Reviews For Canis Majoris
Reviewer: The Love of Lily
Date: 01/01/06 20:21
Chapter: Inscriptions

I feel so left out. Everyone is saying 'I hope she isn't going to do what I think she is going to do.' and 'OMG SHE'S GOING TO DO THAT!' and I'm sitting here, fuming, bc you left me with a cliffhanger and I have no clue as to what is going to happen and what the chapter was about. I'm completely confused. But other than that, that was an awesome chapter. You are an awesome writer. I'm so impressed. Wow. Wow. Wow.

Reviewer: woodwoman
Date: 12/28/05 0:03
Chapter: Inscriptions

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: callmehermione
Date: 12/26/05 23:58
Chapter: Inscriptions

I just realized that neither Sirius nor Bella are going to die, and Bella is going to, really, end up winning, and it was a really depressing thought. Oh, and Jocelyn is going to.. go away.. somehow, too. Wow, I think I'll just go cry now...

Reviewer: callmehermione
Date: 12/26/05 23:48
Chapter: Going After

Wow, that review before mine is really, really long. Anyways... I really loved the string of memories in the middle, it was a perfect way to show Jocelyn's love. "He looked extremely careworn. Siriusís recommencement of his weekend escapades to London had James worried." Careworn and recommencement are brilliant words...

Reviewer: callmehermione
Date: 12/26/05 23:40
Chapter: Restless Abandon

How dreadful! Poor Sirius and Jocelyn... goodness, I loved how complicated you made their relationship, though. It was brilliantly well-written how they dealt with it too, and this might sound weird, but it was very IC for Jocelyn as well.

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 12/22/05 14:56
Chapter: Inscriptions

Fantastic new chapter - I'm really excited about the next few chapters, it's getting really tense... Oh and by the way, about your hint: 'much worse than death' - she's not going to get raped is she? Please say no! Anyway, excellent story, keep updating. 10/10

Author's Response: Certainly not! Personally, I've never been able to handle that issue, and anyway, this is a PG fic...

Reviewer: Witchy_Woman
Date: 12/20/05 17:11
Chapter: Inscriptions

OMG!!!!! You are such an awsome writer!!!! I love your story so much!! I became a member just so I could review!!

Reviewer: Roommate of the Quillster
Date: 12/18/05 23:26
Chapter: Inscriptions

I'm in shock... absolute shock... she's going to die... this is so sad. I don't know if I can take this--and count this as two reviews, because my roommate feels the exact same way. We can just tell, and we're dying. So you'd better freaking update soon. Please. Or just leave us hanging forever and we'll just cry our freaking eyes out before hunting you down--like Bellatrix!

Author's Response: I'm not going to kill Jocelyn! Dear God, I don't kill off main characters! However, I will admit that what I do to her is, in my opinion, much worse than death... *evil laughter*

Oh, and I'm really sorry (seriously), I can't update until at least January 9, because I'm in Poland right now and the story is on Will back in California....

Until then, rest assured that death is not the fate that awaits my dear Jocelyn....

Reviewer: HopelessDreaming
Date: 12/18/05 14:16
Chapter: Inscriptions

You are an absolutely magnificent writer! There are tears in my eyes... It's so... real... I hate, for lack of a better word, you for making me wait, but love you for writing so wonderfully and make me wait. *sobs* It's so wonderful... I shall wait most eagerly for the next chapter! Impossibly high number/10.

Reviewer: HopelessDreaming
Date: 12/18/05 14:00
Chapter: Restless Abandon

Wonderful job, as usual. I love how you keep all of them in character, and don't ever bring them out of it. Very Sirius-like thing to do, right there... I promise I won't kill you. ;D It must be done for the story's sake, right?

