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Name: beth1191 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/05 18:40 · For: I Didnít
i like this fanfic a lot.hector is very evil though.update ASAP

Name: Lauren Button (Signed) · Date: 11/04/05 23:17 · For: An Unexpected Question
odd. But in a good way. I like it :)

Name: Zubz2004 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/05 14:33 · For: I Didnít
Whoops! Sorry I didn't realise my review was soooo long. *embarrassed*

Name: Zubz2004 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/05 14:29 · For: I Didnít
I love this fan fiction; it IS the best Lily and James story I've ever read! I see what you meant about the Hector guy, I enjoy scenes with him a lot. Without him there wouldn't be much tension and plus I think Sirius needs to back down with this hunt and steal her back from Hector to prove how much she means to him. I just got a few questions if you could just reply to then. 1) Have you introduced wormtail as the spy into the story yet without us knowing? It's just that some scenes with him are a bit weird from other scenes. I know he's thick and a bit slow but the way he was asking questions about Sirius going to London was just a bit too much 'I-don't-know-anything-about-one-of-my-close-friends' for my liking. If everyone including Joce and Lily knew why did he not realise and why so slow on the uptake? 2) Is Joce and Sirius love each other and have admitted it a few times to each other and they're both aware of it then why are they not together? I understand the bit about Joce getting annoyed with Sirius for running off to London but if she really cares about him then why does she even give Hector a chance to sneak into her supposed-affections and why does Sirius let her? You don't really need to answer that, just a way for me to vent my frustration about them. 3) Is your story going with the prochecy? Dumbledore says that it's more likely for Sirius to be believed as the rival for Voldemort and not James and James isn't in that much danger, which everyone else seems to agree to. Are you trying to lead us into a false sense of security for James? If Sirius is in so much danger why is he going to London searching for Bellatrix alone and without anyone's (other than the Gryffindors) knowledge? Is he really that dumb? Anyways, I love this fanfiction. Can you hurry up a bit even though I finished this chapter only a few minutes ago I'm already getting very impatient for the next one. Anyways, brilliant work. Keep up all the hard work, I'd rather wait for it for a month and it be brilliant than wait for it for a day and it being crap, though I doubt anything you write could be half-way crap. You're a brilliant writer. I love your description, the way you depict the tension in scenes and the way James and Lily aren't all mushy over each other like they are in every single one of the other Lily and James fanfictions. Can you please hurry up? :( From- One of your belated and very impatient fans. ( I can't think what on earth I was doing while you wrote 24 chapters of pure excellence!!)

Author's Response: Firstly, let me say how flattered I am. You're really much kinder to me than I deserve....
Most unfortunately I cannot answer your questions, as that would give away too much. Well, except the first one, in answer to which all I can do is blush and say, "Chalk it up to poor writing." Anyway, props for being a clever reader, because you are definitely asking the right questions, you just can't get the answers....
Again, flattered, thank you... ~ Trinsy

Name: Zubz2004 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/05 7:38 · For: The Greatest Crime
So far it's wicked. I love reading fics about Lily and James and this is one of the best so far. Your fics got a bit of originality in it cuz all the other ones are quite stereotpical saying how Sirius loved Lily like everyone else in the school and Lily was the most perfect thing and how she was sooo popular but your portrayal of Sirius shows that he is a normal teenager and though he knows how much James loves Lily he's still slightly jealous. In th other fics Sirius is portrayed as not really minding cuz he wanted the best for his best friend and wished him all the best in the relationship. Your story writing is good too. I have yet to find a fault in your fic. So far good job. I'm gonna read the next few chapters now cuz I absolutely can't wait.

Name: hpbookworm06 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/05 16:01 · For: I Didnít
To add something, I think you are doing an excellent job as an author by keeping it angsty. I think it would be hard to keep the story flowing if Siurius and Joceylyn were together as well as Lily and James. As much as I want Sirius and Joceyln to get together I think it will take a while for Sirius to back down from his Bellatrix hunt.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. You are absolutely correct, there would, essentially, be no storyline of Sirius and Jocelyn were together.... Hmm, who ever said Sirius was going to back down? ;)

Name: hpbookworm06 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/05 15:56 · For: I Didnít
That was really Dramatic! It was sooooo sad! I don't blame you for not hating Hector. I think that he is probably a cool person, but in his position to the story and marauders, it causes us readers to despise him. I really feel sorry that he has to be stuck in between Sirius and Joceyln's feud.

