Reviews For Canis Majoris
Reviewer: FannyPrice
Date: 08/05/05 5:47
Chapter: Alphard Black

wonderful...unfortunately the cd track chsanged to a very depressing song none as "Wreck of the Day," which just heightened the sadness. ugh, now im depressed but wonderful job.

Reviewer: Harrietta potter
Date: 08/05/05 0:20
Chapter: Alphard Black

*gasps* That was an excellently written chapter, though extremely sad. I feel really bad for Jocelyn, what will she do? I am heartened by the fact that she still has Sirius by her side, however. The funeral scene was very moving. I didn't really like Lily in this chappie though, she seemed rather insensitive to Jocelyn and Sirius' feelings, but that's just my opinion. Thanks for an excellent but sad read!

Reviewer: alex_the_man704
Date: 08/05/05 0:02
Chapter: Alphard Black

poor jocelyn i feel sooo sorry for her! wher mother is dead and now her father is going to die. let there be a little romance please! post as soon as u can!

Reviewer: Madame Moony
Date: 08/04/05 23:00
Chapter: Alphard Black

Okay, I have now read all of your chapters and I must say that I think that you are a great writer. In fact, I would not be surprised if you went on to become a very well paid and respected author. Please Continue To Write!!!

Reviewer: hpbookworm06
Date: 08/04/05 21:15
Chapter: Alphard Black

It is soooo sad. Your story is always excellent and unique. I cannot wait for the next update.

Reviewer: emeraldcalling
Date: 08/04/05 19:16
Chapter: Alphard Black

Oh wow Jocelyn just can't get a break can she? It must be terrible... Fantastic as always though!

Reviewer: emeraldcalling
Date: 08/04/05 19:12
Chapter: Alphard Black

Oh wow Jocelyn just can't get a break can she? It must be terrible... Fantastic as always though!

Reviewer: Crookshanks_Kneazle
Date: 08/04/05 16:58
Chapter: Alphard Black

Oh, poor JOcelyn. First her mother, then her father...just too sad. But you have your reasons, I souposse. V. good, like always. =^) ~9~

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 08/04/05 16:44
Chapter: Alphard Black

Wow, that is depressing. But very good, keep writing!

Reviewer: Black_Swan
Date: 08/04/05 16:30
Chapter: Alphard Black

yes!! first to review, and that is really really hard on this story. it was reallly depressing but i am sure you had a very good reason.hopfully. 10/10

Reviewer: Madame Moony
Date: 08/04/05 0:14
Chapter: Patrol Duty and a Plan

I have only read the first three chapters of your story, but I already know that it is great!!! Please Keep Writing!!!

Reviewer: 19HermioneLily19
Date: 08/03/05 6:47
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

Hi! I'm a new reader! I LOVE the story so far, its excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter! Carrie

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 08/02/05 19:14
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

great chappie. sad chappie, but still a great chappie. please post another chappie soon. i like that word, chappie

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 08/02/05 12:00
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

wow, its so sad, and so good. i love it, keep writing.

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 08/02/05 7:34
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

Oh I love it!! As I often say, only real men cry...Poor James, poor Jocelyn!! You are such a great author!! Keep 'em coming! 10! J

Reviewer: FanFic_Girl
Date: 08/01/05 17:30
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

Nice job! Keep going please!

Reviewer: siriuslycrazy
Date: 08/01/05 11:38
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

whoot!! i love this story!! great job!!!

Reviewer: Dracos_Girl
Date: 08/01/05 10:07
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

I love your fanfiction I don't know how in one story you can have humor drama tragedy romance and action it's really cool. I like this chapter alot! 10/10

Reviewer: Dracos_Girl
Date: 08/01/05 10:07
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

I love your fanfiction I don't know how in one story you can have humor drama tragedy romance and action it's really cool. I like this chapter alot! 10/10

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 08/01/05 8:09
Chapter: Patrolling with Prongs

Oh, I HATE it when people cry, like James or Sirius. 'Cuz then I feel really bad!!! Darn, you people, crying!!! I hate it when I get over-emotional!!!!! I remind myself of a guy very much in that way. But anyhow, I LOVED this chapter, and I hope we get an update soon!!!!!!!

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