Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 03/20/08 19:13
Chapter: One-shot

Well! That WAS quite surprise! Poor Hermione. I guess she was really in love with Severus. . . -sniff-

That was a really well-written story! Of course I had to read through it again after finding out it was actually Ron (or was it? Is it George? That would make a lot of sense, too. . . the whole 'forbidden' thing. . . but I don't think they talk on the street. . . hmmm. . .), and it all is from Ron's point of view! You did such a good job hiding the truth without - for lack of a better word- lying! Congratulations!

Thank you so very much for a wonderful story! Your writing is convincingly emotional, and I really liked the POV.

Reviewer: HrryPttrIzMyLife
Date: 03/11/08 9:51
Chapter: One-shot


Author's Response: How can you even read it??????!!!!???? Just move along if you don't like it.

Reviewer: dousethelights3
Date: 02/17/08 13:57
Chapter: One-shot

Oh my goodnessss!

I was so shocked, gaping like a retarded fish. Now I want to curl up and cry, PMS?

Anyway, it was beautiful, breathtaking, [cue in words to make you feel happy and whole because I'm speachless and don't know how to say how much I love this]

Reviewer: Brunette19
Date: 01/28/08 19:30
Chapter: One-shot

Aww I totally didn't see that coming. Oh my gosh, thats so sweet but so sad at the same time. All I can say is "awww" and that you are an awesome writer.

Reviewer: liveforthedream
Date: 01/22/08 18:11
Chapter: One-shot


Reviewer: RednGold
Date: 01/22/08 4:42
Chapter: One-shot

Oh goodness! Really! you made me cry at the end. Poor Ron and most wretched Herm. I was heartbroken by the end. Your writing was touching indeed.

Reviewer: LoopyLupin111
Date: 01/21/08 16:20
Chapter: One-shot

cooool maaaaan.

Reviewer: binkybye102
Date: 01/19/08 18:28
Chapter: One-shot

I so DID NOT see that coming! Whoo, now i know what a person feels like in the moment of impact with a moving car! Lordy, lordy! lol BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: halfxbloodprincess
Date: 01/19/08 18:09
Chapter: One-shot

That was the most adorable ss/hg fanfic I have ever read! I loved the surprise ending. Amazing work! =]

Reviewer: teresaschultz06
Date: 01/17/08 18:00
Chapter: One-shot

I didn't see that coming!!

that was simply amazing.. I was surprised.

Reviewer: holleb
Date: 12/16/07 0:15
Chapter: One-shot

I definitely did not see that twist coming at the end and have to give you props for that one!!

Reviewer: immortalbeloved
Date: 11/27/07 21:24
Chapter: One-shot

Oh my God! I really didn't see that coming AT ALL! That was really, really good. You really made the hidden strain in the relationship come alive. Overall, excellent! :)

Reviewer: weaslyqueen
Date: 11/22/07 21:16
Chapter: One-shot

poor ron!
omg, that was sooo unexpected!

Reviewer: Bella Cullen
Date: 10/28/07 19:02
Chapter: One-shot

wow, i really was NOT expecting that... that was a little depressing. poor ron.

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 10/08/07 10:36
Chapter: One-shot

hi, i was a bit confused bout the last bit, can u explain? anyway, apart from that it was fab!

Reviewer: lily_green
Date: 10/04/07 18:48
Chapter: One-shot

omg that was SO unexpected..i had to read the last two paragraphs a couple of times to make sure i read it right, but WOAH...i mean just...AMAZING!

Reviewer: luvscharlie
Date: 09/27/07 1:25
Chapter: One-shot

Excellent. Not at all what I expected. You made it so the reader simply could not stop reading. Great job.

Reviewer: freds pet
Date: 09/07/07 9:10
Chapter: One-shot

That was a total shock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't beleave she made him do that I mean oh my god.

Reviewer: daphnebeauty
Date: 09/05/07 16:40
Chapter: One-shot

that was fuckin twisted

Reviewer: purewings
Date: 09/05/07 2:47
Chapter: One-shot

You're a genious! My God, was it really Ron all the time? Very good, the way you describe it through the eyes of Ron, who knows exactly its not him she loves, yet he does everything to please her. Because as he said, war changed them. Brilliant! Congratulations!

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