Name: as_the_7thmonth_dies (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 22:28 · For: I Didnít
Wow. Okay James was kind of stupid to bring that subject up in the middle of the group, but i guessed it kind of worked in the end. I mean, Jocelyn let Sirius know that she still cared what he thought. O, I don't think I can take much more torment!!! They have to get together, or at least be on pleasant speaking terms again soon or else I won't be able to stand it!!!! lovely chapter though. later

Name: Crookshanks_Kneazle (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 19:27 · For: I Didnít
Argh! I almost wanna say I hated this chapter but I can't! It was wonderfully witten and all but -agh!!!!! The ending almost made me cry{this is a good thing where your writing is concerned obviously}. I really want Sirius and Jocelyn to be "back together" (it's sort of like they've broken up in a way...) but somehow I don't think it'll happen soon (but I so hope it does!). 10/10 even though I am now semi-depressed.(well, as depressed as you can be from a fan-fic)

Name: figgys_tartan_slippers (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 19:26 · For: I Didnít
i loved it, so much emotion! and just to let you know, i dont despise hector, i dont like him either tho, i cant decide :P great job

Name: LaneTechFreshie (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 17:28 · For: I Didnít
Well, SiriuslyinlovewithSirius has a point. I don't like Hector very much, but i guess he has his part to play in the story. And also I do want to see Sirius and Jocelyn finally get together, but at least they arent avoiding the fact that they don't not like each other. Keep up the good work, and dont leave us hanging around for too long. THough you have been pretty faithful! 11/10

Name: Dory_the_Fishie (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 17:22 · For: I Didnít
This was a great chapter!! Still despising Hector... I applaud James for speaking up like that, though I'm not sure he chose the best way to confront Jocelyn... but it did get things rolling. The last part was brilliant! The line about Sirius's tear was so sad and makes me want to beat him for being such a poo (I know, I know, sophisticated vocab...). Don't leave us hanging too long! Update soon! 10/10

Name: Fawkes17 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/01/05 15:40 · For: I Didnít
Okay, no offence to this Hector guy but anyone who rips the Marauders apart like that isn't quite what you call 'my favorite character. I'm not saying he's bad . . . or am I?

That was wonderful chapter. I was laughing through some of it, espically this part:

ďJocelynís about as talkative nowadays as flobberworm. Pass me that rune dictionary, would you Remus?Ē

That was just brilliant. Then the chapter just took a nose-dive into another twist to add to the one it was already on. The ending bit was just brilliant. Hope you don't keep us locked out of the rest for too long.

Cheers, Fawkes17

Name: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 10:18 · For: I Didnít
I SIRIUSLY HATE THIS HECTOR GUY!!!! He is tearing Jocelyn and the Marauders (and Lily) apart!!!! When will Sirius and Jocelyn get together? I like it but it seems to be getting more angsty all the time! Will this ever be a romance fic again????? Luv it, but plz plz plz make it happier!

Name: SiriuslyInLuvWithSirius (Signed) · Date: 10/31/05 13:22 · For: Jocelyn's Predicament
I FRICKIN LOVE THIS FIC BUT WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US???????? What's wrong with Jocelyn???? I suppose there has to be a good reason for everything and Jocelyn and Sirius have to have a good way of getting together, but honestly that was so so sad!!!!! All these awful things are going on! Is this even going to have a happy ending. By the way I hate this Hector guy. He is a clueless jerk. Okay, maybe I'm biased because I love Sirius, but still!!!! 50/10, but could you make it happier or something????

Name: rita_skeeter (Signed) · Date: 10/31/05 12:31 · For: A Shattered Struggle
Fantastic story - I've just read it through for the first time. Jocelyn's behaviour is really upsetting me - poor Sirius! Excellent fight scene at the end...ooh, the tension!! 10/10, keep updating!

Name: as_the_7thmonth_dies (Signed) · Date: 10/29/05 23:18 · For: A Shattered Struggle
wow. so I've only just read your entire story and I absolutely love it! Jocelyn really went crazy with the pitcher! Geez! She and Sirius better get together because I loathe that Hector guy. Even though his eyes did sound quite nice. Okay so the summary is Awesome Job and Add another chapter ASAP!!! later

Name: Dory_the_Fishie (Signed) · Date: 10/29/05 15:56 · For: A Shattered Struggle
Awesome chapter! Jocelyn really did lose control... I thought the line about Sirius finally being defeated was great. Really nice, as Sirius seems so used to getting his way and winning. Well, I guess Jocelyn's going to be a little harder to win... I hate Hector. With a passion. Update soon! 10/10

Name: Dory_the_Fishie (Signed) · Date: 10/28/05 17:01 · For: Complications
Good thing you've put Hector into hiding because he's definitely gonna need it! Great chapter! That whole Amanda Jennings thing was very funny... I also loved the line about James being scared of Sirius... wonderful. That's all I can say. Wonderful. On to the next chapter... See, I've realized that if I forget to check every other day for an update, then when I finally do get around to checking, there's two new chapters for me! Great system actually... 10/10

Name: JFig (Signed) · Date: 10/27/05 20:25 · For: A Shattered Struggle
YES! I just love all of your chapters!! No favorites here! Any new BTV? No rushing coming from this Fig...wow...that might have been a pun...it was SUPPOSED to be...that didn't go so well. Just...pretend I just said "FANTABULOUS! WRITE MORE!" Keep it up, you rock my socks RIGHT OFF! ~Yours in devotion~JFig

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