This seems realy good , please update!!!!!!!!!!:)
This seems realy good , please update!!!!!!!!!!:)
Muggles in the wizarding world col be intresting
IT FINALLY GOT ACCEPTED!
Your story is really adorable! I never spent a thought about Hermione's dilemma about telling her parents that Voldemort has returned. You description of her point of view and her family background and everything is really very convincing. I've got it very much in for details and was just going to congratulate you about your mentioning Ted the weatherman (asuming that you were refering to HPatPS, but then it stroke me that the news reader's name was Ted and the weatherman's Jim McGuffin, but probably that was just coincidence... It certainly gave me the opportunity to announce my complete HP obsessiveness to the public anyway. Well, congratulations on your fanfic again. PS: Would you mind reviewing mine, if it finally gets accepted?
Author's Response: Yay! Another one! Um, Ted. Did I mention Ted...yes, indeed I did. Sure thing about the fic.
Happy, Happy, Happy! You enjoy writing missing moments and character emotions! Yes! That's basically all I write! I am pretty excited because everyone on here seems to only write the average Marauder/Trio fics. OK, OK, Kestrel, come down. I think I need to review your story. Here goes: I think it has a lot of promise and potential. I think that (of course, I always think this, even in my Lupin fic I dislike it, and I wrote it) when you wrote Hermione's thoughts as she sat angrily in her room: EXCERPT: They couldn’t stop her from going back, they couldn’t! She wouldn’t even let them try! was kind of OOC, and a bit cliche. But overall I'd like to see where it goes. P.S. Might you review my fanfics? Thanks! And I have a Hermione one-shot (which also involves her mother, too) that you might enjoy, but it is only half-finished. I should have the summaries of the upcoming stories of mine in my bio in about 2 hours, or sooner. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Yay! Finally a review! Thanks. Yeah, that bit is a bit cliche, but I don't see how it's OOC. Missing Moments are pretty much all I write too, though I'm trying some other things out. Gottalove those missing moments. I'll check out your fics. Cool name, btw.
