Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 06/14/06 17:49
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

wonderful story!!! i liked that you explained how the marauders came to be...i don't see many fics do that. are u going to update soon?

Reviewer: fantasygirl7
Date: 05/18/06 21:22
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

I love it. Great story. When's the next chappie coming out.

Reviewer: houseelves4ever
Date: 05/16/06 16:23
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Wait a minute...Frank Longbottom was not a Marauder. Why is he in this scene? I think he should have been really hungry and have gone down to dinner, and James could have gone through Frank's things in order to get the dictionary. Other than that, It's reeeeeeeeeally good. I reeeeeeally like it.

Reviewer: liliyflower
Date: 05/09/06 14:42
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

I never knew Frank was a maruader?

oh story though!!!

Reviewer: WandOverMatter
Date: 03/25/06 21:30
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Loved it, Please update soon. 10/10

Reviewer: le lycaon pictus
Date: 03/12/06 5:45
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Just read "Too far gone" and now picked up on this. I really liked it. Best fan fiction i have read, and this one has started so well im hooked. L x

Date: 01/23/06 18:00
Chapter: Friend or Foe

ok. wow. you totally ROCK!!!! i luv this story so much!!!! and an added bonus to it is that you put a Linkin Park song on there. I LOVE LINKIN PARK!!!!!! you are so AWESOME! stay cool. 10 outta 10 babe!

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 01/16/06 11:39
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders


Reviewer: Ricci
Date: 12/16/05 11:00
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

I absolutly love this story...You have to update it some time...I read this one after reading Too Far Gone. I can't wait to see how you continue this story. Keep up the awesome work!!

Reviewer: sara_potter
Date: 10/13/05 12:05
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Wow!! Amazing write more. i love ur story(gives-peter-looking-at-james-in-awe-while-catchign-stolen-snitch-type-of-stare)

Reviewer: Dreaming_witch
Date: 09/25/05 14:14
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Soooooo sorry I haven't reviewed, i was lazy!!! It's awesome!!! At last, the MAURAUDERS BIRTH*laughs like maniac*...right....its really super duper and full ofawesomeness...ur so talented... how can u be so talented, how!!!!!!!!!!!? Well, keep updating(this measn faster than before)!!!! oh, right, 10

Reviewer: dumbledore girl
Date: 09/12/05 21:43
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

interesting that frank is a marauder, a nice twist. you write in a very engaging fashion, and your characters are very believable. this chapter was really very very good, you interpret the marauders excellently. update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I try my best. I actually have an in depth character desciption for each of them so i don't get lost! :)

Reviewer: Little_hoole3333
Date: 09/10/05 11:34
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Wouldn't Frank know about them becoming animagi if he was a marauder until fourth year? He would, right? :O :) :P

Author's Response: Yes he would, but they trust him. After all, even though he stops being a marauder he is still their friend. He didn't want to join in the animagi transformation though because he was a little wary of the whole process.

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 09/08/05 11:32
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Really good, but since when was Frank a marauder? 10/10

Author's Response: I'm going for a different type of outlook. Frank is going to be with them until their fourth year, and by then he has *other* things on his mind. Like a pretty blonde girl named Alice. :) TRhey never really stop being friends, he just becomes more mature and decides to stop pranking. Sorry that I didn't explain this!

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 09/07/05 23:34
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

so creative!! i love the "birth" of the name!! can't wait for the next chappie!

Reviewer: Jamie88
Date: 09/07/05 15:50
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

Great chapter! I already can't wait 'till the next one! ;P

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 09/07/05 14:59
Chapter: Birth of the Marauders

awesome 10!!!! hurry with the next chappie!

Reviewer: evil_fairy
Date: 09/03/05 18:10
Chapter: The Notebook

Wonderful Story! I love it! Great way to go back in time with the Journal thing and Harry finally getting to know the story of his parents life in their point of view. Update soon please!!

Reviewer: dumbledore girl
Date: 08/31/05 14:00
Chapter: Friend or Foe

very good story. i love james/lily fanfics and this is one of the better ones i've read. i like the originality of your storyline, and i really admire how you managed to work in your own ideas while staying true to what is in the HP books. Your scrupulous attention to detail is also wonderful- i hate stories with obvious errors in them. thank you for the story, and please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I try my hardest to stay true to the books. I know a lot of people will start telling me how wrong I am when the story gets going a little more but I have my reasons... :)

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 08/31/05 12:50
Chapter: Friend or Foe

OMG!!! this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED to read more!!!!! please please please please please please please please please please update soon!!!! i'm dying! 10 10 10 10 10!!!

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