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Reviews For Lethal Attraction

Name: Ashlynne (Signed) · Date: 07/12/10 4:06 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
oh you must update

Name: Eponine (Signed) · Date: 06/20/05 20:47 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
This was my first time ever reading a D/G fic, and I have to say that this prologue threw me off a little bit. I really liked the mystery of it all, but it got to a point half way through where I just couldn't figure it out. After thinking for a little bit, I finally understood, but for next time I suggest making it a little clearer. There were some puncuation erros, especially with puncuation in quoation marks. I suggest this thread in the beta forums http://www.fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=3684 written by Alexis Taylor. It's very helpful on that subject. You should also remember that only one person should speak in a paragraph; even when two do speak in one paragraph, it's extremely rare. I really liked the new idea of Platform 8 2/4, but I suggest changing it to Platform 8 1/2 because it's the same thing, except a little less confusing. I really enjoyed your writing style. It's complicated and simple at the same time. Great story! ~Eponine

Name: starlettem1 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/05 14:26 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
I have to admit, you caught me off guard with that prologue there. I didn't expect those two characters to be in it and i cannot wait to find out who trhey are. I definately got lost wiht some of the names in the middle, (Daphne and Matthew), but I'm sure I'll understand it all later on

Name: TiffanyRuth (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 16:04 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
Great plot, it brought tears to my eyes. *10*

Name: SorcressSkye (Signed) · Date: 05/09/05 20:37 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
I love it so far. Do write more. A forbidden love, makes it all the more interesting to read!

Name: Miss_moony (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 17:15 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
Amazing! Simply incredulous. I love the way this story is turning out. Write more soon!

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 04/30/05 18:32 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
young love.. so strong! So are these two ancestors of Ginny and Draco? or descendants... tho she wouldn't be a Weasley then... you've got my attention now!

Name: paintball chick407 (Signed) · Date: 04/29/05 21:34 · For: Prologue: Heartbreak
i like it, very diffrent. ahhh young love, mean parents... what doesn't this story have?

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