add on please add I'll be youre biggest fan ever if you do ^-~*
is there more because i like it so far :D
Cool, but wasn't there a second chapter?
If not then this was a bit random.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic toatally roxs! If this fic rocked your other ones must be too!
Author's Response: Thanks! Go read them, then!
Wow this one was good too!! I liked it, as I never saw Moony liking agirl before. I kind of feel sorry for him, Moony is so sweet. I liked it all the same!
Author's Response: Thanks; Lupin is sweet!
I really liked it! Sirius noticing Elizabeth first was a nice touch. It has definitely piqued my interest and I can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope that you continue to read and review!
Re-reading this reminded me of how much i liked it, the interaction between the marauders is spot on and i absolutely love Remus!
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews!
I like the way Sirius is the first to point her out, not Lupin. Lots of potential, hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you keep reading and reviewing!
Wow. Very Good. I like it, but, as I've heard from others, and to which I can agree to: They all liked Wormtail as their friend, and usually, friends don't tell their friends to shut up. Sometimes they do, of course, but not when they get worried because of a stalker that was just a joke for Moony. Otherwise, Good! EXCELLENT! 10000000000/10! BUT...Lupin and Tonks are meant 4 each other, man! (me and my freinds agree...or at least the one that planted that idea does!)!
Author's Response: Well, I'll think about the whole Pettigrew thing.
I read this on your other name, is it just me or did you change some of it? I thought that the note scene was longer and in Herbology? I also like the name Elizabeth Wenham, you must be a LOTR fan, I am too. I can't wait to hear her and what you do with her!
Author's Response: I might have changed some, but only to revise. The note scene wasn't changed at all; if you re-read the two they're exactly alike. I really like the name Elisabeth Wenham. I think it's a really good OC name, and I love how the first and last names flow so smoothly. Yes, if not just because of the Wenham bit, I am a LotR fan at heart. Also, you caught my old username, no? I'm glad you reviewed. Thanks!
Oh sorry. Rather embarassing that I mixed up Remus with Sirius, but to defend myself I would like to add that when I wrote the review I hadn't had any sleep for about 48 (spending last night writing the first chapter of GGLF). My fault.
Author's Response: No problem! Can't wait for your story!
I love Maurauder fics and yours is really cool, though if you look at it you'll see that each paragraph is roughly half as long as the one before. I think you are loosing heart at writing some of your stories midway through and then having to finishe it rather lamely (though I'm confidant that chapter two will probably bring the story into action again, right?) Where is firstly stated that that girl is Ravenclaw? Did I just miss something out or is she really suddenly just called the Ravenclaw? There seem to be some cracks in Siriuses personality too (first, lady-killer, then blushing when smiled at by a girl and then even to much interested into classes to notice pretty girls sitting right beside him, though I see that was probably one of the better parts to introduce her to the Mauraders) Sorry that this review does not come to an end, but you told me you like my being honest so I had to poor my heart out. ;o) All in all it's well written and ... did I already say I'm into Maurader fics? When you can not remember what you've been writing on the top of a review it's the surest sign to know it's time to end it. Awaiting updates! PS: My story comes on fine, thanx for the question. The first chapter is still in Queue though and I just wanted to wait until it gets accepted (most hopefully) and I receive some positive (again very most hopefully) reviews to carry on with the second chapter. I've of course already got the basic story-lines however. At least I can look forward to an honest review from you. PPS: I'm sorry to dissapoint you but I'm not German, I'm Austria, which is a neighbouring country of German, allthough the Austrian native language is german as well. Sorry for taking up all that space
Author's Response: I will fully answer this in about 10 minutes; I'll re-read my chapter. Oh, and I must really be hallucinating and tired (I got up at 6:30 on a Saturday! Urgh!), because I read your bio and saw that you were from Austria... I just got them mixed up. Basically I like German language a bit more than the country, and that's what I was meaning to say. Thanks for the long review! I'll be sure to give a long answer!
