Reviewer: The Foreign Quill
Date: 08/30/05 12:52
Chapter: Friend or Foe

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! Sorry. I have athing about notebooks and this is very much, my type of story. Man, I really wish this was my idea. Oh well. Anyway this rocks. I love the idea of them all recording their lives down in a book for Harry to read and now I'm off to read your other one. Just let me say this: AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like my idea.

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 08/28/05 22:27
Chapter: Friend or Foe

I like how you started out Sirius and James. Everyone else has them as best buddies since they first met. :) :O :P

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 08/28/05 16:40
Chapter: Friend or Foe

OH soooo good! but when do we get an update!?!?!?!? I read your other story and I lOVED IT! although I would request not to go quite so umm, "in-depth" this time... ;) but excellent chapter and story. can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: In ways this story will be more in depth and in some ways it will be less. After all, this in not Just a L/J story. This story will talk about Erin and Sirius's relationship as well as others. There will be very "in-depth" parts as you put it because there needs to be to describe the tension and feelings between all the characters.

Reviewer: Jillian
Date: 08/21/05 22:47
Chapter: The Notebook

this story is so good. i love the idea, that he is learning everything about his parents from a notebook. this fic is one of my favorites. i hope you update soon, because i really love your fic.

Reviewer: sillysoraya
Date: 08/14/05 7:02
Chapter: Friend or Foe

when are you updating?! Very good story by the way!

Reviewer: ProngsPrincessLexi
Date: 07/31/05 16:27
Chapter: Friend or Foe

Props for an excellent chappie! That was fluffy at the end, but I love fluff with a passion. I took your advice and read it all again, and I love the beginning, how it fits in with HBP and everything so well. Um, what else can I say? great way to bring The Marauders together, and can't wait for nect chappie! If you like the Marauders, please read my fic, The Truth About Yesterday! If you have time of course. Sorry for that shameless plug. You're on my faves!

Reviewer: liliana1122
Date: 07/29/05 12:56
Chapter: Friend or Foe

FANTASTIC!!!! oh course, i will definitely wait till this story is completely finished, i think it will be a great story!!! also the whole boys' friendship and stuff in first year is interesting!! good background story, cant wait...

Reviewer: rgfawkes
Date: 07/27/05 17:55
Chapter: Friend or Foe

Awesome! Very original from the beginning. Read it all now and loved it! One of the best Marauder Fics I've read.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that my fellow shipper likes my work! I had to change a lot because of the certain um... change that had to be made m in the beginning. i hope it works well.

Reviewer: randomscribblings
Date: 07/15/05 7:14
Chapter: Friend or Foe

Great! Worth the wait! A definite 10/10. Loving the fluff!

Reviewer: Dreaming_witch
Date: 07/13/05 18:14
Chapter: Friend or Foe

I took ur advice and read "too far gone", i luved it!!!!! Ur awesome!!!!!!!! I dont mind thta type of content, its the one which is detailed through...well....what happens, urs is fine and pretty good!!!!!! I luv ur stories sooooo much, ur sooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, still waiting for the chapter, hurry!!!! Urs truly:Another faithful reader....again saying she loves ur story lots!!

Reviewer: LunaLovegoodDoubleCast
Date: 07/08/05 0:20
Chapter: Friend or Foe

Update! Soon! And I will Swoon! You rule!

Reviewer: Dreaming_witch
Date: 07/05/05 15:13
Chapter: Friend or Foe

Yay!!!!! *hugs u*Thank u sooooo much for putting in another chapter, u rock!!!!!!!!!! Its awesome, fuffyness!!!!!!! Its so nice how they slowly became friends, interesting how cruel people can be when they dont know anything. U should put in some more in Lilys perspective. In the last few years there will be sexual content *gulp*???? Umm....nothing much right!!??? Well, its really good!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep going, im loyaly stuck to ur story!!!!!

Author's Response: Obviously you didn't read "Too Far Gone." Several things happen in the seventh year and one thing happens in the fifth year. I would suggest reading that other story if you want to know what kind of sexual content... it get's a little deep in the seventh year.

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 07/05/05 9:02
Chapter: Friend or Foe

excellant job!!! i love the way they make up!!!! keep it up and update soon!

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 07/05/05 8:57
Chapter: Friend or Foe

aw, that's adorable. yay! fluff is such good stuff. 10/10

Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 07/03/05 8:48
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

Please update soon!!!! This story is really great! I love it!! Why do James and Sirius hate each other, though? Lovin it!!!

Reviewer: Black_Swan
Date: 07/01/05 8:21
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

loverly!! update soon please it drives me insane when you people don't update . . .

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 06/30/05 15:06
Chapter: The Notebook

James didn't particularly care for bullies and he knew that they wouldn't attempt anything on the train, not with the conductor in the next compartment up. He helped the boy to his feet and then ran down the corridor, away from the bullies and smiled at the boy before him. "I'm James Potter by the way." I thought that paragraph was kind of I r o n i c. I think this will be a good story though, I can't wait to read the rest of it (I am a bit confused though. Things are happening kind of fast).

Reviewer: Dorian Gray
Date: 06/29/05 14:25
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

I love where you're going with this story. You're a smashing writer. Update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Author's Response: You guys are really going to love this story... I did warn you about the length of it right? It may be a year or so long project...

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 06/29/05 12:16
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

its a great story, i loved too far gone and i have a feeling im gonna love this. ur an amazing writer. r u sure ur not j/k? 10/10

Author's Response: You flatter me by saying that but no... I wish for it every day though...

Reviewer: Dreaming_witch
Date: 06/27/05 14:52
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

Im first (i think)!!!!!!!!!!! U finally updated,its wonederful, amazing, awesome!!!!! Im soooo u continued, iv been waiting for ever!!!!! It deffently is cool how Jmes and Sirius dont get along, it seems right. Well, like before update sooner oh great writer *bows*!!! 10 deffenatly

Author's Response: I have sent in the next chapter... it is up to the mods to decide whether or not it is posted though. Thank you so much for the comment!

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