Reviewer: mugglegirl
Date: 06/09/05 12:32
Chapter: One-shot

Whoah!! Dark!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: weasley wannabe
Date: 06/07/05 7:59
Chapter: One-shot

wow. amen.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: dark arts master
Date: 05/31/05 13:40
Chapter: One-shot

These are the stories I love. So full of love and passion and pain. A passion and love that you know will never be the same forever even though you want things to change, you want things to be okay. But the whole time, the only thing there is pain and tears. These are the stories we remeber, these are the stories that live forever. These are the stories you can't get out of your head because they refuse to be forgotten. This story is what all story's should be. Pain is love, love is pain, passion is sex, sex is passion, tears are everywhere. Thank you for writing what so many do not have the guts to write!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I really appreciate your feelings on this story, I wanted to bring such strong emotions, and I'm glad to know I managed that.

Reviewer: Miss
Date: 05/23/05 10:13
Chapter: One-shot

The kind of story you don't want to end. The kind of love you wish for everybody. The kind of sex you know is the best. The kind of twist that leaves your heart bleeding.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, so glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: mrs_dmalfoy742
Date: 05/15/05 16:36
Chapter: One-shot

good one! kinda sad :( but good... very shocking!

Reviewer: luna_the_marvellous
Date: 05/07/05 18:56
Chapter: One-shot

WOW, I totally didn't see that one coming. That was fantastic. Who knew...?

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Inspireroflove9191
Date: 05/07/05 16:20
Chapter: One-shot

Aaaaawwwwwwww...... I feel sorry for Ron. I have two questions. One: Is Ron married to her or doing anything else in his life? Two: How did Severus die? Good story.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) No, Ron is not married to her. She comes to his apartment every week. Severus died in the war.

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 05/01/05 10:48
Chapter: One-shot

Dark, creepy, heartbreaking. The end tore me apart, I didn't see it coming then it just smacked me in the face. It's terrible for both of them, it was so sad, more for him really. And then the bit about the lock of hair. Write more soon. This fully deserves 10. Poor Ron, I'm assuming it's Ron btw...

Author's Response: Thank you! :) It is Ron, and I agree, it's terrible for both, but Ron is also doing it because he wants to, so in a way, both are using each other. ;)

Reviewer: kinaya_aqua
Date: 04/30/05 12:46
Chapter: One-shot

Wow! Brilliant twist at the end, I got a bit suspicious with the paragraph about fancying her and maturing, but still a slap in the face! Good background as well, so 10 outta 10 - keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) So glad you like it, and I'm happy you could see the little clues I left throughout the story. ;)

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