Nice plotline! But it was kind of jumpy. Maybe add a little more detail to make it flow better?
very good. best short story i've ever read.
i like your story; it's unique. you show a side of Ron that we, the readers, don't see so much. i also like the way you put an end to the story, leaving the read with the ability to imagine whatever they want to
it was sweet I guess...but I didn't really get it...
Aww..what a sweet story...little confusing though...but it all works out in the end.
awwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute
That was great, but THAT"S IT??? You have to write more. What happens next? You can't leave me hangin' like this.
It is so sweet! I loved it!
It was very good, though I would not think of Ron as a healer.
um.. ron's a bit harsh don't you think?
lol good job
ron as a healer??? i never would have thought of it that way. cool. good fic
The tears are threatening to come down... I loved it.
Are you planning a sequel? Please say yes.
it just kind of makes you want to cry...
That's a good story because it's it's true, Ron and Hermione are going to be married. There's too much yeuckỳ romance, though.I like the way Neville turned out to be a healer.
its good but ron as a healer?i am not sure it suits his pesonality?
Author's Response: I read all the reviews... thanks to everyone for all the encouragement. About the grammar, I can say only one thing in my defense. English is not my first language. But I'll correct it as I go. Thank you all
it's wasn't too bad. You don't need a space before an exclamtion point or a period after one either. Theredore !. That is wrong. The last few sentences should be strung together, not left seperate. Other then that, it was a good idea.