That was so sweet. There are no words in my vocabulary to describe how it made me feel. I might just have to read the original now. But only when I want to cry. You said at the beginning that you were looking for someone to edit the story. I volunteer; I noticed a few errors as I read (but before I became so entranced I didn't notice them anymore).
that was so sweet!! i love the way you wrote this,it made me cry. my mom used to read the story to me when i brought it home and i used to read it to her. 10/10 (ps i also love your other stories)
It's so sweet! I love that book, and you have represented it beautifully. Just one thing I want to clarify, is it Lily and Harry or the next generation?
Oh My God, tears were actually runing down my face through that ... honestly, no lies. This was absolutely amazingly fantastically totally beautiful.
so moving i am going to read everything you write the way you use the words is amazing 100000/10
I think I didn't made my point earlier. Your story's AWESOME
Best fanfic I read so far (though that is not saying much as I just started reading them);o) Really sad. I really hate the original book though. Calm down, just joking. I Havn't even read it yet, but I think I'll buy it as soon as possible now. Thanx for the tip-off.
That was touching... I love well-written one-shots, and yours was very unique. P.S. Might you review my stories? It's been so slow... I haven't had any reviews on some... Thanks!
Aww that was absolutely adorable! I love that you didn't feel the need to add in names. It was a great one shot and very cute and charming.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I felt that if I didn't add in the names, people would pay more attenetion to the story than the characters. I owe most of the credit to the original story, but thanks. Great review.
Yay! Pretty pink picture. Yay! Wonderful story. Yay! I don't know. Whoa! I review a lot. ~Ivy
Author's Response: Trust me, the more you review the happier I am! I really love my banner and I am so grateful to jenova for making it for me. Thanks for the review.
I might just go buy that book now, your fic has inspired me to! It was really sad! :'( But really well written.
Author's Response: It's a really good book, and it's perfect for little children. People keep telling me it's so sad, that surprises me. Since when can I write anything touchy-feely? Thanks for your review.
Sorry for having a one-track mind....Stupid of me really...Sorry.
Author's Response: Never, ever apologize for that. Persistance will get you everywhere. I'm simply honoured that I have such devoted fans, and it's people like you who keep my story going. If I didn't think people liked my story I wouldn't keep going. There's a famous quote 'When persistance keeps persisting, persistance will help persit the world', well not so much famous as in ' my friends are stupid and thought this was funny'. Anyways keep on reviewing I love hearing from people like you.
I love this. That was so sad. I love that book! My mum read it to me when I was little.
Author's Response: See people can't help but love the book, READ IT. Sorry, I get carried away. My mum read it to me every night when I was young, just like she did with my brothers. Thanks for reviewing.
That was so sweet. Poor Lily. I feel so sad that she couldn't be with Harry, and that Harry couldn't be with Lily. Maybe I'll read the book. I hope this cleared your mind, and you are ready to write the next chapter to Underestimated Hero. ~Ivy
Author's Response: YES, DEFINTELY READ THE BOOK. It's fantastic. Although I might be biased, seeing how sentimental it is to me. I was always interested in the Harry-Lily relationship. I can see you have a one track mind, I will be resuming the other story soon. As soon as I figure out the first paragraph I have the rest of the story within a few days. Thanks for reviewing.
that was soooo sweet! i cant read the original book with out crying. that was great
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love tyhe original story, it occasionally makes me reach for my hanky as well. He he. Thanks again.