wow thats really good, i mean thats what i think and just so you knoe my poetry skills suck
Short and sweet! I liked the quick rhythm in this.
Just one thing: "Crumble-Horned snorckack" is spelled "Crumple-Horned Snorkack", but nit-picking aside, I loved it! Kudos!
I like Luna - she's my favourite character. I think you summed her up pretty well. I liked your poem - it was short and I like short ones for some reason...
I liked that; it was whimsical. 'Crumple Horned Snorkacks' is the correct spelling, though. Might you review my poems and stories! Thanks! One is about Luna!
Author's Response: Hey thanx for the review! i'll try to R&R your stuff! Thanx again! ~loverofluna~
LOL, not bad! Would you be a dear and R&R some of my poems? I only have two, so it wouldn't take long. Thanks much!
Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review! ~loverofluna~
Author's Response: Again thanx and Your AWESOME!! ~loverofluna~