this is so dark
i never thought of luna as someone who anyone could emagine to kill herself
That was soooo sad!!!! The most sadest one I had ever read that was a one-shot!!! I would cry if I wasn't so tired.
Very sad! I suppose it could be likely, but Luna seems to have achieved an inner peace in J Rowling's books that people like Harry, for example, do not yet have. She seems too serene to end herself that way. The writing was good though, and I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I know that it didn't happen, but, hey, it's fiction; I'm making this stuff up. Thanks!
Interesting take on Luna's life. Not how I imagined it but to each 'is own, right? Sad. But still good. More detail would make it great though. It seemed like I couldn't get into the story before it was over. Good job!
Author's Response: To tell you the truth, I really don't think Luna's life was much like my story either, but I was experimenting. Thanks for reviewing!
It was nice but ended much too abruptly. You should have described her getting older and pulling even further into her shell before saying that she died in my opinion. Rating this a 5.
Author's Response: I shall consider re-writing the ending. Thanks for reviewing!
Interesing, the first time I read it I found it to be a little too like your Bella story, but now I really think that you have something going with Luna. Once again well, done. Do you think you coud perhaps write a humor? How about something with Bella and Severus? Just an idea.
Author's Response: Hmm... I have several plot ideas in my head, which have been evading rent for several months. One is an ironic, sarcastic humor, which I have been told I'm good at writing. And you are right on target with the Bellatrix/Severus story. I started one a month and a half ago! And you make me remember that there are people who would be interested with that, so I think I'll finish the first chapter shortly. Thanks for reviewing!
I don't think Jo Rowling's Luna Lovegood is that depressive, but the development of her personality as you show it is perhaps a more realistc one anyway. Good writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! You are sweet to review all my stories even when you didn't enjoy my first!
Wow, that was amazing. I loved that different outlook on how Luna feels inside. And so sad! I hope that doesn't really happen! You're very good with emotions!
Author's Response: Thanks; I hope that it doesn't really happen either. As you might be able to tell, I have been enjoying taking new book five character and writting their backgrounds. Bellatrix, Tonks, Luna... Wow, I just noticed that!
Another example of truly imaginative writing! Too bad Luna felt she had no other choice but to kill herself though. Quite sad.
Author's Response: Thank you; the reviews for this fiction really inspire me. I had no idea that people would think this was that good.
Wow. That is all I have to say. That was pure brilliance; you really have talent. I was so shocked at this perspective of Luna's life. She seems so happy, but maybe that is just an act... Well anyways, well done. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you; between your review and the last I am speechless. I really hope that you read my other stories. I am really happy right now!
Let me just say wow. This was an excellent story. It was rather depressing and slightly unusual. I reaaly thought it was well written. Very sad ending, but on brilliantly written. Well done. Can't wait to read more of your stories. -HPotter7
Author's Response: Thanks, and I think you have a story, so I'll review it. I have several more one-shots coming soon, and I hope you'll read them also. I have been experimenting with one-shots and am enjoying them immensely. I have 3 new one-shot ideas coming into my head. Thanks so much, your review really made me happy and surprised.
gr8 fan fic, salightly depressing but maybe Luna does think like that. Hope we find out more in HBP...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! 3 on the first day! Wow! And I can't wait for July 16th!
nice fanfic... but isn't Luna normaly quite happy?
Author's Response: Yes, Luna is portrayed in the 5th book to be normally happy, but this one-shot was what I used to explore the other possibilities. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
omg that was really good and sad. it was just like Luna's life really. and she commited suicide...really sad but good at the same time. 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I have been experimenting with one-shots. Please read my others; I have 3 in queue.