Well! That WAS quite surprise! Poor Hermione. I guess she was really in love with Severus. . . -sniff-
That was a really well-written story! Of course I had to read through it again after finding out it was actually Ron (or was it? Is it George? That would make a lot of sense, too. . . the whole 'forbidden' thing. . . but I don't think they talk on the street. . . hmmm. . .), and it all is from Ron's point of view! You did such a good job hiding the truth without - for lack of a better word- lying! Congratulations!
Thank you so very much for a wonderful story! Your writing is convincingly emotional, and I really liked the POV.
GROSSSSS!!!! YOU F***ING SICKO!!!!!!!! NASTY!!!!!!! HOW DO YOU EVEN THINK OF SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!???!!!
Author's Response: How can you even read it??????!!!!???? Just move along if you don't like it.
Oh my goodnessss!
I was so shocked, gaping like a retarded fish. Now I want to curl up and cry, PMS?
Anyway, it was beautiful, breathtaking, [cue in words to make you feel happy and whole because I'm speachless and don't know how to say how much I love this]
Aww I totally didn't see that coming. Oh my gosh, thats so sweet but so sad at the same time. All I can say is "awww" and that you are an awesome writer.
Oh goodness! Really! you made me cry at the end. Poor Ron and most wretched Herm. I was heartbroken by the end. Your writing was touching indeed.
I so DID NOT see that coming! Whoo, now i know what a person feels like in the moment of impact with a moving car! Lordy, lordy! lol BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was the most adorable ss/hg fanfic I have ever read! I loved the surprise ending. Amazing work! =]
I didn't see that coming!!
that was simply amazing.. I was surprised.
I definitely did not see that twist coming at the end and have to give you props for that one!!
Oh my God! I really didn't see that coming AT ALL! That was really, really good. You really made the hidden strain in the relationship come alive. Overall, excellent! :)
omg, that was sooo unexpected!
wow, i really was NOT expecting that... that was a little depressing. poor ron.
hi, i was a bit confused bout the last bit, can u explain? anyway, apart from that it was fab!
omg that was SO unexpected..i had to read the last two paragraphs a couple of times to make sure i read it right, but WOAH...i mean just...AMAZING!
Excellent. Not at all what I expected. You made it so the reader simply could not stop reading. Great job.
That was a total shock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't beleave she made him do that I mean oh my god.
that was fuckin twisted
You're a genious! My God, was it really Ron all the time? Very good, the way you describe it through the eyes of Ron, who knows exactly its not him she loves, yet he does everything to please her. Because as he said, war changed them. Brilliant! Congratulations!