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Name: the_fifth_marauder (Signed) · Date: 07/27/05 1:56 · For: This is War
Hey. The usual love your story great chappie btw! Anyway, how come it took you so long to update this chapter? I almost soiled myself when i realised you had updated it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry it took so long, the site was shut down for a while because of HBP, and then I had to rewrite that chapter after I read HBP (long story), but hopefully it will never take that long again!

Name: Sophia Loren (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 21:12 · For: This is War
I really love this story, keep it up, you're doing a great job!!! I'm checking for updates all the time now! :)

Name: JDR41 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 18:20 · For: This is War
I really do love this story. I'm glad you got an update up. I love how slowly but surely James, Sirius and Jocelyn are turning Lily a little less perfect. It's fun to read. Thanks! Good Chapter.

Name: ilovetom (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 17:37 · For: This is War
This ff is really sweet! It's the best Lily/James one I've read. Please update soon. Also I just wanted to ask, how do you get all your ideas?

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! Hmmm, I have no idea (ironic, eh?), lol!

Name: hpbookworm06 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 11:20 · For: This is War
This is my favorite fan fiction. I can't wait for the next update.

Name: luvthe1uhurt (Signed) · Date: 07/26/05 10:33 · For: This is War
brilliant fic!!Yours is the best fic ive read so far!!(but im a lil confused?whats jocelyns name?jocelyn or adhara?:S:S)

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!.... Okay, this is a little weird, but Adhara is Jocelyn's real name.... Jocelyn is her middle name; Sirius called her that when they were kids, and now all her friends call her that, but all her relatives (including her parents) call her Adhara, which is why Narcissa calls her that.

Name: hermioneloves (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 23:25 · For: This is War
hey this is a great story!! update soon please!

Name: Aumbriette (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 18:37 · For: Jocelyn's Predicament
This is such a wonderful story, I can't wait for an update!!! The time of the Marauders is always my favorite base for stories! ---and i must say I love the fact that you based the name on the same constellation, its loverly!

Name: Dracos_Girl (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 13:01 · For: This is War
I love this chapter thank you for always updating so quickly. This is my favorite Fanfiction 10/10

Name: pheonixtear (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 11:14 · For: This is War
wow, great job with this chapter!! keep it up!! please update quickly!!

Name: vanillasweety (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 11:11 · For: This is War
eww toad brains, hahaha great chap, can't wait for the next

Name: FanFic_Girl (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 10:28 · For: This is War
Awsome chappie! Can't wait for the rest of them

Name: alex_the_man704 (Signed) · Date: 07/25/05 3:15 · For: This is War
omg i love this story!!!!! it is so awesome!!!! please post as soon as you can! and involve more romance please! from summer

Name: emerald_burn (Signed) · Date: 07/23/05 23:44 · For: Mail
i luv this story so much! update soon plz!

Name: FanficWriterNikki (Signed) · Date: 07/23/05 15:24 · For: Mail
i just read the whole thing for the first time and WOW it's sooo good! UPDATE SOON! Please? <33

Name: far_away_fantasy (Signed) · Date: 07/23/05 15:11 · For: Jocelyn's Predicament
AUGH!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Name: talosforrowwriter (Signed) · Date: 07/23/05 12:21 · For: Jocelyn's Predicament
Hey, not bad! I love how you right. The characters are so real... Rowling would be proud!

Author's Response: Rowling would be proud... Wow, that is one of the nicest compliments I've ever received! Thank you very much!

Name: FannyPrice (Signed) · Date: 07/21/05 19:10 · For: Jocelyn's Predicament
i love your story. i think it is very witty, and jocelyn is actuallyt one of those few competely made up characters that actually seem that they could fit into the world created by jk rowling. looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much, especially about Jocelyn, as I am obviously very fond of her :)

Name: KristenBlack (Signed) · Date: 07/20/05 10:09 · For: Mail
I just discovered this story last night and I'm already hooked! Thanks for explaining the whole fourth cousin thing. It kind of creeped me out at first but now it seems to make since. I love the way Sirius thoughts go deeper in this story than any other I've read. Definetly a 10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's funny, because a lot of people have said that about Sirius, and I really didn't think about that when I wrote it, it just kind of happened. But sometimes that's how the best stuff gets written, I guess....

Name: EllaBookworm (Signed) · Date: 07/19/05 16:51 · For: Mail
I love it. There are no words to describe it. What I do think is missing though is Snape and James jinxing each other. I know Lupin said they cooled it after 5th year, but they didn't stop. So add a bit of that in there ;-). But otherwise very JKR-ish, but with a style all your own. That's what truly makes a good writer. Of course, I think it's quite smart to have an OC that won't die. It's true, most people kill them off. But like JK said, why can't there be a person someone hasn't noticed yet? Like Luna or Cho. Of course, no one knows much about the Marauder's times, but it's quite obvious no one's mentioned a character like yours (since she's an OC), but the thing is, you found a way to put her in anyway, which is always handy. I can't wait for the next chapter, so lets hope it comes out of Queue pretty soon (Like tomorrow!)

Author's Response: Thank you very much.... I will try to put in some Snape and James jinxing, although I have already written through Chapter 20, so it might not be for a while, sorry :s

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