Reviews For Canis Majoris
Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 07/03/05 8:35
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Terrific Story!! I love it!! Update soon!! You had a little Star Wars thing going there huh? "I love you" "I know" :} Update!!!!

Author's Response: *blushes* yeah, one of my favorite scenes in Star Wars... couldn't resist! ;)

Reviewer: Pipperstorms
Date: 07/02/05 20:15
Chapter: Sirius's Grudge

This sounds really good, but sirius and his cousin? Eh never could be worse...she could be his sister

Reviewer: LupinLover
Date: 07/02/05 18:00
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Good, their friends again, that whole Death Eator thing, soo unexpected, what do they want James for? Keep updating, in the meantime, I think I'll reread this story over and over, :D

Reviewer: ktbacheerchick
Date: 07/02/05 17:59
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Aww, their together again, best friends till the end! I love this story, please keep updating, thanks

Reviewer: muggleborn resentfully
Date: 07/02/05 11:19
Chapter: Patrol Duty and a Plan

Wow! I haven't been checking on updates a while now, but you've certainly made some progress. 8 chapters to catch up with!

Well I loved that parallel dormitory scenes between Lily, Jocelyn and James, Sirius. That was a really clever way to show us, that they are just made for each other. I know you explained this already in the secound chapter, but I still haven't quite picked up on Peter's timetable. That was a bit confusing...

I liked the image of Remus, Sirius and Jocelyn sitting by the fire and professionally debating the possibility of different scenarios as well.

Ha! No need to ask for up-dates yet, still 7 chapters to go!

Reviewer: FanFic_Girl
Date: 07/02/05 6:54
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Awsome story! Update really soon!

Reviewer: mn7chica
Date: 07/02/05 2:55
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Update soon! I really love your story! Please have everyone make up in the next chapter because it thoroughly depresses me that they all are mad at eachother! What did Lily and Sirius talk about that is such a big deal??? great story 10/10

Reviewer: Mysterious Rose
Date: 07/01/05 23:10
Chapter: Hogsmeade

OK, I really really really like the plot line goin on in this chapter, like i LOVE the fighting and action and stuff...but basically if Sirius knew James was being attacked by death eaters he would rush out there right away, and not sit there talking about it, he wouldnt care if the others were confused. so yes, it was a bit confusing. I totally love the "i love you" "i know" thingie... hehe.. reminds me of star wars... *cough* anyways.. pretty good, just a little confusing! great job!

Author's Response: You're probably right... *shrugs* oh well, live and learn... yeah, *cough*favoritesceneinStarWars*cough* *blushes*... couldn't resist :)

Reviewer: Crookshanks_Kneazle
Date: 07/01/05 21:17
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Yeah, I agree w/ Hallia. that chapter didn't make much sense, but yur reply to her review did so as long as it's explained and stuff later it's still a completely awesome fic!!!!

Reviewer: durnik00
Date: 07/01/05 20:50
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Hell yeah! Its about time they made up. Short chapter but I definately like the action. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 07/01/05 20:25
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Wow, first day it's posted and there's already something like 20 reviews. Anyway, good, kind of short, not bad. Although I don't think Jocelyn would really have let Remus drag her away -- or, for that matter, that Remus would have tried to get her away or left himself. Still, pretty good, looking for more!

Author's Response: I find it the highest form of flattery that you have called my OC OCC. Why? Because it means that you find her so believable and have accepted her so completely that you actually know her behavior patterns. That, to me, is nothing short of amazing, so thank you very much. Now, how to explain this?… Okay, Jocelyn is extremely important to the Marauders. In fact, she is considered by them (although not by herself) to be a Marauder. Because she is the only girl they all feel very protective of her, so in that sort of situation their primary concern would be to get her out of danger. Therefore, when Sirius told Remus to take her away you would assume that Remus would have already thought of that, and now that Sirius had ordered him to do it would know that that was now to be his primary focus. As for Jocelyn, I guess she is kind of like Hermione, in that you perceive her as someone who is very strong, but I see her as someone is very vulnerable. In that situation she would do whatever Sirius ordered, so if he looked into her eyes and told her to go, she would…. Wow, that was a long explanation!… Again, flattered… thank you!

Reviewer: DolphinChick
Date: 07/01/05 18:58
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love your story!!! i look amd see if they are updated every time im on here!!! update soon!!

Reviewer: JDR41
Date: 07/01/05 18:20
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love your story. I have been reading it for a while. I totally understand the cousin concept. I mean really, if you're pureblood in the wizarding world then you don't have many choices. Well anyway, fabulous story. I'm sooo glad that they are friends again. Oh and it is right about how guys never talk things out, they are so stubborn. But you've gotta love them.

Reviewer: JDR41
Date: 07/01/05 18:19
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love your story. I have been reading it for a while. I totally understand the cousin concept. I mean really, if you're pureblood in the wizarding world then you don't have many choices. Well anyway, fabulous story. I'm sooo glad that they are friends again. Oh and it is right about how guys never talk things out, they are so stubborn. But you've gotta love them.

Reviewer: Lily_Potter
Date: 07/01/05 15:53
Chapter: Hogsmeade

omg this was such a great chapter!! james and sirius are friends again and sirius and jocelyn love eachother!! yay!! 10/10

Reviewer: JDawg
Date: 07/01/05 14:05
Chapter: Hogsmeade

I love your story so far!! I just figured out how to get on to my account, but I've been trying to review for a while. Keep the chapters coming, I'm really excited to find out what happens next! J*

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 07/01/05 13:26
Chapter: Hogsmeade

omg so good. am so glad they r mates again. well done. great job. 10/10

Reviewer: marauderlover844
Date: 07/01/05 13:21
Chapter: Hogsmeade

oh oops! sory i didn't read your responce below =/! but okay i get it now, and it makes sense! so sorry about that! grea story...AGAIN!! lol..

Reviewer: marauderlover844
Date: 07/01/05 13:15
Chapter: Hogsmeade

ohhh! i loved this chapter! i wondered when you were going to put it in because its been in your summary for such a long time! but it was brilliant! isn't sort of weird though? i mean, sirius and jocelyn are cousins..and the like eachother..gross. but whatever! anyways, GREAT story!

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 06/30/05 21:29
Chapter: Hogsmeade

brilliant, but im confuced jocelyn(sp) black and sirius black there cousins arn't they i mean i know the blacks where all pretty much inbreeders but i thought they thought that was gross. anyways good story!!! can't wait for the next chappie

Author's Response: Go back and read the A/N at the beginning of Chapter Six and it will all make sense

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