Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 12/05/08 23:03
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

I think this is an excellent study of P.P. I like how you don't sugarcoat it to make us pity Peter (I find him despicable and don't think any pathos-laden prose could inspire me otherwise, anyway). Also, I thought it was interesting how Peter refers to James in his mind as "Potter"-- he tries to distance himself from memories of friendship? That was my take, anyway... Love your writing, as always! :)
~Rhi

P.S. Whatever happened to In Storm and Sunshine and like, half your fics? :( *sobs quietly*

Reviewer: MaraudersAffair
Date: 05/17/07 20:05
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

I really love Peter fics -- for some reason his character just strikes me, especially when fan fic writers try to explain his reasoning. Great work! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, MA. I've always been fascinated by his character, too, wondering what made him turn to the dark side. I'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate your review! ~GG

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 04/30/06 23:24
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

well, it is interesting to get inside wormtail's head for a while, even tho i perish the thought of staying there for long. so...peter in luv w/ lily? that makes all 4 marauders were in luv w/ lily in som fanfic or another. james is in luv w/ lily in canon, there r numerous fics where sirius is chasing after lily (usually on a dare from james or something like that), remus is apparently also in luv w/ lily since the 3rd movie (even in my fanfic), and now u've added one for peter. anyway, good job!

Author's Response: yeah it just makes sense to me...especially since he's the most unlikely to ever get the proverbial girl and all...it would explain a lot about his bitterness towards james, IMO. i'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: redvelvetcanopy
Date: 06/14/05 7:58
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

I love the way you describe this from Peter's perspective--his justification for the betrayal to suit his own needs for power within Voldemort's ranks. That is very insightful. I started to read the poem at the beginning as was really impressed with your writing--ha ha--till I got to the end and realized I should credit Shakespeare! Sad, that through it all, be blamed James. Indeed, what a traitor.

Author's Response: LoL sorry for leading you on like that... And heaps thanks for your compliments! *hug*

Reviewer: Only_Slightly_Absurd
Date: 05/18/05 19:45
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

I like the way you portrayed Peter... very realistic and enjoyable to read-- in sort of a dark way. His feelings are ones that everyone can identify with, to some degree, which makes him seem like a real scum-bag. Nice job.

Author's Response: thank ya ma'am. i was actually going for sympathy/disgust, but i think you're entirely right. glad you enjoyed =)

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 05/11/05 10:15
Chapter: A Most Toad-Spotted Traitor

You know I love this! So clever and a really good insight into Peter's 'fall'.

Author's Response: thanks, i always did wonder how peter went from being ok to being---awful! so this was quite fun for me :D

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