Reviews For Canis Majoris
Reviewer: Lily Flower
Date: 10/08/05 9:30
Chapter: Patrol Duty and a Plan

Sirius is just how i imagined him!

Reviewer: Lily Flower
Date: 10/08/05 9:28
Chapter: Sirius's Grudge

Cool! I really like it so far!

Reviewer: Lily Flower
Date: 10/08/05 9:27
Chapter: Jocelyn's Predicament

Wicked!!! Keep it up Trinsy!!!

Reviewer: hpbookworm06
Date: 10/04/05 18:31
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Fawkes309
Date: 10/03/05 15:47
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

I love your story, it's very creative and well written. Perhaps I am a bit thick, though, because I'm a little confused about one bit. Why is Jocelyn called Jocelyn AND Adhara. I mean, I understand that Adhara is her constellation name and all, but why is she also Jocelyn? And why does that hufflepuff call her that? Maybe I missed that along the way somewhere, but I was hoping you might explain it to me. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Okay, I know this is really confusing (sorry, didn't think of that until after it was posted :s) and a little weird, but Adhara is Jocelyn's real name.... Jocelyn is her middle name; Sirius called her that when they were kids, and now all her friends call her that, but all her relatives (including her parents) call her Adhara (which is why Narcissa calls her that), and most of the teachers and other students she's not aquainted with also call her Adhara (which is why Hector calls her that)... Sorry for the confusion!

Reviewer: electronicquillster
Date: 09/26/05 20:20
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

I just read this fic all afternoon today in one go. There are, of course, things that need to be improved, but no one's fiction is perfect. As of right now, this is the best marauder fic I've ever read, and I've been scavenging to find a good one for a while. I don't know why I didn't come across it before, because I've been reading in the "other pairing" romance category for months. Anyway, I hope to get to read more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for being the first person to admit that my fic needs improving. I love you! *hugs you impulsively* *is embarrassed* Er – yeah… anyway, you didn’t find this before because it was originally published in the “Lily/James” section, but I realized a few weeks ago that “Other Pairing” is clearly its rightful home. However, I didn’t move it until just yesterday.

Reviewer: Crookshanks_Kneazle
Date: 09/21/05 13:46
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Great chapter!! In particular, I really like the very end where Lily was fed up, and Sirius and Hecter's exchange. Poor Sirius, first he's mad at Dumbledore, then he's worried he's got competion....

Reviewer: Veronika
Date: 09/20/05 18:50
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

hullo.... your story is wicked! iabsolutly love it. your an amzing author really... anyway... if this was a novel it would be a book you just ant put down.... you really need to add the next chapter... when does sirius decide to tell? and why does the hector dude person matter???? WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING??? you see the maddness a good story can instill...? **kisses**

Reviewer: Veronika
Date: 09/20/05 18:49
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

hullo.... your story is wicked! iabsolutly love it. your an amzing author really... anyway... if this was a novel it would be a book you just ant put down.... you really need to add the next chapter... when does sirius decide to tell? and why does the hector dude person matter???? WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING??? you see the maddness a good story can instill...? **kisses**

Reviewer: pottersperfectprincess
Date: 09/20/05 18:48
Chapter: Hogsmeade

that's a great idea for them to get to be friends again! my compliments :)

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 09/20/05 14:10
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

i love it! i love jealous people in stories, it's much more exciting! keep writing, andd fast! 10/10

Reviewer: pottersperfectprincess
Date: 09/19/05 16:44
Chapter: Of Scarlet Ink and Anger

o my goodness, this story is very unique, in a good way i assure u! u really don't c james and sirius fight, and it's really weerd now that they r! i luv this story!!!! off 2 read the next chapter!!

Reviewer: pottersperfectprincess
Date: 09/19/05 16:29
Chapter: An Unexpected Question

i luv this chapter! i put this story on my favorites list!!!!! i luved how lily asked sirius out! ok, she sed "as friends", but we all know that it's never just as friends. lol. :)

Reviewer: pottersperfectprincess
Date: 09/19/05 16:06
Chapter: Jocelyn's Predicament

this a great story! especially for your 1st fic. wow, i'm impressed (not that that's saying much) :)

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 09/18/05 18:27
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

I LOVE YOU!!! Erm....your story, that is...YAY! Well, I've already read it, but I promised I'd comment here as well! This chapter had so much emotion in it! Anger from Sirius at Dumbles and Hector, anger from Lily at James, teenage hormones EVERYWHERE!! Ahh love it! Congrats on writing the ending, glad to hear there's lots more to come! 10/10~~JFig

Author's Response: Aww, I love you too.... Thanks for still reviewing here, I love your reviews! :D

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 09/18/05 18:13
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Awesome job, I love how it's James and Lily, this is one of my first of that kind, and I like it. I was in a sort of writing slump, but you've inspired me to keep going, thank you! Update now, RIGHT NOW! *Adds to favourits*

Author's Response: I'm so glad I could help! :D

Reviewer: truth or dare diva
Date: 09/18/05 12:29
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Great chapter! Sirius, Joce, Hector, James, Lily, Patrolling, it was all wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter, maybe then James will have it figured out... my fave quote (makes me think of one of my cousins... distant cousin, mind you): “That was my cousin, Freemonte,” Sirius snarled at Hector. “I know, Black,” said Hector quietly. “My cousin,” Sirius growled. “Not my sister. Understand, Freemonte?” “Perfectly,” said Hector. “Good,” said Sirius, and pushed past him to pursue Jocelyn.

Author's Response: Thanks... aw, that's so cute :)

Reviewer: JamesandLilyforever
Date: 09/18/05 11:28
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Great chapter,James is so thick!LOL But anyway can't wait for 18. I hope Lily and James hook up soon and that Sirius gets his revenge! muh ha ha lol :)

Reviewer: hpbookworm06
Date: 09/18/05 9:42
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: evil_fairy
Date: 09/18/05 9:19
Chapter: The Greatest Weakness

That was an awesome chappie! Cant wait for the next one!!

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