cant wait to find out what happens next! rally good story! i feel like dumbledor and snape where portrayedd quite differently, but i like the change
Good show i liked it very much.
Wonderful beginning! The tracking spell alone seems like an interesting idea, not mention the exciting plot. Keep on, update soon!
Very interesting, anxious to continue... I think a few characters were occ but thats ok, under the circumstances they would be. we all know the headmaster is a very smart nosy wizard lol.. snape seemed a little timid but prob just from the spell and everything.. keep it up you caught my attention! -siriusstar07