Reviewer: IamMrsGinevraPotter
Date: 09/24/06 21:12
Chapter: Mind Your P's and Q's

Please Update Fast!! I Love your story!

Author's Response: I'm working on it... I really am! Thanks Mrs. Potter! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: lulupotter
Date: 09/24/06 19:06
Chapter: Fly

love love love this chapter. your brand f fluffy is good.
and you probably already finished this story, i didn't look, but i like it. a lot.

Author's Response: Oh thanks, Lulu! I like this one too. I tend to hold back on the fluffy reins, but I promise there is more... Finished, nope... almost, two/three chapters left. Thanks for dropping in. ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 09/24/06 15:38
Chapter: Awakenings

told you told you TOLD YOU!!!

Author's Response: 10 points to the house of your choice! Yeah, I didn't want to spoil it for you! lol ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 09/24/06 10:08
Chapter: Slightly Different

prediction time! Dean is malfoy - they've been making polyjuice potion in potions class. deans locked up in a cupboard somwhere

Author's Response: Predictions are always good... *mumble, mumble* lol I take it that you're at least slightly entertained though? Looking forward to hearing more from you, Magic. ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 09/23/06 8:19
Chapter: Birthdays And Bedlam

typical twin.. hes got a huge cut and all hes bothered about is what other uses the spell could have!

Author's Response: I take it that you're a new reader! Wow! Thanks for stopping by, Want 2 B Magic. Nah, Fred was 'comforting' his brother! ~Patrony :)

Author's Response: I take it that you're a new reader! Wow! Thanks for stopping by, Want 2 B Magic. Nah, Fred was 'comforting' his brother! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 09/23/06 6:34
Chapter: Buried At The Burrow


Author's Response: I suppose getting stuck on holiday with a load of work wouldn't be funny... but is if you're not the one doing it! ~Patrony ;)

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 09/20/06 11:19
Chapter: Mind Your P's and Q's

Wonderful chapter! Well worth the wait. Please update quickly. I loved reading about little Harry running starkers covered in frosting. And the cat and mouse play between Harry and Ginny was well done! Learned a bit in this chapter about Pettigrew. Great chapter. So happy you are back. Looking forward to more!! LOVE this story.

Author's Response: Wonderfu? Really? Whew... I think. I'm so glad you liked the frosting and the 'cat and mouse' scene. Peter, Peter, Peter. Lot's to think about. I'm glad to be back too! Thanks so much, Ginzig! I really do appreciate it! ~Patrony ;)

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 09/11/06 14:00
Chapter: Seeds

Oh, please, how much longer? Any update for us? We've been so patient. Is it written? Are we waiting for it to be validated? So excited you're back.

Author's Response: It's been sent to my beta and to the queue shortly thereafter. I have to warn you though, I'm a bit rusty! lol There's a lot going on in this chapter, Mind Your P's and Q's, hopefully it'll be up to scratch and it won't be a total disappointment. Thanks... really! ~Patrony :) 9/13

Reviewer: PpJt
Date: 08/17/06 17:19
Chapter: Seeds

*starts a Fred and George style wardance* UPDATE...UPDATE... (you get the picture)

a great story so far and keep going.

Author's Response: War paint included? I thought I heard something in the distance! lol ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: josh potter00
Date: 07/21/06 15:25
Chapter: Seeds

update soon

Author's Response: Okay, for all of those begging for an update.. I'm back! 8/10/06. I plan on finishing up the next chapter and submitting sometime in the next two weeks. I haven't forgotten all of you and appreciate the 'update.. update... update' chants. Thanks so much! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Sydelle Rein
Date: 07/02/06 22:18
Chapter: Seeds


Author's Response: I did! I did!!! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Katepotter
Date: 06/19/06 0:39
Chapter: Seeds

AWESOME! I love it. Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: boltish08
Date: 05/25/06 20:39
Chapter: Seeds

where have you gone? looking forward to a new chapter soon!

Author's Response: Had to take a necessary hiatus during the relocation. But the good news is, I'm back. ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Sydelle Rein
Date: 05/22/06 22:02
Chapter: Seeds

Are you ever going to update? It seems like I've been waiting forever! T_T

Author's Response: Yep, Sydelle... I am, I promise!

Reviewer: MoodyAlly
Date: 05/16/06 12:20
Chapter: Seeds

I love it!

But when is the next chapter of the story ?

I can't wait.

Author's Response: Hey MoodyAlly! Sorry it's taken so long, but I've updated! 9/26 ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 05/02/06 15:06
Chapter: Of Dreams Or Visions

Please update soon!!! Your story is great and we all need something to read!!! :)

Author's Response: How funny... with all the wonderful stories, I'm sure you can find something worthwhile! lol But I appreciate the nod of approval! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 04/26/06 12:32
Chapter: Seeds

Absolutely fantastic!!! I love the 'Dishes' chapter. You have a knack for adding the right amount of humor, fluff, drama, etc. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: I never really follow a recipe to the tee but I seem to have good luck with whatever I cook up. Here's hoping that continues! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: seeker77
Date: 04/19/06 16:53
Chapter: Seeds

I cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: I know... I know... *sniff* ~Patrony :(

Reviewer: DeerKillerBeemer
Date: 04/13/06 19:02
Chapter: Seeds

Awesome! I love how you begin and end the chapter with the same paragraphs... in forensics, we call that a teaser, and you definately chose a good one to use! I really love this story, and I'm glad that I stumbled across it because it is worth it to be reading. You definately have a talent for writing and I can see how you've grown and improved over the course of this story. I'm sad that it's ending soon, but I hope you write a sequel!

Author's Response: I have to tell you, your username makes me laugh! I'm sure there's a story behind it! Teaser?... just dumb luck. As I was writing it, I didn't like the ending, origionally I left it at "I love you." Since I actually liked the opening paragraphs..(not much that I really do like of my own scribblings... toughest critic... that sort of thing,) I copied it down, tweaked it and there you have it. Dumb luck at its finest. I'm so glad you can see improvement. It would be a terrible waste of time if I didn't, or just prove that my braincells had indeed gone kapoot, which the jury is still out on that! lol Thanks much, DKB! Hopefully I won't keep you all waiting much longer. ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: MoodyAlly
Date: 04/05/06 15:09
Chapter: Of Dreams Or Visions

I have to say that I love your story. It has a good base to it and you are a brilliant writer. Although every time I drop in to see if you have put up a new chapter, my hopes are crushed when I see you have not. Well, maybe next time!

Author's Response: Crushed? Oh, MoodyAlly, I'm so sorry. My only excuse is life... it tends to throw curve balls at you, sometimes relentlessly. I really do feel bad for being so slow at times, it's not fair to all of you who have been reading this WIP so diligently. Oh, I don't know about brilliant writer... lol For my first time out, I had no idea what I was getting myself into and I can only hope that I've improved since the beginning. But like I told Kethji, I WILL finish this fic. (too stubborn not too! lol) I hope that I haven't lost you... ~Patrony :)

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