Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/24/07 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Welcome To The Madhouse

I really like this story so far, I think it's hilarious. Expecially the part about Hermione pointing out that Dumbledore's shoes don't match his beard, because I could see how something like that would actually interest him. I didn't like however how you kept giving the full title of Snape's list. It was funny the first time, but then it just became redundant. I think calling it "his list" would have been plenty.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 09/22/07 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Welcome To The Madhouse

'Fanmail address'! rofl Great start.
Poor Hermione. What on earth is wrong with her? Off to find out ...

Reviewer: SiriusOrSeverus
Date: 09/22/07 10:03
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

Hahaha,
This story was amazing, and funny.
I knew Dumbledore was up to something:)
great job!

Reviewer: fuzzypeaches07
Date: 09/21/07 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

lmao,,, thats a GREAT end to the story
Congradulations! Willl you write any more humor?

Reviewer: Lily Elegance
Date: 09/20/07 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

Ahhh! The Curse of the Lemon Drops has been lifted. It was such a great story and I loved that bit at the end.

Reviewer: SparkleDust
Date: 09/20/07 3:11
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

SO good!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/19/07 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

Yes, I smell a sequel! :D

I loved Hermione's little paragraph about the fate of her occupants. Very funny. I'll probably memorize it and recite it at the oddest moments. Like geometry. :D

Great ending. It definitely lived up to the rest of the story. I would've laughed if Hermione had demanded a kiss from Severus, though. Maybe next time. :D

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 09/19/07 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

oh i love that! thats hilarious. spinach...yummy...

Reviewer: metalheadrocker
Date: 09/19/07 11:32
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

cool

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 09/19/07 8:28
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

freaky ending! I can't believe he was experimenting on the students! if that's what he was doing that is.. anyway, I love this story! so funny.. a bit sad its over, but then again it's alright, cause elseway it would be drawn-out in the end.. but loved it! =)

Reviewer: grednforgesgirl
Date: 09/18/07 22:33
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

xD that story was hilarious
i like it! ha it lightening my dreay mood. thanx!

xoxo
grednforgesgirl

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/18/07 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Welcome To The Madhouse

This is very good framework for a story. Good job

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 09/18/07 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

haha! so Dumbledore was behind it all! is he? i'm confused. Well, anyway, gr8 story, too bad its over.

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 09/18/07 3:14
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

Hee hee, this is quite, quite amusing ... I love what Severus say to Hermione after she's cured!! A rather insane Hermione was bloody hilarious!

Tickled Pink

Reviewer: chasing_willow
Date: 09/17/07 19:32
Chapter: Chapter 3: His Own Little Fan Club

What could have possibly turned our strict, sensible Hermione into.. a "sex-crazed rhinoceros on bad acid"? (as Terry Pratchett would have put it)
that seems a little out of bounds even for the Twins and their wheeze-worthy exploits.

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/17/07 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Moment Of Truth

lol. I loved the ending! This was a fun story, from beginning to end. :)

Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 09/12/07 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 8: Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes

i thought those Weasleys had something to do with it! I hope you update real soon!

p.s. i love how you call Severus Sevvie!

Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 09/12/07 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 8: Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes

i thought those Weasleys had something to do with it! I hope you update real soon!

p.s. i love how you call Severus Sevvie!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/11/07 17:13
Chapter: Chapter 8: Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes

Hee hee, very funny chapter! A couple of nitpicks, then I'll tell you how excellent it is.

He had wondered where he should go to get the drops when he rememberd the note Albus had slipped him during one of their meal-time conversations.

'Remembered' is spelled wrong. You forgot the 'e' after the second 'r'.

She had filched the firebold from the shop window of Quality Quidditch Supplies and attempted to fly off with it, which had resulted in Severus earning himself a life-long ban on that shop.

'Firebold' should be 'Firebolt.'

George’s eybrows shot into the air (literally, he must have put some charm on them) and Fred, who had managed to disentangle himself from Hermione’s strong grip, asked incredulously, “why do you need them, Professor?”

I think 'why' should be capitalized here, but I'm not entirely for sure.

Okay, moving on to how great this is! While I'm thinking about it, I just want to say that this a very creative idea. I can't wait to see what Hermione does to Severus before he gives her the lemon drops (do I see a kiss in the future?). And my favorite line of the entire thing:

“Nothing separates me from my Sevvie!” she shouted enraged at the twins and stomped out of the shop, following Severus.

Genius! Keep up the good work! :D

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/06/07 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 8: Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes

lol. That book seemed so sinister... can't wait to read more! ;)

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