Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 12/11/05 11:35
Chapter: Two

I like this story and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 12/11/05 11:28
Chapter: One

Ooooh, I thinkSirius has a crush on Sarah! Great piece of writing, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RoverDroverTiger
Date: 09/17/05 20:06
Chapter: Two

Good Story!!! Sorry I'm not in to writing long reviews write know so bye.

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 07/08/05 12:59
Chapter: Two

wow what an excellant chapter. sirius and sarah=cute!! Hee Hee james is (hopefully) going with Lily!! so thrilled!! well please keep the chapter coming!! this is a great chapter!! i love Sarah and morgan's challenge!! Yay sarah stopped being shy!!! this is an excellant story , please give us the next chapter soon!!!

Author's Response: Yay! Another review! Thanks so much! And you think she's standing up for herself now, you just wait, lol. Chapter three is waiting for approval, (today is july 12) And yes, james and lily will eventually go out, he he. I was just wondering what you all thought about Sarah? Did I make it believable that she was really a part of it? Anyway, thanks again for teh review, and thanks everyone who gave me over eight hundred reads on just these two chapters!!!

Reviewer: earthsangel01
Date: 06/16/05 11:19
Chapter: Two

great chapter... i wonder what the marauders do to Regulus and Snape... Sarah gat over her shyness enough to stand up for herself and ask Sirius to the dance!!!!

Author's Response: I know, I wasn't going to have her do it, but it was neccessary, lol. Wait around, you'll get to see some of the smaller time pranks later! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks big for the review!!

Reviewer: Raven Flames
Date: 06/11/05 17:06
Chapter: One

wonderful first story. sarah seems rather timid though 0o; could explain a bit on why sirius stayed single?

Author's Response: Everyone makes Sirius out to have been the ladies man, and from what Jo says about him, I kind of find it believable. :) Sarah is timid _now_, lol. Chpater two shoudl be up soon, thanx for your review!!

Reviewer: earthsangel01
Date: 05/01/05 17:48
Chapter: One

great start

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