04/26/11 13:25

I'm still reading and i love it.

Reviewer: maya potter
Date: 01/24/10 13:05
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

OMG , this story is more than amazing
it is outstanding
dont think that that my words are few cuz i think it is not this nice, it's just that am speechless
i never read a story so beautiful like this one and trust me i read alot
i guess i'll stop babeling now and say keep on the most amzing work and do astounish us with more of it

Reviewer: lmcayton
Date: 12/11/08 19:41
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

Wow.... you are an exceptionally talented author. I loved how you worked your own take on how Dumbledore had survived, and you also created a very lovable OC. You tied up the loose ends, and added your own touches, like the Faerie. Splendid job.... perhaps you should be an author.

Reviewer: lmcayton
Date: 12/11/08 18:39

This story is very good. :)

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 09/06/08 10:10
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

Great fic, I loved the character of Jessica and the Faerie involvement, great use of imagination. Thanks and keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Linwe Ferland
Date: 07/20/08 17:12

I really enjoyed this story!!

Reviewer: Dane Shaw
Date: 07/03/08 23:32

It was a refreshing twist and an enjoyable read, however I can not say that I enjoyed the story as much as I could have. To me, things seem sporadic mostly, and rushed. I'd enjoy to see more from you, but do not be afraid to limit yourself, write, write, write. Damned be we who are too lazy to sit here and read 300,000+ word story. If you want to do it, do it. I think you could write a truly remarkable story if it were fleshed out more. Cheers.

Reviewer: nkaul
Date: 06/18/08 10:34

it's good but why did u kill ginny off?

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 04/04/08 15:27
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

I enjoyed this very much. I don't think I've ever liked a "mary Sue", story before. You created a very likeable and interesting character. I'd like to see you go forward. There was too much left undone. What happened to Draco. Do Jessica and Harry marry. What does Ron do when he finds our Hermione is pregnant. What will Jessica do now and how will she chose her next wand and what is her patronus? Just a few things I would like to see explored. Aslo Sverus Snape deserves a life and some congratulations for his years of scarifice. Thanks for the greta entertainment the last few days.

Author's Response: REALLY read my story! Whee, Whoopee and Wow. From your questions, I find that you truly understood some of the 'sequel' seeds I planted. Yes, I had planned on a sequel and have written a few chapters, but fell into a plot hole. Then my puter gave out and my new one with the all exaulted 'Vista' doesn't come with 'Word' I can't write at the moment. I really want to revisit this story, because I think I have learned much through reading more. I also want to explore Snape (although AU at this point...well it all is with DD still alive) Perhaps some day soon. I thank you so very much for such an insightful review. You give me hope that I can continue.

Reviewer: edudes13
Date: 03/26/08 12:26

hey, i'm still reading

Author's Response: *snicker* *snort* I knew there was a reason I never deleted that request. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: trustsnape38
Date: 11/27/07 7:25

I really enjoyed your story and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hey, love the name! I adore Snape even if JK doesn't. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such nice words.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 10/20/07 13:17
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

I really enjoyed reading your story, Harry not ending up with Ginny was an unusual and surprising twist, but nonetheless welcome as there have been alot of writers sticking to that plot. It was also nice to see Harry find someone like himself, an orphan who almost dies ridding the world of evil. I look forward to more of your writing.

Author's Response: It is awfully cliche'...the overcoming the past and saving the world thing, but I really wanted a strong female character for a change. So glad you liked Jessica. Thanks for the kind review!

Reviewer: ipodfreak15
Date: 07/25/07 21:25
Chapter: Ch 24: EPILOGUE

I thought the story was very interesting, rarely have I seen a story where Ginny died and I must (somewhat guiltily) admit that I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed reading the story, all 24 chapters, and found it to be almost completely free of errors in grammar. The plot was interesting and fresh, just don't be afraid to go into more depth and breadth about some of the more mundane things(lessons, training, weddings, borings stuff like that.
Excellent work, keep writing!

Author's Response: If I have had any major complaints, it is that I did 'rush' some things. Mainly, I have read so many weddings, training, etc, that I couldn't make it 'fresh' enough. Hopefully, I'm learning. Thank you for the helpful critique!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 07/24/07 17:00
Chapter: Ch 3: A WHOLE NEW WORLD

*looks confused* What's a " ‘Mary-Sue’? " 10/10

Author's Response: A disgustingly perfect female character.

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