Reviewer: HopelessDreaming
Date: 12/18/05 13:51
Chapter: Enough

That was beautiful... I love the Sirius going purple thing... That was magnificent... Made me laugh. Mayhap because it sounded like something I'd say... But yesh. I would say "Yay for Sirius and Jocelyn!" But I don't want to eat my words... ya know? That was wonderful what happened in Charms between Sirius and Remus, then Jocelyn. Moving on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: HopelessDreaming
Date: 12/18/05 13:34
Chapter: Complications

Positively brilliant. ^^ I love the humor in the beginning, the sorrow in the end, and how it all fits together. You know how to tell a story. You make it all seem so real. =3 Bravo and once again a 10/10!

Reviewer: HopelessDreaming
Date: 12/18/05 13:15
Chapter: Charmed and Charmed Again

Awwwu... That's so... I love it!! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I didn't have an account when I began reading your lovely story. ^^ Very captivating... Astonishingly wonderful writing, if I do so say myself. I love the arguing, how the magic seems to work with their moods, and the way you lead into things. It's pure magic! =3 I shall be reading more, yes. Thank you so much for writing so beautifully and I shall be giving, of course, a 10/10. :D

Reviewer: truth or dare diva
Date: 12/17/05 17:03
Chapter: Inscriptions

Noooooo.... How could he do this to me!?!?!? To Jocelyn?!?!? I dont think I can last until the next chapter

Reviewer: truth or dare diva
Date: 12/17/05 16:57
Chapter: Inscriptions

Noooooo.... How could he do this to me!?!?!? To Jocelyn?!?!? I dont think I can last until the next chapter

Reviewer: ray_16
Date: 12/15/05 22:05
Chapter: Inscriptions

Why? Why does almost all of your chapters make me cry like this last one? I always cried.... Jocelyn's really caring. He loves Sirius so much.... And now, you lie that this is your very firs FanFic! How could you? It's like the best! It's as if it were written by a professional. All the emotions, the every thing! *sob* Why? Jocelyn, be careful! *sob*

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 12/14/05 18:40
Chapter: Inscriptions

You really do have a way with cliffhangers as you have ended this chapter with yet another fantastic one. This chapter built really well on the last one, and I'm very, very anxious for the next. I know that you have written it so that Jocelyn has traveled to London on her own and figured out where Sirius has gone, but I still can't help but wonder what other surprises might be waiting in the next chapter. My question about Peter's whereabouts during the last chapter is still nagging at me but I won't even venture a guess at them since you are really good at writing things I would never even have thought of. Plus, I can't see James, Remus, and Lily just sitting around now Jocelyn has gone after Sirius. I'm sure Lily has joined up with the two boys by now and may perhaps be planning on a way to follow Jocelyn to find Sirius. I guess I will just have to wait and fint out. Brilliant chapter!

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 12/14/05 18:25
Chapter: Going After

Talk about a roller coaster ride. Poor Hector. As soon as he thinks he's got Jocelyn back, she realizes she truly loves Sirius. Of course, I'm sure the ride hasn't been fun for Jocelyn and Sirius either. There was only one spot in this whole chapter that I stumbled over when I read it and that was this: 'Lily frowned, and there was a pause while looked probingly at Jocelyn, and Jocelyn stared at the fire.' I think you are missing the word 'she' between 'while' and 'looked.' Other than that I thought this chapter was fantastic. My favorite part of this chapter has to be in the discussion between Lily and Jocelyn when Jocelyn finally realizes that she has to go after Sirius. Of course, I did enjoy reading the closing scene where Jocelyn bursts in on James and Remus. Part of the reason I enjoyed it so much is the way you quickly mention that Peter is also missing from the room and then skip right back to the people who are there. I have to wonder what Peter is up to at this point in the story, and all I can theorize is that it is nothing good. The little cliffhanger you close the chapter with is brilliant. I can't wait to find out where it is leading. Fortunately, since the next chapter is already up. I don't have to! ;)

Reviewer: SexY_LydZ
Date: 12/13/05 22:08
Chapter: Inscriptions

I love it! I didn't read all the chapters (naughty me) but these last few have been great! Update soon!

Reviewer: Crookshanks_Kneazle
Date: 12/13/05 16:25
Chapter: Inscriptions

So, it means 'Against Those Always Pure'? That makes sense...I guess. Would the first two words be flipped in a better translation, or not?

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