I knew that didn't sound like Severus... but whoa! My stomach is in my throat right now...
WOW! I was hooked from the first sentence. Loving the POV you wrote this in and then BAM! THE ENDING?!?! I LOVED IT! What an incredible twist, I never saw it coming. Excellent! Great job!
what a brilliant fic!unbelievable twist at the end...i had to read it twice!but it was fabulous. well done!:)
This is extraordinary!
I looove it.
The funny thing is at some points I thought it was Snape being OOC, but it was just you being brilliant, hehe.
Good Lord, I am so impressed.
Bravo!
Aww thats so...sad...
:D I didn't see that!!! ^^ Good story!
OMG. First of all, wow! I had NO IDEA!!! Second of all, great writing! It really kept my attention, and you could see the passion, without it seeming tawdry! But the end...amazing...my mouth actually fell open.
WOAH! Brilliant twist at the end, never saw that one coming! =O
WOAH! Brilliant twist at the end, never saw that one coming! =O
WOAH! Brilliant twist at the end, never saw that one coming! =O
woah...i REALLY didn't see that coming, i loved it! it is cleverly and skilfully written, and it works well as a one shot, congrats!
ak
Wow! Good writing, I really wasn't expecting that. It's a fave. (:
Wow.... I didn't see that coming but the beauty and originality of it all completely blew me away. I wonder why a one-shot was getting so many reviews and now I know.
Absolutely brilliant, down to the last word and I think you forever have my respect as a writer. 10/10, without a second thought.
-Beauty Fades
OMJ that was very shocking to find out who it really is.. aww poor Ron
Wow, what a shock! No, I deffinately didn't see that one coming. I love shock endings. Great work.
Well! That WAS quite surprise! Poor Hermione. I guess she was really in love with Severus. . . -sniff-
That was a really well-written story! Of course I had to read through it again after finding out it was actually Ron (or was it? Is it George? That would make a lot of sense, too. . . the whole 'forbidden' thing. . . but I don't think they talk on the street. . . hmmm. . .), and it all is from Ron's point of view! You did such a good job hiding the truth without - for lack of a better word- lying! Congratulations!
Thank you so very much for a wonderful story! Your writing is convincingly emotional, and I really liked the POV.
~Katie