Good, but is missing a little care. All considered a 6.5 on 10
This just seems like a jumble of thoughts. Not in a bad way, I love it. I feel like I've stepped into a bad dream Harry is having, and he can't stop re-living all of those things. Just quick flashes of each, sorry I don't make sense.
Thats a good poem, but I much prefer your one about Luna!
Very good. I think you really captured the way Harry felt in forth year.
I love HP poems, especially when they are written well, as yours is. !!!!! write more poems soon!!!
Wow, I felt bad 'cause there was only one review...anyways..I liked it. Would you do me a favor and R&R my two poems? They are called "What Happened" and "Confused." Thanks much!!
Author's Response: Wow thanx for the review! Ur SWEET! lol well thanx again! ~loverofluna~
Good, but when you wrote 'to young' didnt you mean 'too young'?
Author's Response: Thanx for the suggestion! your awesome! i'll change it! thanx again! ~Loverofluna~