Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/13/09 15:55
Chapter: one-shot

I like this.

Reviewer: love_letters
Date: 04/02/08 19:06
Chapter: one-shot

wormtall wasint a bad person he just did bad things this is tru of avrey person in the world no one is truly evil thay just do horabil things, exsapt perhaps valdamort he did horabil things and was evil too.

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/03/08 2:09
Chapter: one-shot

i hate wormtail too.

he killed lily nad james.

i love them.

they're what i live for.

god...i have a life.

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/03/08 2:09
Chapter: one-shot

i hate wormtail too.

he killed lily nad james.

i love them.

they're what i live for.

god...i have a life.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/11/06 13:24
Chapter: one-shot

Peter is a horrible little rat.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/16/06 20:40
Chapter: one-shot

Ooh... This is good! Really good. You fit Pettigrew excellently. Great job!

~Juli

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 09/06/06 1:03
Chapter: one-shot

not bad at all. I like the perspective as though you're a marauder talking.

Reviewer: MidnightzStorm
Date: 08/24/06 0:28
Chapter: one-shot

Haven't read much about Wormtail before. Short, but to the point. Good job!

Reviewer: Pruvnhtmn
Date: 08/07/06 18:16
Chapter: one-shot

bad title i think. I think the title should be difreent because these are not peter pettigrew's thoughts

Reviewer: Shanx
Date: 07/03/06 0:02
Chapter: one-shot

I love whenever someone stops and thinks about Peter! Great poem, too!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: witch_purple
Date: 07/05/05 18:31
Chapter: one-shot

Wow that is so true. I liked it a lot, even though it was short it explained a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsgeorgeweasley
Date: 06/28/05 11:53
Chapter: one-shot

wow, you are so good at the, short, to the point and intense verses.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've been really into free verse, so I decided to branch out and write a Harry Potter poem.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 06/28/05 9:40
Chapter: one-shot

Short but succinct. Only one thing....the side he left was surviving, but Voldemort looked like being the bigger bug, and he was a weak person so he did have a reason for his betrayal.

Author's Response: I know... but I conveniently forgotten that little detail ; )

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 06/13/05 12:23
Chapter: one-shot

Hey! Guess what? My story got finally approved! So would you mind reviewing it? In fact, anybody is invited to read and review! The story is called Fight For Broken Friendship and it includes - as far as I know - the only Hogwarts-founding story ever approved to mugglenet fanfiction!! PS: I actually intended to tell you this in a review for your An American Goes to Hogwarts-story... So what happened to it?

Author's Response: I'm glad! Sorry it took me so long to respond- I was busy all day Monday and Tuesday. I know of one other founding-story- but it's a romance. I may have to wait a bit to read your story, but I promise I'll review!

Reviewer: the nutty imp
Date: 05/31/05 7:13
Chapter: one-shot

Pretty good. Free verse is all about tension and release and you did it quite well ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 05/24/05 13:02
Chapter: one-shot

PPS: If you are really interested in german language, check out the newly added "Poltergeist" section on my bio, why don't you? PPPS: 2 more "reviews" and I have written more than half of them here... My apology.

Author's Response: Lol! Thanks! And really, do you think I'd complain that I've 3 more reviews?

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 05/24/05 9:36
Chapter: one-shot

Damn! Does that mean any time I edited my story I lengthened its time in queue? I kept correcting some spelling mistakes and added sentences here and there...Well thanx all the same. PS: so you would advise me to add a note for Ristan32 and email Laura after 4 days?

Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately. I would advise adding the following note to the beginning of your first chapter: Author's Note for Mods: Please have either Ristan32 or Janie moderate this story. Thanks! And that's about it. And after 4 days, email Laura, just to remind them of your story. After the email it may still take another day, but it means that it will be taken care of shortly.

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 05/23/05 23:47
Chapter: one-shot

Sorry to abuse your review section, but would you mind telling me how long you normally have to wait until a story gets accepted/rejected?

Author's Response: No problem; you must remember that this makes me have more reviews! Normally the wait is about 2-3 days, with a 4 day limit. Lately things have been mayhem. I think their submission date-thing has gotten messed up... It all depends. If you've put a certain mod to see your story it used to make the wait longer, but it has made it shorter for me. With note for mod: wait 3 days, limit 5 days. Without note for mod: wait 6 days, limit 5 days. And normally the limit isn't 5 days but the mods have asked for it. I suggest if you're going to put a mod name (but then you'd have edited your story and will have to wait the full 3 days) I would put Janie or Ristan32. They are the ones I normally work with. I wuld actually ask for either one of them, because the mods have been taking vacations and I haven't had a story moderated by Ristan32 in a while. After 4 days with or without the mod note, email a mod. Laura might be your best bet for that.

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 05/21/05 16:20
Chapter: one-shot

It's really hard for me to understand english poetry, as I have to concentrate to read it, but to achieve the full impact you should just allow it to rush over you. Seems pretty good though. So now I've preliminary written reviews to all your accessable stories... So where is my free coffee-machine?

Author's Response: Thanks for yet another review! And your coffee machine will hopefully be dropped off along with a review for your fiction! ; )

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/20/05 11:09
Chapter: one-shot

I'm a poetry afficianado, there's not many types I don't like. I thought your free verse about Peter was very clever.

Author's Response: Thanks; I have another in queue, the summary is in my bio. Thanks for reviewing!

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