Author's Response: Time for the long review:
#1: The Ravenclaw: Yes, suddenly the girl is referred to as that numerous times; I presumed that at least one of the Marauders would see her robes and notice the coloring (obviously, blue trim would be Ravenclaw). But, that was a bit of a problem for the reader, as I now see. I think after this review I'll add a short bit to sentence that will mention her robes.
#2: Sirius' Personality: Yes, Sirius is first portrayed as a ladies' man. But, as you can see if you re-read the chapter, Remus Lupin is the one that blushes and is too much of a bookworm to notice Elisabeth. I'm sure that was just an honest mistake on your behalf. I do appreciate you pointing it out to me anyways!
#3: As for the thought that I might be 'losing heart' or in other words, getting bored while nearing the ends of chapters and stories: I do see your point in that. Bellatrix and a few others do end rather abruptly and ackwardly; I think I shall soon re-write the ending to Bella.
I thank you very much for pointing out everything that caught your eyes in all of my stories. It's amazing that you stumbled across one without any referral and then proceeded to read and review the rest! Reviews are a joy to my heart and I was very happy to receive them yesterday and today. Thanks again!
Yours is the first story set back in the time of the Marauders that I've read yet.....and I liked it! I will be sure to watch for updates...a very good beginning!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I've introduced you to Marauder fan fictions. I normally write 'other' stories, ones that don't have to do with the Marauders or the Trio, but I had been wanting to make a Lupin/OC and I was reading Shakespeare... And this came out of it, somehow. Thanks for the review!
I like it! I'm glad Remus is going to get some action. I think Elisabeth will be able to handle the werewolf issue. I like her already. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can't wait to write the werewolf scene.. It's in my mind; the plot is so suspenseful in that scene... Thanks for reviewing!
Aww...I want Remus to get the girl! He is so sweet, and it seems like he is always overshadowed by James and Sirius. Ah well...life goes on...Anyways, great story! This girl, Elisabeth, has potential!
Author's Response: I want Remus to get the girl also... We'll have to see... Remus almost always is overshadowed in Marauder fanfics, unless he is the main character. I think I'll write a Peter/OC story next! Lol! The poor OC! Thanks for reviewing.
Well, this story sounds so cute. I love Remus. I canít wait and see how they hook up. Oh, but is Sirius going to get her first? HmmÖ Got me thinking, you did. She sat, actually, just beside her, isnít her supposed to be him? :S Now, I know that this is your story, but isnít it in the third year where they get to pick their electives (or whatever)? Well, this is a good story. You got me hooked! Carry on! Dani (heh, I have tried and tried to review but it kept on logging out! OMG so annoying!)
Author's Response: Hmm... IS Sirius going to get her? And what was Elisabeth talking to Lily about? Surely they haven't been friends? Hmm... I'm glad I've got new readers. I changed usernames, so I lost numerous reviews already. *sobs* 41 on my story An American in Hogwarts. *sobs more* But guess what? I have 8 stories in queue that have been there for 3 days, so sometime today they'll be online! Go me! Thanks for the critiquing; but I really really need them to have Muggle Studies this year. Let me check the other bit and I'll get back to you. Thanks! I love reviews that point out things!
Author's Response: I love your username! Oh, gosh... You're right! Changing 'her' to 'him' now. Don't want people to get the wrong idea about Remus! And I know what the log in problems are being. It stinks, doesn't it? It only happens when I go to submit a story... never mind, it just happened now. At least I copy whatever I write...
That was a cute and funny chapter;) Sheep and werewolves, eh?! Your character, Elisabeth, seems to have the potential to be highly imaginative, which I'm sure she'll turn out to be! That's what I love about marauder fics, people get to be creative with their characters, since there is do little to come off of. Get the next chapter up, I'll be back!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really like Elisabeth; for once I hd no trouble deciding what the character would be like. I'm having fun with this story. The next chapter... Erm... I'll give myself a deadline - May 12 I'll have submitted it. I'm so busy!