Reviews For I am alive.
Reviewer: ARB514
Date: 07/23/07 16:21
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

Good, but is missing a little care. All considered a 6.5 on 10

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 13:28
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

This just seems like a jumble of thoughts. Not in a bad way, I love it. I feel like I've stepped into a bad dream Harry is having, and he can't stop re-living all of those things. Just quick flashes of each, sorry I don't make sense.

Reviewer: Mute swan
Date: 06/26/06 13:30
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

Thats a good poem, but I much prefer your one about Luna!

Reviewer: midnight_me
Date: 01/17/06 21:35
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

Very good. I think you really captured the way Harry felt in forth year.

Reviewer: tree huggers united
Date: 10/16/05 9:31
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

I love HP poems, especially when they are written well, as yours is. !!!!! write more poems soon!!!

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond
Date: 05/10/05 20:20
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

Wow, I felt bad 'cause there was only one review...anyways..I liked it. Would you do me a favor and R&R my two poems? They are called "What Happened" and "Confused." Thanks much!!

Author's Response: Wow thanx for the review! Ur SWEET! lol well thanx again! ~loverofluna~

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 05/10/05 10:58
Chapter: Harry's 4th year

Good, but when you wrote 'to young' didnt you mean 'too young'?

Author's Response: Thanx for the suggestion! your awesome! i'll change it! thanx again! ~Loverofluna~

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